Two shots: Love meets or not?? #2 updt at pg3 - Page 5

Hina, you are an excellent and fabulous writer.

i read your other os too: whiskey lullaby and kal ho na ho.

The one that touched me most was whiskey lullaby but also made me mad. You know i have read lots of os,ss or ff of many different shows and their jodis. BUT, I HAVE TO ADMIT WHISKEY LULLABY was the only one that made me teary-eyed and really touched my heart but was mad too bec the way it ended and especially how jay knew aakash/aryan was alive. so, udayveer and manyata died bec of these two evlls.


if you write more in Maanveer, please pm me.

Originally posted by: ashpat

Hina, you are an excellent and fabulous writer.

i read your other os too: whiskey lullaby and kal ho na ho.

The one that touched me most was whiskey lullaby but also made me mad. You know i have read lots of os,ss or ff of many different shows and their jodis. BUT, I HAVE TO ADMIT WHISKEY LULLABY was the only one that made me teary-eyed and really touched my heart but was mad too bec the way it ended and especially how jay knew aakash/aryan was alive. so, udayveer and manyata died bec of these two evlls.


if you write more in Maanveer, please pm me.

heyy thanks fr wrtng 2nd part,it was lovelyy!!!!!😊😊

Hey
How you? 😊
Amazing, superb update 👏
Loved it loads ⭐️
Extremely happy that Manveer are together
Thanks for the pm 😊
N sorry for the late reply

Originally posted by: pia.raha

heyy thanks fr wrtng 2nd part,it was lovelyy!!!!!😊😊

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey
How you? 😊
Amazing, superb update 👏
Loved it loads ⭐️
Extremely happy that Manveer are together
Thanks for the pm 😊
N sorry for the late reply

Hello, I'm fine. =D
Thank you for the comment. Better late than never, right!! ;)