ArHi FF: The Same Coin#4

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#971

Sem, Just caught up with the update! So quick comment b4 I doze off..

you CANNOT just casually mention ripped Tshirt in one sextence and stahp!!!

I need proper sExplanation dammit!

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#972

Was interesting to read about Pushmi-pullyu. Learnt something new. Like i always say, your stories are an intelligent read. I get to learn quite a few things.

The best thing about this story is how real it is. I can relate to the characters and their emotions. I can see a bit of me in them. The relatibility factor is your forte i think.

Khushi's thoughts on her relationship were perfectly written. Something which all of us have gone through at some point of our life.

The fear of future, lack of communication and insecurities came out so well.

I absolutely love the bonus convos you give.

Semanti, there are very authors who write such real stuff that one can see them self as a character in their story and you are surely one of them.

I will really miss this story when it ends.

Edited by IronButterfly - 12 years ago

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clairvoyance

@clairvoyance

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#973

awesomely written especially the dialogues.

the bonus at the end rocks.. these gossip and spreading them. who did what and with whom has been written in true contrast with a real college scenario

Hope arnav and Khushi go back discussing how even wen they fought earlier both wanted to embrace the other one

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#974

Comment Part 7:

And now, the part that seems to be a topic of speculation currently.

What does that ripped shirt really mean?

Here are my guesses, in no particular order:

a) It means nothing.

b) He ripped her shirt while she was teaching him how to dance and he stumbled.

c) It happened during a hot make out session after the lakeside cafe/coffee shop.

d) It happened when he held on to her when she almost fell of his bike.

e) It happened during the removal of 'Kumari' from her name.

All I know is that it better not be 'e'. because that would be unforgivable ramanchi!

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#975

Ek dum jhakaas update...the trio's talk was hilarious...poor Akash i just love him...n next Khushi...why dint Arnav accept her gift...Payal had a bhabhi-devar moment...lol
N whatsapp convo was THE BEST.

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#976

Res before the thread runs out. Be back soon to update this comment

Edited:

Ah the troubled skies make an appearance. I do understand Khushi's insecurity. It can be frustrating to not know what the other person is thinking. Come on now Raizada, time to take a few minutes from the PDA and the rather physical expression of his ...love? It may not be as deep as love yet, but it seems like it is rather close...given how much they respect each other as individuals despite disagreeing with the other..It was just a shirt (It was the first thing I gifted my husband too...men...it's so difficult to shop for them :P). Or was it?

I loved the Raizada siblings banter. And I think I positively guffawed at the at least one of us should date a Gupta part...Howlarious. And Akash is like so many boys I know...so clued out. No wonder Shahira is having fun at his expense. Oh and I wish Arnav knew he was part of fan fiction - then he would know that if the choice was just one of the brothers dating a Gupta girl - it was always going to be him and the older Gupta :D

That said, your story isn't fan-fiction at all, Sem. I think you've graduated beyond that so quickly! You could name any of them anything and that would take away nothing from the story. Keep writing. I wish a lot more for you in the future when it comes to writing!

Edited by meera30 - 12 years ago

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Natalia

@Natalia

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#977

Poor Khushi, and Poor us, short update.

BUt shows very well regarding KHushi's insecurity.

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#978

Loved the update...

The way Khushi is scared for the way their relationship may go, was written very nicely...
Arnav, I always thought would turn out more difficult as a character for me to understand... coz I can see him only when you peek into his mind or thru' someone else's eyes... so it limits are thinking... i would love to hear more from Arnav's side of the story as to why is so introvert...

Also loved the trio Cullens cousins... they are awesome...
Akash was literally a drama queen.. 😆

also like other readers i too want the back story of the "ripped shirt"

waiting for the update today 😊

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khushboo

@khushboo1234

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#979

everyone knows about arnav and khushi being a couple..even the first year ones..aakash ko kaise nahi pta...he is studying in the same college na..

kuhshi bought a tshirt for arnav..but why arnav didnt accept the t shirt...they both r in a relationship..and itz okay if khushi bought something for arnav...

and the bonuses r the best...a and k both need to be careful in public places...they cant keep their hands off each other.😃

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#980

I must say i adore dis simple , uncomplicated Akash.. a complete contrast to V.. :-D:-D:-D
Glad things r slowing fallin in place wid her n NK..
Payal definetly n totally is smitten by the Sawhay guy. the way shez blushing when his name is taken tells it all :-):-):-)
aand nw cmg to our mst fav. couple.. Along wid Khushi i too ws vry enthusiastic when she bought Arnav the gift n ws indeed disappointed when he refused.. did the surprise baffel him?
I feel Khushiz apprehensions are misplaced. Dint Arnav console her the other day dat they wud sort out everythng. Hez surely nt evading the topic bt I agree that hvng small talks abt their future is vry assuring.. Sigh!!! when ws r hero so vocal wid his emotions??
Looking frwd fr the nxt 1 Semanti :-D:-D:-D