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*** a tarey os ***(one shot)
~~~ek khoobsurat mohabbat ki kahani ~~~aao sunao dastan tumhe mere doston , ek sachi mohabbat ki , jismein pyaar to hai aur usko paane ki tadap bhi hai ... par zindagi ko manjoor nahi hai unka saath ,
ek ladki thi bahut pyaari , bahut achhi , par kismat ne kuch aise khel khela uske saath ki toot gayi vo banke ek adhoori pyaas ...
( she believed in love , true love , ... one day by a wrong no. , or may be d right no. she talked 2 a stranger - rey ... and they talked again n again , )
unmein roz baatein hone lagi thi , jaane kaise dor ek duje ki aor khichne lagi thi ... ahista ahista dosti hui aur jaane kab vo gehri hoti chali gayi , shayad anjaan the jaankar bhi dono ki bina dekhe he ek dusre ko pyaar karne lage the dono .. dheere dheere sache pyaar ka ishaar hone laga tha ...
par khuda ne bhi unko test karne ka dil bana liya tha ...
pehle to laya vo dono ko kareeb ...ek din vo mile par pehchaan phir bhi na paaye ek dusre ko ...
ek duje ke kareeb aane ka unki dhadkano ko ehsaas hua , par vo phir bhi the bekhabar ...
ab qubool karne lage the dono apni mohabbat ki dastaan ko , aur ek duje ke liye apne beintehaan pyaar ko
aur isiliye
ek din dono ne milne ka decide kiya ... waqt aur din dono ne decide kiya .. par iss beech uss ladki ke saath kuch aisa hua ... ki uss ladki ki zindagi he badal gayi ...
aur uss din jab unhone milna tha , tab vo ladka pahuncha uss jagah , pura ready hoke us ladki ko propose karne ke liye ... par intezaar kiya usne bahut par aayi na vo ladki usse milne ko .. bahut call bhi kiya par javab nahi aaya phir bhi koi . bas aaya ek letter uske liye ..
*** letter ***
2 rey - hum dono ek dusre ke dil ki baatein bahut acchhe se jaante hain , aur aaj ka day hamare liya kitna special tha ... but i m sorry ki main nahi aapayi kyunki kal ke din mujhe kuch aisa pata chala hai ki jiske meri zindagi ya meri feelings ka koi matlab nahi hai ... i m sorry rey par ab hum kabhi nahi mil sakte kyunki mere HEART MAIN HOLE HAI ... aaj tak maine sabse pehle aapko mere songs sunaye hain , aaj ye mera likha hua last song bhi aap he ko likh de rahi hoon
( a new poem cum song written by ur moni , do tell me howz it ok😛😛)
aitbaar , aitbaar , ...
kaise karun main aitbaar ..
aitbaar , aitbaar , .. kaise karun main aitbaar ...
kaise karun main tumse pyaar ,
haa kaise karun main tumse pyaar
toote hue mere dil ke tukdo se kaise dun main tujhko pyaar
inn andhero main meri zindagi ke ,
kaise dun main roshni , tumhe savero ki,
jab mujhe khud pe aitbaar nahi ,
apni zindagi pe vishwas nahi ,
to kaise thamun main tumhara haath ,
kaise thamun main tumhara haath
jab main khud dard se sehami hui hun ,
darr se phir kaapne lag jati hun
to in kaampte hue haathon se kaise thamun main tumhara haath
kaise sajaun main sapne tumhare sang ,
jab meri khud ki zindagi he
ek dard bhara sapna hai , jo kisi bhi pal toot sakta hai ...
kaise de dun main tumhe apna dard ...
kaise apni adhoori mohabbat ko ,
aane dun main tumhari khushiyon ke raaste main ...
jab har pal dua tumhari khushiyon ki maangti hun ,
to kaise tumhare dard ki vajah main ban jaun
...kaise kar lun main tumse pyaar ,
kaise karun main apni zindagi pe aitbaar , kaise ...
shayad ab aap samajh paayein ki main chaah ke bhi apse pyaar nahi kar sakti rey , chah kar bhi nahi kyunki meri zindagi he mujhse nafrat karti hai aur mera saath nahi dena chahti to phir main kaise aapka saath de sakti hun , i m sorry but now we can never ever meet each other
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(tears were flowing continuously from d eyes of a shocked rey , he was in utter shock ...now .. and his heart just realized d value of someone actually d value of d most precious person of his life ..
he was shouting at d top of his voice - TAAANI , TAAANI I LOVE U , I LOVE U TAANI , I LOVE U ... PLSS MEET ME ONCE ... I LOVE U , I CANT LIVE WITHOUT U TAANI , (his legs were being weak and he sat down on d road n cried a lot that day , cried n cried ... sobbing badly )
d new day arises but not 4 2 pure souls who were deeply in pain n crying ... rey was still in memories of how they laughed n cried and shared everything on phones with each other ... how they used 2 talk day n nights , how they used 2 sing songs , and share everything on phones and how he used 2 scold taani when she got ill and dont take care of herself ... while remembering those memories his eyes caught something , ya d address written on d envelope of letter .. after searching whole day he found that address and reached there ... it was d address of d hospital where taani was admitted ...
he asked on d reception , where is taani admitted ????
nurse - please tell d full name ??? there r 2 patients name taani
rey - oh god , mujhe uska pura naam to pata he nahi
( aur ussi waqt uske paas se ek stretcher jaata hai , jispe taani uski taani hoti hai , their hands touched again ...sending lovely vibes in their heart , and their hearts skipped a beat .. and as rey turned taani on d strether unconscious has gone forward and he couldnt see her face as nurses were coming in between his view ... )
he remember while hurting that she has a hole in heart
so he say that 2 receptionist - rey - ab haan uske heart main hole hai , vo taani , meri taani kahan hai?
( while a lone tear escape his eyes )
nurse - unhe to abhi abhi emergency ward main leke jaa rahe hain , dekhiyo vo jaa rahi ...
(PLS OPEN D FOLLOWING SONG LINK IN OTHER TAB )
now listening this rey felt as if his life , his soul , his love , his heart , his everything is going away from him .. and he ran like a mad person 2 her , so fastly in a try 2 catch his life ...or d d most precious thing .. but unfortunately till he reach they have taken her inside ward ...he could just see d door closing .. and he go there and watch her all crying but praying 4 her recovery deep inside his heart ...
but then he saw swayam - her brother , ( jiske baarein main taani hamesha bataya karti thi ...and taayam were very friendly with each other ... but they were orphans but their parents who died 1 year ago have left them with a huge property and taani ne swayam ko rey ke baarein main sab kuch bataya hua the ,and ye bhi ki vo kal milne wale the ... infact taani ka vo letter swayam ne he send kiya tha )
rey - tum taani ke bhai swayam ho na
swayam (who was also broken n crying )- haan , tum kaun
rey - main reyansh ..
swayam - han taani mujhe tumhare baarein main bataya karti thi ...par tum yahan kaise
rey - vo letter pe address mila to vahan se pata chala ki taani yahan hai ( while crying ) main taani se bahut pyaar karta hun , aur uska saath kisi bhi haal main kabhi bhi nahi chod sakta
swayam(with wet eyes ) - taani bhi tumse bahut pyaar karti hai .. apni jaan se bhi zyada
rey - main jaanta hun ...
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** after sometime **
docs came out
rey - how is she now
doc - she is stable now ...but we cant say anything until her major surgery ...
aap dono abhi unse mil sakte hain , but after 3 hours unki surgery hai , we cant late more now
swayam - rey tum jao , usse mil lo , vo tumse milke khush ho jayegi ... uski last wish tum he the ,.
and he goes in with teary eyes ..
taani take out her oxygen mask , looking at other side without seeing rey and say - bhai agar aap rotlu jaise shakal leke aaye ho na to mujhe aapse nahi milna , aap jante hai na ki main aapko hamesha smile karte hue dekhna chahti hun and then she turned
(OPEN D FOLLOWING SONG LINK IN OTHER TAB PLS )
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FJhon-0h834rey (tears flowing down her cheeks ) - taaniii
while taani is shock hearing that same voice after such a long time , d same voice which relieves her heart n soul ..
taani - reyyy (starts sobbing )
rey immediately comes n wipes her tears while sitting beside her ..
taani - aap yahan kyun aaye ho rey , aap mujhse milne kyun aaye ho .,
rey - KYUNKI I LOVE U TAANI , I TRULY HEARTILY LOVE U ... AND WANNA BE WITH U N ONLY U TILL MY LAST BREATHE , I CANT LIVE WITHOUT U
d world stopped 4 taani , d 3 magical words which she heard just now was like d heaven 4 her ...
tani(while crying ) - i love u too rey , i love u too but nahi rey , hamara saath hona nahi likha hamari kismat main ...hamari zindagiyan ek dusre ke liye nahi bani , nahi bane hum ek dusre ke liye kyuki meri zindagi to kisi bhi pal khatam ho sakti , par aapke liya ek naaya safar , nayi raah , nayi manzil intzaar kar rahi hai , so pls jayiye aap ...
rey - nahi taani , aisa nahi hai , tum ho to he ye zindagi hai , tum ho to he har khushi hai , tum se he dil dhadakta hai taani , tum se har manzil hai , tum se he har sapna hai , tum se he main hoon aur mera wajood , najaane kab kaise ,tumse itnaa pyaar , itni mohabbat ho gayi par ab ye jaanta hoon ki ...
par ab vo khuda chahe is mohabbat ko poora kare ya na kare , par main tumhara saath ek pal ke liye bhi nahi chod sakta ... ek pal ke liye bhi nahi , aur ab tumhe meri kasam hai taani jo tumne mujhe apne se duur kiya to ..
taani - rey ye kya kar diya aapne , kyun , kyun aarahe ho aap mere aur paas ki duur jaane ka rasta he kho jaaye pleasee dont do this rey ...
before she could speak further , rey kissed her on her cheeks , he kept kissing her , loving her fully and now she couldnt stop her ... she also lost control on herself and get lost in that beautiful moment ...
both loved each other wishing that timp get stop , and their life bless them and their eternal love forever n ever .. both got unite ...by their most beautiful purest true love .. they were living that moments of their love fully as they may or may not come back , while there was a fear in their heart of loosing each other ... but now their true love has overtaken this fear because love is higher n greater than life or death
after 3 hours
taani was taken 4 majorsurgery
while reyam were praying 4 her ... every second
rey (while crying n sobbing and begging like a small kid ) - hey taani ke krishna ji , pleasee meri taani ko thik kar do ... aapko uske pyaar aur vishwas ka vaasta pls taani ko thik kar do , usse ye zindagi ka gift de do ...chahe to meri saanse , meri zindagi bhi uske naam kar do par please meri ko ek nayi zindagi de do , i promise ki main aapse kuch nahi maanguga , bas aap meri taani ko theek kar do , i cant live without her , please meri ye dua qubool kar lo pleasee ...
swayam (while tears flowing down her cheeks ) - hey krishna ji , aapne mere ma - papa ko tu mujhse cheen liya par please meri choti se pari taani ko to mujhse duur mat karo , vo meri har khushi hai ...
vo he to mere jeene ki vajah hai please meri choti se pari ko bilkul theek kar do , please krishna ji please
usse apne pyaar ke saath rehna ka , apni mohabbat jeene ka ek mauka de do ... vo aaj tak sabko khushiyan deti aayi hai ab aapki baari meri choti se pari ko ye zindagi aur khushiyan dene ki ...
after sometime , ot door opens while reyam's hearts were beating at d fastest rate ... with a wish 4 taani every nanosecond
docs came out
rey - doc kya hua , taani ,. kaise hai , ab vo thik hai na ????
swayam - haan , ab usse koi takleef to nahi , vo thik hai na ? boliye na doc , kya hua , meri choti se pari kaise hai ab ??????????
docs (smiling )- operation was successful , vaise aisa complicated operation successful only 1% cases main hota hai , aapki duaon ne karishma kar diya ... aapki pari taani ab thik hai ... but abhi hamein unhe observation ke liye 4 hours tak rakhna hai
both took a deep breathe of relief
but dono ki aankho se aansoo abhi bhi nahi ruk rahe the
they hugged each other ... khushi ke namkeen par meethe aansoo the ye , kisi ko kho ke paana bahut mushkil hota hai but thanks 2 sabke pyaare krishna ji ki ek bhai swayam ne apni choti se pari cum behan taani ko vapis paaya , to ek aashiq rey ne apna sacha pyaar vapis paaya , jo unki zindagi aur khushiyan sang laya
phir kya tha
taani started recovering but taarey romance never stopped .. aur rukta bhi kaise zindagi ki value jo jaani thi ... pyaar ko khokar paana kisi miracle se kam nahi hota aur sabko ye naseeb nahi hota
taarey married after some months ... reyam handle d business together .. after some years hamare swayam ko bhi pyaar ho gaya , sharon se aur un dono ko milvaya hamare taarey aur unke baby girl twinkle ne
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i m sorry if i bore or disappoint anyone ... but pls friends do like n comment from heart ... as i took 3 hours 2 write it ... so pls friends hit like and do comment as well ... 😳 plss 4 me n my hardwork😛😛😛
lots of love
moni
tc , keep smiling always 😊
NOTE - ðŸ˜1 REQUEST 2 ALL OF U , PLEASE FRIENDS PLEASE PRAY 4 MY MAMAJI THAT HE GET WELL SOON AND STAY WELL ALWAYS AND NEVER HAVE THIS CANCER DISEASE AGAIN ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜. HIS RADIOTHERAPY IS GOING ON BUT HE IS EMOTIONALLY BROKEN FROM INSIDE AS ITS BEING A LOTS OF SIDE EFFECTS OF RADIOTHERAPY .ðŸ˜.HIS HALF SIDE OF FACE HAS DARKEN . AND MOREOVER THAT HE HAS NOT EATEN ANYTHING SINCE 1 OR 2 MONTHS , ON LIQUID DIET ONLY .ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ I CANT SEE HIM LIKE THIS , ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ PLS U ALL ALSO PRAY 4 HIM ALONG WITH ME PLEASE ðŸ˜
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