Does destiny lead to love, Fan -Fic

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I am new to this forum, but very excited to see how much potential this serial has got. Here a small attempt made by me to write a fan-fic on the characters of this serial.

All characters same as in the serial.

She sat there, Motionless, unable to say anything. Love gives pain, but it would hurt this much that she has never imagined. Downstairs were the preparations of her wedding going on. She knew he loved someone else, but did not know that he would also leave her friendship. Leave her at the time she needed him the most. The tears had completely ruined the writing on the paper crumpled in her hand:

I have to go niyati, I cannot do this.

Hope you forgive me niyati

Shourya

She looked at her krishnaji idol. The idol that represented shourya for her. Her friend, her love, her God.

A loud sigh from the opposite room, reminded her of her dadisa. She ran to the room, knowing well enough that dadisa, should not come to know about this. Her health was one of the reasons this marriage was taking place. She went deep into her thoughts

Flashback:

Dadisa ill health. Family's decision for their quick marriage. Shorya and niyati desperate attempts to get out of this unwanted wedding. Shourya's promise to marry her only for time being, until her dadisa gets well. Shourya leaving without even meeting her, leaving a note only a note.

A slight tear escaped her eye and fell on her dadisa's hand. She was fast asleep under the effect of medicines. She knew nobody, who could help her.

What will happen when everybody comes to know about shourya's departure? What will happen to her dadisa, she will die of this shock. All these thoughts made niyati more and more tensed. What can she do? She cannot become part of this family, it was a fact and no one can change that.

The hand that was holding her became tighter.. ;she looked over and gasped… her dadisa was sweating and her eyes wide open trying to say something.

She turned to call someone, when the strong tug on her hand made her turn around. She saw her gasping for breath, her voice choking. Sorry beta. Niyati's breath struck in her throat. She had left her forever. No, this could not happen. She ran downstairs, tripping, falling she made her way only to faint at the bottom step of the stair.

What will happen next?

Hope it was at least average.Comments and criticisms are welcome.

Until then

chat

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Posted: 18 years ago
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tat wuz gud..plz..cont..soon...❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hhm good start 😉 ...maybe you can your own imagination...so not follow real story completely but some deviations...some new touches are welcome 😉 ...wel done

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