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Posted: 11 years ago
jhor ka jhatka..bahut zor se laga..
Utne nahi toh kitne chote hai..??
And u r discussing my stories?? Really? Mujhe bhi toh ap sab ke views batao..:)


Mere bete ko A day.. Pasand hai aur beti ko musical pasand hai
Dono read nahi karte par hum baate karte rahete hai
Meri beti ko bhi simple sweet story achi lagti hai
Main jitne ff read karti hoo, vo dono sab ki baate karte rahete hai aur kabhi kabhi to muje pareshan kar dete hai...😉
Edited by sheetalvasa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
jhor ka jhatka..bahut zor se laga..
Utne nahi toh kitne chote hai..??
And u r discussing my stories?? Really? Mujhe bhi toh ap sab ke views batao..:)


Mere bete ko A day.. Pasand hai aur beti ko musical pasand hai
Dono read nahi karte par hum baate karte rahete hai
Meri beti ko bhi simple sweet story achi lagti hai
Main jitne ff read karti hoo, vo dono sab ki baate karte rahete hai aur kabhi kabhi to muje pareshan kar dete hai...😉

whats their age?
Itne din apne mujhe ullu banaya? :-(
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonameet

jhor ka jhatka..bahut zor se laga..
Utne nahi toh kitne chote hai..??

And u r discussing my stories?? Really? Mujhe bhi toh ap sab ke views batao..:)




Mere bete ko A day.. Pasand hai aur beti ko musical pasand hai
Dono read nahi karte par hum baate karte rahete hai
Meri beti ko bhi simple sweet story achi lagti hai
Main jitne ff read karti hoo, vo dono sab ki baate karte rahete hai aur kabhi kabhi to muje pareshan kar dete hai...😉

whats their age?
Itne din apne mujhe ullu banaya? :-(


Main sapne me bhi aapko ullu banana soch nahi sakti
Baat sirf itni thi...aapne kabhi pucha nahi aur maine bataya nahi!
Edited by sheetalvasa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa





Main sapne me bhi aapko ullu banana soch nahi sakti
Baat sirf itni thi...aapne kabhi pucha nahi aur maine bataya nahi!

still..
Anyways..i do not ask personal stuff as many ppl here arnt comfertable in answering. So i let them decide..ke how much they want to share/reveal..:-)
Edited by Shonameet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

"bechari..meri janglee billi.. Kitna darr gai.. Wo bhi ek Nakli cockroach se.."
Thats it! She looked at him sharply. Her eyes spiting fire. And he was totally satisfied with her reaction.

*****

"What..? He kept that cockroach in ur lunch box..?" ..meera asked..disgusted with the thought only.
"chiii..yuk.." ..pinky too mirrored meera's expression.
Geet nodded making a crying face..
"ab bolo..bahut tarfdari kar rahe the na tum dono..uss pagal bandar kii..?" ..geet taunted, reffering to their suggetion of making friends with him.
"wait a minute..hum uski tarafdari nahi kar rahe the..ok! And usne ye cockroch wala prank kiya..kyunki tumne bhi uski book chupai thi.." ..meera reminded her.
"u mean its all my fault..haina? Aur usse pehle usne jo kiya uska kya..han?" ..geet fought back instantly.
Pinky & meera exchanged a knowing look and shook their heads as it was useless to argue on this point with geet.
"aise toh..it will go on forever! Na tu chup baithegi... Na wo haar maanega..!" ..told pinky.
"So..?? Come to the point directly.." ..geet said in irritation.
"there is only one solution.." ..meera replied.
"and whats that..?" geet asked raising her brows..curiously.
"Ignor him..!!!" ..meera & pinky said in one voice.

*****

"tune achha nahi kiya yar.." adi told maan, refering to what he did with geets lunch.
"and what about her? Usne jo kiya..wo thik kiya..? Today coz of her..i got the punishment even after completing my assignment..!" ..maan questioned him back. He didnt have any regrats of doing what he did..she deservs it!
"but.. still yar..kisika lunch kharab karna..it was a really bad idea! Tu aur kuch kar sakta tha.." ..adi showed his disapproval.
"Chill yar..wo janglee billi ko na..koi farak nahi padta..toh tu kyun itni tention le raha hai..?? Dekhna wo toh already revenge plan kar rahi hogi.." ..maan told him..as he was sure that he would be facing the Angery janglee billi very soon.

*****

Maan was mentally ready to face the attack of his janglee billi. He was well prepared knowing that she wont sit back peacefully untill she answers him back!

He was actually looking forward to her next plan of revenge. He saw her lost in thoughts deeply...and teased her..
"kya hua..? Janglee billi..aur itni shaant baithi hai..? ..ohh..i forgot.. Lunch nahi kiya na..energy hi nahi hai..haina.." he said with a teasing smirk..to provok her.

Geet was about to answer back..but stoped seeing meera shaking her head..signaling her to not to react on his teasing comments. She closed her eyes to controll her anger and tried to ignor him.

Maan waited & waited for her next move..but suprisingly..she didnt do anything..! He wondered what was going on in that little devil head..as she was oddly quite!
He noticed that she was avoiding him. "Is she still upset about the lunch thing..?"..he thought as he remembered adi's words.
"sach me kuch jyada ho gaya kya..?" ..this thought crossed his mind for a second..but he instantly brushed it away.

*****

Rest of the classes went without much happening..as geet avoided him compeletly.
Finally.. the last bell rang..indicating that the school was over.

Maan reached in the parking area in the school ground..with his friends. He moved towards his cycle..when adi called him.. "maan.." and pointed at something. Maan followed his gaze..
"oh..shit..! But how..aaj subh hi toh.." ..maan started but stoped mid way as he realised something..
"Ohh..toh ye chal raha tha tumhare dimag me. Not bad janglii billi.." ..he thought smiling.

continued om next page..

Edited by Shonameet - 6 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Adi called him and pointed at his cycle. Maan followed his gaze and saw that the front tire of his cycle was punctured.
"shit..! But hows..aaj subh hi toh.." ..maan started but stoped mid way as he realised something..
"ohh..toh ye chal raha tha tumhare dimag me.. Not bad..janglee billi.."..he thought, smiling. He instantly looked around for her and his smile turned into a naughty smirk, seeing her confused face.


Geet who was coming out with her friends, saw him smiling to himself..she frowned in confusion..and mumered... "lagta hai..ye pagal bandar..sach me pagal ho gaya hai..tabhi toh aise idiot ki tarah smile kar raha hai.."
But soon..her confusion cleared as she noticed that naughty glint in his eyes..and immediatly guessed his next move.


"Hell...Nooo.." ..geet shouted running behind him as he moved to the other side of the parking. But maan was quick to reach there and before she could stop him...
"Phisss..."
Geet closed her eyes in regrate...as she heard that sound! How can she forget that this bandar has a sharp mind! How didnt she saw it coming..? That bandar too has punctured her cycle's tire!


Maan had a victorious smirk on his face..seeing her defeated expressions.. And taunted.. "kya janglee billi..planning toh tumne achhi ki thi..par fullproof nahi thi! I expect better from u atleast! Anyways.. Enjoy ur first ever ride on a punctured cycle.." ..saying so, he winked at her.


*****

She kept cursing him as she dragged her punctured cycle. She never thought that her plan will backfire so badly. She was already upset with that and to add to it..meera & pinky were blaming her for all that happened. They said that it wouldnt have happened if only she would have followed their advise.
She told them that she just wanted to settle scores with him..after that she would have ignored him..Sachhi..!!!
But they didnt belive her and commented.."tum dono kabhi nahi sudhroge..kyunki tum dono ka fav time pass hai.. Ek dusre ko pareshan karna!"
hearing that she shouted at them that they were so mean of friends!


*****

She was still cursing him as she walked dragging the cycle...when she heared him saying from behind.. "Enjoying the adventurous ride..arent u..??" ..he smirked.
"go to hell..!" ..she shouted in annoyance..and didnt even bothered to look at him.
He smiled at her irritation.. "Tch..tch.. Itna gussa! Log sach hi kehte hai..jab bhukh lagi ho na..toh insaan chidchida ho jata hai.." ..he commented to tease her more.
Geet fumed hearing that! And speed up her steps to get away from him. But that bandar wasnt leaving her alone..he too followed her..
"slow down..janglee billi..warna ghar pahuchne se pehle hi chakkar aajayenge.." ..he teased.. biting his cheeks.
"tumhe bahut fikar ho rahh hai..??" she asked gritting her teeth.
"kiski..?? Tumhari..??offocrse not..infect mujhe toh unn logon ki fikar ho rahi..jinhe iss moti janglee billi ko uthana padega.." ..he replied making a pity face.
"Just wait..till i tell all ur doings to Simran Aunty. Fir dekhte hai..ke tumhe kis ki fikar jyada hoti hai.." ..geet said with a mean smirk.
Instantlly his expressions changed and were replaced by a threatening glare..
"Dare to say a word...and trust me.. I'll give a detailed discription to Rano Aunty..about all ur "extra curricular activities" at school..! And am sure..she wont be much pleased after knowing that..!"..maan warned her.


Though they have threaten eachother..but both knew that they cant say anything to anyone..coz if they did..then not only the other one but they themself too will be in a big trouble!

Geet looked at him..glaring angerily..
"I hate u..u know that..?" she spat..frustated.
"I.. Wait a minute..dont tell me u want to hear "I LOVE U TOO" from me again.. ..thats why u r repeating it..??" ..he asked, shocking geet to the core! He didnt even gave her a chance to say anything and continued..
"Before u start dreaming..let me clear one thing.. That was supposed to be a joke okk..i didnt mean it.. so dont get ur hopes so high.." he completed with attitude.


CONTINUED BELOW..






Edited by Shonameet - 11 years ago
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"Before u start dreaming..let me clear one thing.. That was supposed to be a joke okk.. I didnt mean it..so dont get ur hopes so high.." ..he compeleted with attitude.
Geet was boiling in anger by now.
"Seriously.. Who do u think u are..???" ..She shouted.
"Maan Khurana..!!! Offcorse.." ..he replied proudly.
That only added more fuel to geets already boiling anger..
"why are u so irritating..??" ..she asked, highly frustated with his self praises.
" huh...jaise tum khud badi interesting ho.." ..he taunted.
"jhagdne ke alawa..aur kuch aata bhi hai..?" ..she commented in annoyance.
"look..whos talking..!! Sau chuhe kha ke Billi Hujj ko chali.." ..he retorted to irritate her more.


*****

They kept fighting verbaly..untill they reached near their colony!
Yes.. Not only they live in the same colony.. But fortunatly or unfortunatly.. These two are neighbours too!
As they neared their neighbourhood.. Like always..they both behaved like matured & well mannared kids!
Thats why no one in both the families or even in the neighbourhood..knew about their ture faces..!


*****

She was walking ahead of him..when she heard him cursing. she turned around and saw him making a face while looking at his shoes..which were slightly splashed with the muddy water!
Then only she noticed that the road was dump with water and a few puddles has also formed here & there.
"seems..the diwali cleaning has already started.." ..she thought smiling!


She reached her house and quickly went to park her cycle in the porch.. While maan moved towards his house..being extra careful to avoids those little puddles.. not wanting to spoile his shoes again.
After parking the cycle.. Geet came out and called him.. "maan..wait a minute.."
Maan stoped abruptly..and turned around looking at her curiously as she has called him by his name!!
"How this magic happened..??" ..he wondered to himself.


"What..??" ..he asked trying to show that he wasnt interested..while in real.. he was very much interested to know whats cooking in her head.
"wo.." ..she smiled sweetly at him.
He raised his brows..waiting for her to continue..
"wo..i was saying ki..." ..she again gave a extra sugary smile...trying the limits of his petience.
"speak up damittt.." ..he yelled in irritation.
Geet smiled naughtily..satisfied with his irritated face..
"Ab hua.. Hisab braber.." ..She told him sweetly!
Before he could undersatnd the actual meaning of her words.. She jumped in the puddle which was next to him.. Splashing the muddy water at him..thus spoiling most of his clothes & shoes!!!
Though her own shoes were spoiled too.. But it was truly worth it..!!! And the expression on maan's face was priceless!
Geet ran away gigling..while maan was still in shock..
Her gigles brought him back to his senses..
"Geet ki bachhhiii...janglee billi.." ..he shouted in extream rage.
Geet turned around and laughed seeing his messy state. She stuck her tongue out at him to tease him more and shouted..
"hope u too enjoyed the adventure ..pagal bandar.."
then she ran inside her house happily.. Leaving a fuming maan behind..whos mind already started to work on his revenge plan!


And with that..this eventful day of maaneets interesting school life..ends here..!
Hope u all enjoyed reading it as much as i enjoyed writing it!
Thanks for all the Like's & Comments..🤗
Luv u all..
-Shona😊





Edited by Shonameet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update...
funny...lol
geet ignoring maan...is it possible??🤔😆
I LOVING THIS FIGHT OF THEM--
CONTINUE SOON!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nyce ypdate 😛

Liking their cute fight nd nok-jhoks 😛 😊
But think that maybe Maan did go to far by putting a cockroach in Geet's lunch. 😲

And Geet taking Meera's advice and ignoring Maan, can she really ignore, can they pass the day without their fights. 😉 😛

And what was adi pointing too? Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
good one...

Adi is right...


ab ye kisne kiya...

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