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Posted: 11 years ago
100 likes are completed and 9 pages of comments are also completed
now update time
so update soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-

100 likes are completed and 9 pages of comments are also completed

now update time
so update soon!!!!!!


updating😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rizwanaq

great update. hope they can work out their differences. feel bad for geet why is maan such an arse here?!!! hope he falls for geet soon!!! and realises his love for her.


he will soon 😆
thanks for the comment😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

I have replied to every one u guys can check

(The hardest piece of chapter I have ever written I don't even know how many times I have rewritten it I hope u guys are satisfied with it if not then tell me I will edit it more) 😃


PART 9

**********Flash back continues*********

That geet where is she lost now...?

Grhhh... That girl is always up to something.

I tried calling here from my cell but her cell was unreachable.

Where the hell is she lost now? Why she always made my coffee? I want a head massage from her and here she is lost? Let her come back I will scold the hell out of her! Why the hell is mansion so quiet?

Why the kids are not making noise? Grhhh! That's good for me that they are not, I hope that they just got scared of my threat of boarding school. Why Kajal still not here with her foolish reasons, why Jeh is not running behind me for video games. Are they out with geet...?

I just started working at my apple laptop making a quick presentation. Suddenly I glance at the date of today and sudden realization draw upon me. I had almost forgotten yesterday events, her cheating and her words everything just came running to my head like a slideshow of picture. How can I forget such an encounter in my life?

I just called the most trusted employed Adi.

I want all the information regarding that Jacob. He is a manager in our hotel.

Yes sir.

I just hang up the call and started thinking what I have seen.

Hours passed and I glanced at the clock it was showing 11PM.

Hasn't geet come yet? She never stays out till this late. Does something happen to her?

By the mention of something I can feel my heart to skip a beat. But I said to myself that it's only sympathy towards her yes. I lived with her so many years only because of that I am worried. May bee I should complain to police that she is missing.

Something comes into my mind and rushed to my wardrobe.

I saw some of her clothes were missing. Then I opened my safe locker but was surprised to see all jewelry over there and check around the room I found our wedding picture that was placed at the side table was also missing...

I rushed to MY kid's room and found their some clothes and toys were missing... I was shocked, I felt some pain. I felt like I lost something. Then I feel extreme rage, rage of something that I couldn't explain. I just broke the mirror which was showing my reflection in that broken state also. I just drank alcohol till I was numb to the surroundings.

******** End of flashback*******

***********Present*******

Maan's POV continues

I just reached My kids school directly from the airport I had my tickets booked for returning back at the same day when I reached there I saw there was still few minutes remaining for the opening for gate of school I was in my car and was just getting bore then something get into my knowledge there was a couple wife was currently pregnant and her hubby was on his knees with a small boy making his wife smile. They were having their cute family time and I didn't realized that when I started smiling while watching this scene. Maan Singh Khurana was smiling at the mere people for the first time.

He tried remembering the time of geet being pregnant and but he realized that he was always on trips of business he never enjoyed the family time with his small family.

Irony of life that now he is addressing HIS Family to the persons with whom he is separated now from. He remember that at the time of marriage he told his dadi that he is only getting married because of her wish to that girl who had no class according to him but now he after living separated from her for 6 months and 16 days approx he felt the may be she has that special place which every wife has in husband life. May be i don't love her but cares for her.

What if that boy friend of her using her? No he can't never let it happens.

He called up to some and asked book another ticket that was on his wife's name.

I heard the bell rings and saw Kajal and Jeh running out. I get out of my car and rush to them.

They were shocked may bee they didn't expected me to pick them from school.

Ahem (I cleared my throat because I was confuse how to talk to them)


But my confusion was cleared when Kajal came near me.

Daddy... (She seemed happy to me I was quite relived)

I got onto my knees in the position at which I saw that man was while talking to his kid.

Jeh to came to me and said meekly- hi.

I cleared my throat again and said Good afternoon

Kajal giggled and hugged me.

I felt good it was a serene feeling that occurs through me.

Daddy you are not in meeting and giggled again...

I felt like smiling to. I never knew I Maan Singh Khurana will make a fool out of himself in front of his kids but strangely it didn't felt wrong. 😆😉

I noticed Jeh was quiet and was looking out. I felt hurt.

I come for them here and he is not even looking at me.

Come on lets go.

No let's wait for Mom she has forbidden us to go anywhere and with anyone. (Jeh replied meekly)

I felt rage. I felt hurt.

I m your father Jeh so obey my orders. (My voice was high)

Kajal look frighten because she just loosen up the hug after hearing my sentence, I just controlled myself I didn't wanted to loose that fatherly feeling which I was feeling at now.

I was too shocked and to angry on myself that where I was all these years that I am feeling this for the first time, despite of being the father of two grown up kids it felt so new. It felt heavenly for me.

Kajal tried to go away but I cocooned her in my arms and planted a kiss on her forehead. Then I looked at her face. She smiled and kissed me back on my cheeks. Today I felt like a complete father. I smiled back at her.

Jeh was standing with her face hung down. And I noticed that there are tears in his eyes. I just picked my both kids in my arms and rushed to car.

In the way I noticed Jeh has hugged me but he still looked scared.

I planted a kiss on his chubby cheek too. He looked at me I felt a surprise in his face but then I ignore and get into my car and started the engine. I was in the way when I saw Jeh was looking at a shop unblinkingly I saw that shop was of toys. Maybe that's only the way to know your kids better. I pull away my car to parking a lot and shopped with my kids. And then took them to ice-cream parlor as I came to know from Kajal that geet has promised that for ice cream in the evening.

There I came to know that Kajal really talks a lot and I mean really. And Jeh was a quiet baby a timid baby but I was quite shocked because I mansion he told always up to some mischief. Kajal likes chocolate a lot and Jeh was OK with vanilla but I liked butterscotch none of them have my taste. I pouted and was feeling quite low when Kajal saw me and said

DADDY you did that like mommy.

I did what like mommy dear? (I was quite surprise with my love filled voice but ignore that)

This (she pouted)

And I was lost in thoughts because I don't remember geet pouting.

PRECAP- I guess confrontation.

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I felt that I was dragging the ff so I just speed up a bit and gave a big update...That's the longest update for SIL.

I am happy like the way you guys have quickly achieved the target.

Next update only after 110+ and 9 pages of proper comments😆😭

Because I gave you long update you guys have to give me long comments😳

For PM add me Sweetgirls1

Suggestions are always welcomed any query just PM me. 😉

Noo like and comments up to target no update... 😉😆😳

Do like the update if u liked this. comment it's really means a lot.😃😳


Take care...😊

Love you all. 😳❤️

Edited by sweetgirls1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb part ...maan fdinalyy thinking that how much time he did spent with his kids ...he doesnt know about their fav flaour ......maan kids k baaare me soch raha he achca he par abhi bhi usko lagta he k geet k liye us k dil me sirf sympathy he ...maan ne bhale hi geet ko low class maan k usko kabhi apni life me importance nahi di par iska matlab ye bilkul bhi nahi tha .k wo usko cheat karta kisi aur k saath relation bana k ...
want ful confrontation between maan and geet ..and geet outburst ...jissme maan ko ye bhi pata chalna chahiye k geet ko 2years pehle hi us dayan sameera ne maan k affair k baare me bata diya tha par phir bhi geet ne maan ka saath nahi choda ...maan ko geet ki feelings kids ki feelings sabka ehsaas hona chahiye ...
i really want k sameera bhi aajaye dubai aur kids geet k saamne maan se puche k sameera maan ki kya lagti he ...tab maan ko ehsaas hoga usne kitna badi galti ki he ...

plz update soon ...
aur maaan ko uski galti ka ehsaas jarur karwao par geet usko maan f na kare itni asani se abhi to maan ko bahut hardwork karna padega ek ideal hubby banne k liye ...

waiting for next


confrontation hi chahiye with longpart ...i m so happy my comment came first 🤗😳
Edited by preeti.1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamy

plsss update fast

cnt wait


updated dear please check 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update
maan for first time feeling his fatherly emotion
i hope this will bring out jeh from his self
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow
my wait came to end so early😃
feeling bad for maan😔
hope they unite fast
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan realizing his feeling
simple awesome conti soon waiting

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