SwaRon OS- The yearning.

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rinku bathija

@rinkubathija12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

firstly i don't know what to comment on this type of OS.. it was too emotional...i ain't type of emotional and sentimental girl to cry on write ups but this time i was about to cry.. seriously...if anyone will see my like this they will think i have a personality change disorder..lolz😆.. but this was really an awesome OS👏... full of emotions... i really felt for rishika...😭 but why swayam chose baby over Sharon...? their last conversation was written flawlessly... loved it to the core...😊

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

love love love love love ittt.

i adore the os...though i cried reading it

and the way you write...take a bow...

LOVELY write up...man, u're talented.

love---medha

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Suhaima Kazi

@.wanderlust.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

This actually got tears in my eyes! :')
Sucha Beautiful OS.

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

m hate sad ending yaar 😭😭

nyc written👏👏😭

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

nice os

thanx for the pm

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Sharon ko kyu maar daala?? :'(
Sad tha..!
But ofcourse you wrote it so well...i mean rishika and swayam's short journey since sharon's death was described in short instances which were appropriate and perfect.
Poor swayam couldn't do anything and his mind was in a state of shock...while sharon left.
It was surely sad but amazingly written :')

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: aish_swaron
res
another 1 😆

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This was such a sad OS
the flashback literally made me cry
but the OS, it was a marvelous piece of work. swayams feeling were depicted very well and not even at the slightest point i felt, it was overly done or anything that sort of. and the ghost-angels talk rishika, their daughter and swayam shared, it actually reminded me of a movie, Bhoothnath. bt it truly showed how good of a parent Swayam was.
basically the pain in this OS was expressed very well, and one could very well connect to it
keep writing more :)
just lobe last question
did u cry while writing this?

PS - The tittle is perfect! The Yearning - a perfect title

@Bold yup.. A bit. 😳

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

thT WAS A AWESOME AND QUITE HEART TOUCH OS... LOVED IT

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nancynnv

@nancynnv

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Honestly I don't read such sad OS...

But urs was such a captivating one...

I just could not stop reading it...

The father daughter relationship was shown so beautifully ...

I loved

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fanista

@fanista

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

ouch ...😔
y did u kill sharon nt fair ...[:'(]
but amazin ...amazing
i wish she'd be back aftr all it was her swayam callin her ...😔
but it was awesum ...

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