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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...:)nd welcome back...;)
really luv this not so khadus bt cheerful maan...it almost seems like geets ghost is now in maan...it's totally the opposite...bt really luving this cheerful maan...nd wonder y geet is so neg abt herself...
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting for the next part eagerly
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing...plze 4 few parts send pm 1ce evry1 is use 2 it den u can stop na...& I lovd dat talkative maan ka side if was vry nyc.
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART 3



It had been a ritual since a month for maan to sit an hour in the park just to see her atleast once in a day. He had always ensured that he has no meeting fixed at the time mansi had her drawing class, after all that was the best time of his day.

Geet was now getting worried with the way maan would just stare at her whole time she took class of her students. Earlier it used to feel nice to get attention of someone like that for first time in her life, but now it was going overboard. She knew at the end she would be the one left all alone, and she just didn't want to feel again that pain of rejection.

When the class ended, maan came to take mansi with him, but then seeing geet sitting there, not even glancing at him, he didn't like it. Come on he was her friend at least, but she never accepted his friendship wasn't a relevant factor for him. "how was your day geet" maan said going where she sat while he let mansi to go and sit in car.

"mr khurana, it was fine." She replied like always precisely and crisp, her voice always had that distinct restlessness, as if she was always fighting with herself. "mr khurana, oh please it sounds so formal. Madam you are forgetting we are friends" he said giving her a bright grin.

She gripped her skirt as she closed her eyes trying to remember the last time when someone called her friend without a pinch of pity in their voice. Her throat choked as she looked away trying to control her raging emotions. He felt the tension suddenly radiating from her and got tensed. He could feel her restlessness and suddenly raised his hand to comfort her but then stopped.

"mr khurana I think you are living in misconceptions. I never agreed for your friendship nor are we that close to use informal words toward each other. Please I would like if we behave the way we should, like a teacher and guardian." Suddenly her cell ranged and she said, "will you please excuse me I have this call to attend" her voice was so distant, it even sounded alien to geet itself.

Maan was shocked to hear all that she said. He never expected she could say that to him ever. And what wrong he did, it was normal for him to talk like that in college with other girls, though there was a difference that they atleast know each other in college but then if given a chance geet can know him too. He just blinked his eyes trying to feel hurt but it just didn't matter at all to him what she said. He still tried to give her a smile and said, "am sorry if you felt it all wrong, I never had any wrong intention. Sorry geet ji" he said and walked away.

She looked at her ringing cell and just cut it hating to talk with anyone at the moment specially her family. She just wanted to be alone, away from this suffocation, this pity and this distance. Geet it is nothing new right, she tried to assure herself, but it was different this time. She looked at his car that was still parked near the gate, and tried to behave normal, pretend that she is happy, but was she really??? After his Mercedes went away, she let lose herself, break down in the silence of the loneliness of the park.

Maan was sitting in his room looking at the pictures of geet he had taken secretly. He knew it was wrong, after all practically he was stalking her like a Romeo, but he knew his feelings weren't that cheap, he just wanted to know her, there wasn't any force from his side, if she felt it so wrong he can give her space, he won't feel that bad, he tried to assure himself.

"chachu where are you" came a running mansi as she simply jumped on his bed and then sat near him. Due to the sudden disturbance, he simply put his cell down and got startled. "mansi chilla kyu rhi hai" he said as he took her in his lap. "papa was calling you chachu" said mansi making her eyes big.

"aur mujhe wo racing wali game bi khelni hai, give me your phone" she literally snatched from him and got amazed seeing her geet didi's photo displayed on it. "chachu geet didi ki photo apke phone me hai..." maan immediately got startled and tried to snatch his phone from mansi but she pulled back and looked at the picture in admiration and said, "chachu dii is beautiful na... bilkul mansi jaisi" and maan just smiled hearing her compliment, and said, "yes bil kul mansi jaisi hai. Ab photo I mean cell do mera"

"apko pata hai she has a beautiful drawing too" "that's why she is teaching u mansi" maan said as he tried to snatch his phone back but mansi just jumped off the bed on the other side going in the farthest corner. "and she has a beautiful smile too" said mansi patting her lashes while maan just now stood on his place looking at mansi sheepishly and said, "I know beta your dii is beautiful in every respect, ab give me cell" "but ek problem bi hai unme chachu" said mansi getting serious and sad all of the sudden.

Maan got startled hearing that coming from mansi and said, "kya matlab". Mansi was about to reply but then suddenly dev came in his room disturbing the duo and said, "mansi bte I asked you to call chachu aur aap yha masti karne baith gye" turning toward maan, he handed him a packet and said, "maan London clients had agreed to meet us and you have to leave tomorrow morning for this meeting. All details and tickets and visa is in this packet, you just go through them once"

"bhai I never handled such a big meeting all alone." Said maan shocked seeing so much responsibility on him while dev just patted his head and said, "nhi handel ki that's why you are handling them now. Don't worry, call me if there is any issue. I know you will rock it brother" maan smiled at the trust his brother showed on him and promised himself to not let this confidence down.

Dev left after a while taking mansi with him for sleep, and in all this, maan totally forgot what ever mansi said.

Geet sat on her usual place in the park where she takes her classes and waited with heavy breaths for that particular person who filled her thoughts most of the time. Only she knew how she dreaded her day, how restless she had been thinking what if he considered her words and he... she cant even complete the thought, fear was this much engraved in her heart.

Her eyes got back the sparkle as she saw the same black Mercedes stop in front of park gate from the corner of her eyes and immediately hid back the smile that touched her lips. Soon the front door opened and she expected maan to step out but instead of him a chauffeur step out and opened back door of the car.

Lagta hai aj chauffeur ne drive ki and he is sitting beside and with the hope she waited for him to step out but was left disheartened when only mansi stepped out and the car left after mansi reached geet. Wo nhi aye aj, she thought and immediately a thin line of tears formed on her lids. Ab tak to nhi suni meri baat kabhi, phi raj kyu mani, her heart complained and suddenly she realized she had first time expressed her thoughts to him, and how seriously he took her words.


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Edited by neha512 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me first... :p have not read the story yet... Will read now
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Posted: 11 years ago
hello 😛 ... amazing part neha 👏 ... wow... maan has some feeling's for geet... and geet is thinking that because of her words he dint come...!!!
loved it... and hope they both become friends and need to know what had happened in geet's past... that she thinks ppl pity her!! 😕
cant wait to know what has happened in her life... plz update soon with more about geet's POV plz PLZ plz.. 😆 😃 😛 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update

why is geet like tat

i mean why so rude to maan when he had a normal convo

and wat does maansi knows... is something wrong with geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
so madam is missing maan..hmm...then y did she tel him all those things???.their is sum mystry behind geet..iam realy very curious to know that..so plsss dont make us readers wait so much and update the next part as soon as possible..i realy hope u wil reveal the truth about geet..y is she behaving like that..
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
but why is geet like this
nd now when maan doesn't came she is missing him
thanks fo rthe pm
continue soon

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