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Snehajain

@Snehajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Awesome update...😊😊😊

Feelings of Sam, Sakshi,Aisha,Aman were beautifully written...😊😊😊

Loved the way Sam taunt him...😊😊😊

The most awaited part of this FF Aisha-Arjun facing each other has come...😊😊😊But you stopped in between...😭😭😭

Plz plz plz plz continue soon...😊😊😊

Note - less active till mid of october bcoz of exams...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

wonderful and amazing FF😊
read all parts in a go and it took me whole night and day to complete it but it was worth it👏

you are a fab write⭐️

keep up the good work😊

the flashbacks, the descriptions of emotions everything was perfect⭐️

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

ahhh... my first comment in T2 😳😳😳

First of all... I m so sorry ... was badly stuck up with some personal commitments and the festive season at home that I couldn't comment 😳😳😳

And here are my comments for both the latest parts ...

Chapter 38 :

Sam's frustration ... can be easily understood... he has seen Aisha breaking down... how miserable he felt after Arjun and Aisha both went missing ... And even after Aisha came back from Allahabad, he knew she was still not the old Aisha... there was an emptiness ... he knew everything but yet he was helpless ... he couldn't do anything for her... And now Sakshi and Aman's revelations had shaken him to the core... he was disgusted and hurt... his struggle was clearly visible...

Chhotu, Shree and Liza ... even their state of mind was obvious... they too missed their Khadoos Arjun Sir ... their Zakhmi Sher ... they too wished to be with him... but for duty, they had to stay back...

Sakshi and Aman ... They became the culprits and victims both at the same time under the circumstances...

Aisha ... So true... the pain and sufferings of 2 years cannot be forgotten in few moments

It will take some time to sink this feeling in...

Raghu - Coelho ... Coelho flabbergasted ... "don't tell me tumhe sab pata tha" 😳😳😳

Dr Varma ... he is the only person who can handle the things now ... 😊

How easily he recognized Aisha and Sameer 😊

And finally they see him ... of course they never thought in their wildest dreams that they will find him like this...

The final part when Dr Varma tell Aisha that he is improving because of her brought tears to my eyes... 😭

Beautiful 👏👏👏👏👏

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Chapter 39 :

Sometimes u r scared to be happy... fearing u might lose it 😳😳😳

Everything going on in Aisha and Sameer's mind was very disturbing for them ... they couldn't believe that Arjun didn't trust them ...

While Aisha was totally blank and numb ... A chief and a friend inside Sameer were fighting with each other 😳

Aman's POV was beautiful... it refreshed all the memories of Aisha in the story ... Nadiya, the dance teacher in Allahabad, ETF officer, and Mrs Aisha Arjun Rawte ... 👏👏👏

Sakshi knew this was going to come ... but sometimes even if we are prepared for the worst ... we still tend to lose the control on our emotions...

Then the perfume part was like a breeze of fresh air in the suffocating surroundings 😆😆😆

Arjun remembering that in his dream was so cute 😊

Poor Arjun 😆😆😆

So Arjun opened his eyes and was happy to see his dream coming true... but again... it was difficult for him to absob this feeling that his dream has indeed come true ... Its Aisha in front of his eyes ... 😳😳😳

Both lost and the feeling was yet to sink in 😳

And here comes the spoil sport Sameer ... 😆😆😆

Arjun was definitely not expecting him ... this was way beyond his dream ... Sam in front of him 😆😆

Sam too took some time to realise that it was his buddy Arjun calling him after a long time.

And the best part Sam: Its better that we speak later else tu kisi se baat karne ke liye bachega nahi 😆😆

This is what best friends are 😉 ... it reminded me of the last scene of the movie 3 Idiots ... when Aamir Khan says "Hi" to R Madhavan and Madhavan throws his Shoe at Aamir screaming "Tere Hi ki to !!!!" 😆😆

And the only thing that could bring back Aisha back to her senses was Arjun ... and it did ... Arjun calling her give the way to that breath which was stuck suffocating her and Aisha was released from the shackles of the numbness ... she could now feel the things around her ... 😳

Now waiting for the full scene between Aisha - Arjun and hope for Sameer Vs Sakshi-Aman confrontation 😳

Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

At last!

The most awaited moment finally passed.

THEY MET!

I m so glad...

Well not exactly. Abhi ka raasta itna bhi saaf nahi hai...

Arjun will have to answer Aisha now..

UFF! Tough job..

But, Like i always say. I trust u...

U will do great..

Waiting for it..😉

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princess_pari

@princess_pari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

hey di...

awesome update...

sorry for not replying to earlier parts...

really emotional update..

loved it...

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Kareena1994

@Kareena1994

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

thanks for the pm

superb update

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Shreya

@shreya09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Beautiful update
excellent
the most awaited part
waiting for Arjun-Aisha conversion
waiting for Rawte-Sam confrontation
waiting for Arjun's moments with the rest of the team...

once again
Superb Update 👍🏼

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kunchu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Another magical update 👏

Frustrated Sam "Halaat"

Feeling bad for Sakshi ... she deserves a chance to explain things... she was not at fault...

I'm loving this Sam too ☺️ (Damn... while commenting on every story I say this... but cant help... I love him ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ )

I loved Sam - Aman confrontation... short and perfect 👏

Sam: I will kill him ... 😆😆😆 ... This was not the ETF chief ... this was Sam ... Arjun and Aisha's best friend 🤗

An then came the most awaited part ... and it was perfectly balanced 👍🏼

what I loved about it was ... it wasn't over the top... it was not melodramatic ...(I hate melodrama )... it was smooth ... and adorable... 🤗

Aisha's love hidden in the complaint and her pain to watch Arjun like this...the fact that Arjun had hidden all this from her had shaken her to the core... she herself was trying to come out of this...She had no time to breakdown because she had to support Arjun too ... Her love was in front of her who needed her ... 😳

And their love didn't need any words for communication... 🤗

Just one hug was enough 🤗

This was all Arjun needed... Aisha's embrace...her warmth 🤗

And she gave him the best medicine ... her genuine smile ... 😊

And how quickly she gathered herself... I loved her confidence... She is going bring that Old Arjun Rawte back in action 👍🏼

Yes... they had found their solace 🤗

Now I'm really looking forward to Sam - Arjun confrontation 😉

And later when Arjun comes face to face with Shree and Chhotu 😉

Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago