Arakshi FF: Rang jo Lagyo, pt 8, pg32, 10/11; pm later - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amritamalhotra

Awesome part Rati...
Loved all the couple and semicouple..
But Sakshi and Arjun dancing together. .amazing. .
Loved it...
Continue soon dear...


Thanks so much...I am so happy u liked the way story is going...thanks again🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PavithraKrish

hey

read all parts in one go
all are superb 👏
and this update is just awesome 👍🏼
atlast sam asked aisha for dance 😃
yay...arjun & sakshi dancing
Prem's character seems interesting
plz cont soon 😊


thanks so much dear😊..Ya sam decided to do some himmat and ask her lady love for dance...Thanks for liking Prem's character...THanks again so much🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks so much😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swarontaarey

Hey dis is really an awsum piece of work.👏...

can u please add me to ur pm list...?...
waiting...😊

Hey thanks so much...ya sure I will add you to pm list too..thanks again for liking the story😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: peppygirl

Oh lalalaa kya fashion sense hai aape.loved the dress u choose for each one.all r apt.between arjun stealing glances at sakshi .cant wait for update


Thanks so much for liking the dresses for all the girls..Yes this is the beginning for Arjun and Sakshi...lets see what happens next..😊
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Thanks so much 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: live

read all update in a go.

awesome story.👏
PS. Add me in ur PM list


Thanks so much and will definitely add u in pm list..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ketakee

Awesome updates...👏
Thanx for PM...😊


Thanks so much😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks each one of you again for liking the story..
Chapter 4

Liza: Sakshi yaar prem toh abhi tak nahin aaya

Sakshi: haan yaar almost half of the party is finished. Lekin woh abhi nahin aaya. Jaan bhuj kar apne aap zyaada important dikhane ke liya late aaye ga.

Liza: Nahin yaar. Waise joh bhi hai. He is really handsome and really charmer. Every time I meet him, he makes me feel so special

Sakshi: Rehne de Liza..Don't get into his charms. Woh sabhi ko aise hi feel karata hai. Lekin let him come today. I am not going to talk to him.

Suddenly they heard a voice

Gussey mein jo nikhraa hai,

iss roop ka kya kehnaa,

kuchh der abhi mujh se,

tum yun hi khaffaa rehnaa.

Sakshi knew who was the owner of shayari and the voice. A smile came across her face. She turned around and he was standing in front of her looking handsome as always.

Sakshi: Prem...She quickly went and hugged him and he hugged her back.

All the team members who were witnessing this scene had different expressions on their faces.

Liza was excited to see Prem

Shree and Chotu were suprised to see Sakshi and Prem like that😲😲

Ayesha and Sameer were pleased to see Sakshi so happy😊😊

and finally our Mr. ACP Arjun..He was expression less 😳😳(at least to him) and was least concerned with what was happening in front of him but reality was he was feeling something inside and that too very weird feeling, something which was not right and completely low from within, but he tried to brush all these feeling was keeping the expression of indifference to all this .

Finally Sakshi and Prem broke the hug

Sakshi (slapping Prem on the shoulder): Itni der se kyun aaya hai...Kab se wait kar rahi hoon

Prem: Sorry yaar. Pehle Pune se aate aate time lag gaya..Uske ready hone mein toda time toh lagega. U know handsome bandho ko tayaar hone mein waqt lagta hai.

Sakshi: Really

Prem: Chal ab maaf kar de aur itne weird expression mat de. Itna lame joke bhi nahin tha

Sakshi: tha..woh lame tha😉

Prem: Really

Sakshi: Haan and they both started laughing😆. Chal meh tumhe apni Team se milati hoon

Team was witnessing this scene.

Liza: Dekha abhi keh rahi thi Sakshi ki she won't talk to him aur uske aate hi, her anger is gone with the wind..Hamesha aise hi hota hai, Prem ka charm hi aisa hai.

Prem: Bilkul sahi kaha tumhe Liza. Thats why you are my favorite. You only know my importance. With that he gave a side hug to Liza. Waise Liza everytime I meet you, you look more beautiful than before.

Liza: thanks☺️☺️☺️

Prem extended his hand to Sameer: Hey Sameer, How are you?

Sameer: I am good

Sakshi came forward to introduce everybody else

Sakshi: Prem, He is Arjun

Prem extended his hand and shook his hand with him: Offcourse ACP Arjun Rawte, everybody know him

Sakshi: He is Shree

Prem: Hey Shree, I have heard so much about you from Sakshi and LIza but never got a chance to meet you

Sakshi: He is Chotu

Prem: Hey Chotu

Sakshi: and finally she is humari dabanng officer Miss. Ayesha Kapoor

Prem: Come on Sakshi. You know Miss Kapoor, why Sakshi introduced you last because you know best are always kept for last and iss Sakshi ko toh introduction bhi nahin deni aati. She should have said, extremely gorgeous Miss. Kapoor

Ayesha (Smiling): Hey, You can call me Ayesha.

Prem: Ok Ayesha, waise aapke liye sher arz hai

Ayesha: Irshaad..Irshaad

Prem:

Mandir masjid mein dhoondte hain log usey,

par ibadat hamari sab se sharif hai.

tujhe banaya hai usne,

ye uski eklauti tareef hai.

A smile and blush came across Ayesha's face☺️☺️☺️

Sakshi could not believe she will one day see Ayesha blushing other than in front of Sameer too. But she knows it is Prem. He can make any women feel special, chaye woh dabaang cop hi kyun nah ho.

But she also wanted to laugh looking at Sameer's face. Looked like he would punch Prem any moment. She decided to take Prem away before she saw him lying on the ground with black eye.

Arjun also saw the weird expressions of Sam. He thought iss Sam ko kya ho gaya. Why is he behaving so weird. Kuch toh choot raha hai

Sakshi: Are Prem jao uncle aunty se toh mil lo

Prem: haan meh abhi mom aur dad se mil kar aata hoon

With that he left

Liza: Sakshi I told you nah, everytime I meet him he gets more handsome

Sakshi: stop it Li

Right then Prem came back, why are you standing here. come with me nah, Hitler se milna hai. With that he held her hand and took her along

They both went to meet Prem parents.

After meeting and greeting, they both were coming back to stand with the team, when Prem spoke

Prem: Yaar yeh Sameer aur Ayesha ka koi scene chal raha hai

Sakshi:😲😲😲

How do you know..I mean abhi koi scene nahin chal raha hai but lagta hai bahut jaldi there will be fireworks

Prem:Sakshi tu bhool rahi hai I am also police officer. The way Sameer was looking at me when I was talking to Ayesha, I thought ki yaha world war III nah ho jaaye😆

Sakshi: Hahahahahah..Phir bhi tu laga hua tha😆

Prem: ab toda entertainment toh banta hai boss😉

They both were walking back to go to team but they stood in the middle and was just busy talking to each other

Prem: waise aaj ka koi plan socha hai kya dhamaka karna hai

Sakshi: nahin yaar, tu inti late aaya hai, kya sochna tha aur waise bhi uncle se strictly mana kiya hai

Prem: woh toh hai, dad was very strict about it lekin phir bhi

They both looked each other and nodded

Sakshi: Tune kuch socha hai

Suddenly they heard a voice

Kuch sochna bhi mat.

They turned aorund, It was Prem's mother, Gayatri Juneja (GJ)

GJ: Kuch sochna bhi mat

Prem: Nahin maa, hum dono toh party enjoy kar rahe hain...aur kuch nahin..

GJ: wohi acha hai. Dekh Prem, tere papa neh strictly kaha hai aur tu khud toh dhannt kaye ga aur bechari meri pyaari se bachi ko bhi dhannt kilwaaye ga. (she said looking at Sakshi)

Sakshi: almost made a puppy face

Prem: Maa this is not fair. I don't always do this alone. Aap hamesha iski side kyun lete ho

GJ: while holding Prem's ear: Kyunki yu mere shararati bacha hai

Prem: acha maa hum kuch nahin kare ge

GJ: Promise me dono, no hungama in this party. Both of you promise. I dont want to hear ki Maa apne toh sirf Prem se promise liya tha. Sakshi se toh nahin liya tha

Prem and Sakshi toghether : Ok we won't do any dhamaka in the party

GJ: She could not control her laughter thinking about dhamaka (these kids nah)

With that she side hugged both of them. My good kids. Go enjoy the party

Precap: Why is Arjun thinking about Sakshi?

Edited by shaleenrocks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Rati: aaj update de rahi ho?
sorry yar, waise i was trying to write today, and last night, lekin pata nahi q bahut hi sad si stories ghum rahi thi dimaag mein, isiliye tumhe pm nahi kiya

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