Arakshi FF: Rang jo Lagyo, pt 8, pg32, 10/11; pm later

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bollywoodfan16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: Sakuu
Rati: aaj update de rahi ho?
sorry yar, waise i was trying to write today, and last night, lekin pata nahi q bahut hi sad si stories ghum rahi thi dimaag mein, isiliye tumhe pm nahi kiya

its k dear..I posted the update on page 15..no worries yaar...take ur time..whenever u feel like writing.I can only write too when I feel like writing otherwise agar mood nahin..toh cannot write..take ur time...dont be sorry at all😉

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Sakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Hello...
wow another amazing update...!!!
Really liked ur update...
Vaise let me tell you...the surname u are using for Sakshi is my surname also...and the surname you are using for Prem is my friends surname...!!! what a co incidence...!!!!
So...Mr Prem Juneja is here haan...Finally...!!!
Liza is full flat on Prem haan...control liza control...varna Shree ka kya hoga ?? Vai hoga jo manzoore aap ko hoga hahaha
I liked how you gave different expressions...heheh good one...
Really liked the bonding between sakshi and Prem...!!
They actually looked like best buddies ...all coz of those informal dialogues...
Hhaha liked Sameer reaction or i must say sakshi's imagination was really good...
Well the officer inside Prem worked haan...pehle hi predict kar liya...
well humare ACP se bhi kuch nai chupta...sir ji door se khade hoke sab kuch observe kar lete hain...
fir vo sakshi - prem ki friendship ho ya sameer ke expression change...na hoke bhi har jagah hote hain ACP saab...!!
Mrs Juneja was also perfect...i could imagine her that way...
Amazing update...
precap is really intresting !!
P.S :Even m lucky to get a friend like you !!!!😛
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Edited by SAKSHI.. - 11 years ago

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Esha Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Wow love this update...ab ayegaa mazaa...I so wanted to see Arjun's reaction to Prem and finally it's here...😆

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Sakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

unresd above ...
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Edited by SAKSHI.. - 11 years ago

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Sakshi

@Sakuu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

I loved it!

abhi lamba wala review kal dungi, lekin picture to hit hai boss =P

Also love mister prem juneja! Reminds me of Salman Khan in the 90s with HAHK

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Awwsssmmm part
loved it
prem is supperbbb..
interesting precam
cont sooon
thnks for PM

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Awesome update...
Really loved Prem Sakshi's friendship...
Prem is really a cute character...

Eagerly waiting...
Cont. soon...
Thanks for the pm...

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fly.high

@fly.high

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

NO...NO...NO...this is NOT fair...

itna chota update?

i ws sooo eagerly waiting for this update...nxt time i want a big wala update...

loved prem's entry...oh gosh...why the hell this guy is sooo handsome...he drives me crazy...

loved his flirting session vid dabbang girl Aisha...lolz...sameer would've any moment punched him...for flirting vid HIS aisha...lolz...

continue soon dear...really soon

love
Aisha

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PoohLover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Oye rati my comment was longer than that..phir why this chotu si update huh😒 😒 you gotta update soon now 😆

oye prem is soo handsome yaar 😳 i really liked his entry and that too with a shayari for sakshi...soo cute😳...looove their friendship 😛

Aha in this update both chief of ETF was jealous..Sameer could not stop himself..i was also fearing for a worl war...and then poor handsome hunk prem would be injured awww..thank god sakshi took him away before that😆

Arjun arjun i just loove him man...he is getting jealous and am sure he would punch prem also if he could🤣

Im eagerly waiting to know about what pranks these two will do and about Arjun reaction and also the precap is soo soo interesting...increasing the desire to read the next update more 😃 😃 😃 😃

Totally and truly loved the update 👏 👏 👏

Last but not the least...you are truly an amazing writer...i just love reading your stories...sooo its not us being nice saying that you're a truly fantastic writer but you also deserve it all my dear...looove you loads🤗 🤗