Before I go...heres a PURE EVIL fan fic!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Kyaa Saach Kyaa Jhoott
Poornima gets tensed and wonders what to do next.Just then dadi comes to her room and tells her that they'll be having a party tomorrow.Poornima asks Dadi why the party.Dadi tells her that its just a party...not really for anything.She says that the party is for Poornima's child.Poornima didnt smile or said anything.She looks at Shubham and thinks what Ashmit said.Poornima was in tears.Ronit comes in there and sees this.Poornima was glad to see Ronit and was about to tell him about Ashmit.Ashmit heard all this and quickly inturrupted them.Poornima's shocked and stares at Ashmit.Ashmit comes in the room and gives an evil smile to Poornima and purposley tells Ronit to come with him and they need to discuss something important.Ashmit looks at Poornima and tells her to go to sleep since its getting late.Ronit too tells her this and leaves.While walking out the door Ashmit looks at Poornima again and smiles.Poornima was in tears.

Next day,everyone was getting ready for the party.Pooja was helping Maya and Reema making the guest list.Ronit was decorating the house and also kept an eye on Shubham.Ashmit too was helping around the house but kept an close eye on Poornima who was sitting on the couch.Ronit tells her to help the others,Poornima makes up an excuse saying that she isnt feeling good.She looked at Ashmit who too looked at her and smiled.Poornima cant stand this anymore and goes to her room.

Party started in the evening and everyone was having a blast.Ashmit,Pooja,Ronit,Reema,Koyna and the others were enjoying except Poornima.She thinks that this is the perfect time to go to Ashmit's room and look for the certificate.She goes there and after alot of searching she finds it.She comes out of the room and bumps onto Dadi.Poornima shows the certificates and photos to Dadi and she is shocked.She takes the certificates from Poornima and tells her not to say this to anyone else.

Dadi sees Ashmit.She holds his hand and takes him outside.There,Dadi gave Ashmit a one hard tight slap accross the face.Dadi tells him how dare he tried to ruin Pooja's life.Ashmit is shocked.Dadi warns him that he he does these kinds of things again,it wont be good.Ashmit tries to talk but dadi kept on talking.She tells Ashmit that she did so much for him and this is what he gave her and her family in return?Ashmit was shocked.Dadi tells him to get out of the house and leave Pooja alone.Dadi hides her sad face behind the envelope and starts to cry.Ashmit looked at her.....all of a sudden we hear dadi laughing.She slowly rises her face up towards Ashmit and smiles.Dadi:Aisa..kaheni parti mujhe agar tum sabke samne pakre jatein Ashmit.Dadi laughs as well as Ashmit.Both of them hugged.Ashmit:Dadi.....thank u thank u so much!Dadi:Jab tak main hoon..koi tere sachai ke badein mein nahi janega!She laughs!

Will continue after I come back!😊

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Ms. Bholi Bhali thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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UFFF!!

Kabhi tu kuch acha such liya karo!

Nice effort!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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u r absolutely right...this is indeed a very evil fanfic 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW!! That was shocking!! 😲 Dadi with Ashmit
Great Job!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dashing Boy

u r absolutely right...this is indeed a very evil fanfic 😆


No duh!! if it wasnt a evil fanfic...i wouldnt call it a evil fanfic now would i? Chokda...kabhi to apna brain use kiya kar!!😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😳 dadi turned evil as well omg what will happen to poornima now ????
good job 👏 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 pure evil!!muhahahahahahahahahahah 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Taffy can neva think nice things!!!

wah Taffy kya twist hain!! ab cont bhi karo!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Indian101

Taffy can neva think nice things!!!


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Originally posted by: Indian101

wah Taffy kya twist hain!! ab cont bhi karo!!



Thank U Thank U!!....I will cont it after I come back from Tomato..I meant TORONTO,Canada!😃😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: tafarruz


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Thank U Thank U!!....I will cont it after I come back from Tomato..I meant TORONTO,Canada!😃😆

ok! well b waiting n ur welcome!!

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