mohit famaily came to sanaya home to see sanaya . sanaya mum opeing the door everone stitting talking mohit lokking here and there mohit sister see you looking for sanaya mohit smile😆
OKK now i got it...i think you have written this Para to recheck your spellings and rectify the mistakes...dont worry i will...First off all..mohit's famaily (family) came to sanaya's home to see sanaya . sanaya's mum (MOM) opeing (Opened) the door ,everone (everyone) stitting (Sitting) talking mohit lokking (Looking) here and there. mohit (Mohit's) sister see you looking for sanaya (Sorry i didnt get this)..mohit smile 😊 sanaya came down
(in) pink saree 😳
starting (Staring) at her mohit give
s message to sanaya
lokking (looking) beautiful
. sanaya brother romenic star brother you 😕
everone haveing (Everyone having) lunch
finallu (
Finally)mohit have to go
. mum (Mummy) me and sanaya
go to (are going to) coffe
e shop
. they went
, so baby what about honeymoon mohit you promise me
tale (
Take) me to
swizland (Switzerland) i
known (Know) we will
celebration (Celebrate) fright (First) night there sanaya get shy
sorry my spelling be wrong corret me...Ok I have done...u have plotted a very nice script yaar...but some things i really didnt get so couldnt rectify them...
Oh God..itni mehnat mene akbhi apne comments me nai ki...
Edited by gunurlove - 12 years ago
