My First OS: Raghu Antara and Satya updated

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Imp note in this os dm is dead and satya is antaras collage friend

Rantara Jealousy os

Noors wedding preparation are going on and both raghu and antara were busy decorating the Naik mansion.

Ajji calls antara and says

Antara beta ye phool to waha upar laga de

Thik hai ajji says antara

Raghu is hanging about looking for antara and suddenly notices her on a stool putting flowers on the pillar. Raghu notices the stool is broken and is moving.

Antara is trying to reach the top suddenly the stools leg breaks and she falls she closes her eyes waiting for the dreadful fall to happen but she feels someones arms around her waist she slowly opens her eyes only to see raghu looking deeply into her eyes and she is lost as well

Mahi tu moment

Raghu breaks the silence

Tu theek e na miss call?

Ha... han me.. mei thi... thik hu

Tujhe choot to nai ayi he said concerned and looking at every part of her body to see if she was injured he looked back at her when he was satisfied.

Raghu abb tu mujhe niche utar do said antara

Han... kya? Raghu was confused

Put me down antara said again

Oh acha he put her down softly/ he was about to say something when her phone rang she picked it up

Hello

Antu remember me satya

SATYA OMG MY BABY HOW ARE U?

That was it raghu started burning with jealousy and thought who the heck is satya that miss call is getting so free with.

I LOVE YOU TOO BABY antara said suddenly raghu looked at her burning

Ok baby i will wait for you bye love you too

Raghu had enough he pulled her and pinned her to the wall an said

Ye satya kon hai

Ku tume ise kya

Tera boyfriend hai kya

Antara was thinking what happend to him so suddenly and then it came into her mind that he was jealous JEALOUS but why because i was talking to satya

Kon hai vo lakda bata mujhe raghu said getting angry and antara was enjoying the effect on him and said

Han vo mera boyfriend hai Kashmir se or vo ajj yaha a raha hai

Raghu had enough he closed into her and said

Sach sach bata vo kon hai tera

Kaha na boyfriend hai ab likh ke do kya

Raghu was burning with anger and jealousy

He left her and went away from there to the balcony and called machmach

Han bhi kya hua sab theek hai na

Han ek baat kaan khol ke sun le ek larka hai satya kasmir se hai aur ajj yaha a raha hai uske puri kundli nikal uske dada pardada sab kuch

Han theek hai bhi

Aur mujhe khabar karte rehena

Evening ajjis room:

Ajji is talking to someone on the phone

Han pura plan yaad hai na said ajji

Han ajji yaad hai par agar ji ja ji ko pata chal gaya na to mere band baj jai gi

Kuch nai ho ga SATYA apni behen ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai na

Han ajji par..

To phir ye kar or ye tere behen ke lye bhoot important hai

Han ajji theek hai karo ga

This was all ajjis plan to get satya to make raghu jealous even though she and him were brother sister.

Night wedding time:

Everyone was so happy nor and arshads nikkah was read and ruku and raghu and antu danced on bano ki sahali (like in the serial)now it was time for satyas entry raghu was waiting impatiently and ajji was happy

Suddenly all the lights went of and one spot light was in the stage everyone was confused and surprised and ajji was the only one happy

The song batameez dil started and a smart handsome man was dancing in the centre of the stage antara reconnised him and was really happy to see him

Machmach came running to raghu who was standing their confused

Bhai bahi

Ay machmach saans le kya baat hai

Bhai ye larka hai na jo dance karela hai na

Han ab to bol bi

Bhai ye SATYA hai

Raghu who was drinking coke choked and spit it out

KYA!!!

Han bhi

Raghu quickly looked at antara who was jumping with joy

Raghu was about to go up to her when satya came down and hugged her tightly

This was enough for raghu.

Satya took antara on the stage and started dancing

Raghu drank bubbly anty and went on the stage and pulled antara away from satya and into his arms

Dilli walli girlfriend started

Raghu and antara danced happily

Satya wanted to get down from the stage but stopped by ajji and asked him to follow the plan so he did and pulled antara into his arms and stared dancing raghu was more than angry so he pulled antara back but this time satya tried to pull antara but raghus grip was tight so he didn't let go.

Finally the dance more like fight came to an end and everyone went away and started chatting

Antara was talking to raghu and asking him why he got drunk just like his wife and raghu stood there with his head down.

Raghu was about to say somthing when satya came and took antara with him and she went with him happily

This made raghu even more angry and jealous.

Raghu saw satya holding antaras hand and kissin it and hugged her as well now raghu had enough he went up to them and took antaras and and took her away

Ajji came running to satya and showed thumbs up and satya did the same and went away to eat

Raghu was still pulling antara up the stairs and took her into a nice and tidy room which looked like it belonged to some boy raghu pulled her in and closed the door and locked it. He took antara hand and pulled her close to him making her crash into his chest.

Raghu chodo mujhe

Ku? Satys le pass jana hai

Raghu tumne pe rakhi hai ab mujhe chodo

Nai chorta kya kar le gi han kya kar le gi

Now antara was getting scared

Raghu pls chodo na

Nai pehele tu mujhe bata ke vo satya kon hai

Antara was again enjoying it and so she decided to tease him a bit more

Mene kaha na vo mera boyfriend hai

Acha ye mei kase man lu

Raghu agar vo mera bf hai tu ise tume kya

Mujhe kya han mujhe

Han batao na

Mujhe jallan hui ke tu kise or se asi baat ku kar rahi hai tu asi sirf mere se baat kar sakti hai

Ku tum ho kon mere

Miss kaul mene kaha na mujhe jallan hui

Par ku

Kiuke MISS CALL I LOVE YOU!!! And i cant bear to see you with someone else it hurts me

Raghu antara started crying and hugged him tightly and said

I LOVE YOU TOO!!

Both were so happy and thats when it happend their first kiss and later on they got marrid and lived happily ever after

So guyz how was my crap os i hope u like it

Pls tell like it and leave ur lovely comments

Rotten tomatoa and chappls are allowed

I have got this inspiration from pari, juhi , riya and every other writer on ddej forum.

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Yaar bahot accha lika hai tunešŸ‘šŸ¼ Amazing!!
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Awesome yaar!! tum be wajah chinta kar rahi thi!! šŸ˜‰ loved ti when he got drunk so original! šŸ‘
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Originally posted by: KreyaArshiLover

Yaar bahot accha lika hai tunešŸ‘šŸ¼ Amazing!!

thnks dear
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Originally posted by: alishamerchant

Awesome yaar!! tum be wajah chinta kar rahi thi!! šŸ˜‰ loved ti when he got drunk so original! šŸ‘

thnks dear i tried my best
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

thnks dear i tried my best


Im sure you did!
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does nobody else like my os
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guyz i tried this first time only for u lot and i got nothing
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Nice os!!!
Wah honey u write well!!
I love happy endings!!!

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