Raesha OS: Punar Vivah pg-2 *completed*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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CS:

DCP Sameer Damsingh Rathod
DCP Ayesha Sameer Rathod

Grandchildren:

Dheer Rathod:


Vansh Rathod:


Aditya Rathod:


Maithli Rathod:<img src="https://i.imgur.com/ULTu2Tl.jpg" alt="" />



Prologue:
Ocassion: 40th Wedding Anniversary of Sameer and Ayesha.Their grandchildren planning to get them married again. Will they succeed in doing this?

Note:
i know,the charecters of Dheer,Vansh,Aditya and Maithli,look older.
But,please,just imagine them in mid-twenties.
Besides,each of them has 2 year age difference.

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ch2-pg2
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow 40th anniversary!!
Kinne sweet hai!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ch1:

The grandchildren sitting in their room and were planning for organizing a grand wedding.

The eldest grandson,Dheer,was rolling the pen and was thinking something,while,the second grandson,Vansh was talking with the decorators and caterers for the wedding.The youngest grandson,Aditya was busy with writing the inviting cards,while,the grand-daughter,Maithli,was checking out the outfits,everybody will wear in the wedding.

After finishing the work,Vansh,Aditya and Maithli repoted to Dheer.

Maithli: Dheer bhaisa,saari outfits aachuke hai... Aap check karlijiye.

Aditya: Bhaisa,invitation cards bhi taiyaar hochuke hai.Invitees ke bhi naam likh diye hai maine.

Vansh: Bhaisa,caterers aur decorators se bhi baatein hochuki hai.Kal dopaher tak sab hojayega.

Dheer went around and checked the arrangements.It was super perfect.Dheer smiled and them and showed a thumbs up to them.

''Good Job,Team.Sara kaam waqt ke aage hi khatam hogaya.''

Someone watched them from distance and smiled at their efforts.

''Bacche kitni mehnat kar rahein hai.Sab kitne khush hai humare shaadi ki salgira ko lekar.Hum dono ki Punar Vivaah karaane ki kitni utsukta hai in sab mein.Inki sabki jab shaadi hogi,khaas kar,Maithli ki,tab kya hoga mera?'', a worried yet a happy Ayesha thought to herself.

She thought to herself and smiled at her thought.

She touched the mangalsutra that Sameer tied around her neck,40 years back.

She grazed her hands on it and smiled.A lone tear escaped from her eye.

''Dekhte dekhte 40 saal kaise guzar gaye,pata nahi chala.Kitne khush thhe humdono humari shaadi ko leke.Sameer bohut hi zyada khush thhe.Humari shaadi hogayi.Phir aaye humare zindagi mein Samesha aur Veer.Undono ki shaadi hogayi aur aaye baadme,humare pote aur poti.Samesha aur Veer ki jaane ke baad,maano,Sameer toh jaise toot hi gaye,par,humare pote aur poti ne humdono ko sambhala.Unsab mein Samesha aur Veer ki jhalak dikhayi deti hai.Samesha ki nishaani,Dheer aur Maithli,aur,Veer ki nishaani,Vansh aur Aditya...
Sukh dukh ke pal sab aaye,par,hum sab ne ek saath har halaat ka samna kiya.Isi dauran,Sameer ko promote kia gaya as the Sr.DCP of Rajasthan Police,whereas,mujhe as the chief of Rajasthan ETF.Baki sabki bohut yaad aati hai. Arjun,Riya,Chotu,Shree aur Liza.
Yeh paacho mere aur Sameer ki jaan thhi,aur abhi bhi hai.
Kaash,yeh sab bhi aaye Rajasthan mein humdono ki Punar Vivaah mein.''

As she remembered about their yesteryears,a tear drop fell from her eye.Before she could wipe it,Dheer came and wiped it.

''Nanisaa,aap ro maat.Sablog aayenge.Mere rehte huye,aap dono ki koi bhi khwaish adhuri nahi rahegi.Its my promise.Ek Rajput ka vadaa hai.'', Dheer promised to his Ayesha Nanisaa...

Ayesha smiled at his words of re-assurance and ruffled his hair,and went to Sameer.

As Ayesha went away,Dheer watched her and smiled.He prayed to Mata Rani to keep his Nanasaa and Nanisaa happy and together for all the lifetimes to come.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful zaibee continue soon 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it..

esa punarvivah aap hi kara sakte hoon,...


are a wedding planeer??


will u plan one for me too???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinkerbell

loved it..

esa punarvivah aap hi kara sakte hoon,...


are a wedding planeer??


will u plan one for me too???


sure..
It will be my pleasure.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing concept
n awesome cs
the update was superb
thanks for pm
Edited by rizwanaa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loveone line speacial
Dhere said yeh ik Rajput ka vada hai

Ayesha thought awesom ,amazing

Sasha os *dreamy*

Update soon

Awesome CS
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Every single work was completed in due time.Everything was rechecked by Dheer,Aditya,Vansh and Maithli. Even,Arjun,Riya,Shree,Liza,Chotu and his wife came all the way from Mumbai to attend their friend's wedding.

Wedding Day:

The men were welcoming the guests,while,the women were in charge of getting Aayesha ready for the wedding..

Sameer and Aayesha were really excited to get married again,that too infront of their grandchildren.Sameer and Aayesha were really happy by the arrangements made by their grandchildren.They appreciated their hard work.

Panditji called for Aayesha.Maithli,Riya,Liza and Ruby brought Aayesha down for the rituals.Aayesha was clad in a creamish red saree with golden borders while Sameer wore a creamish golden sherwani.The Jaimals rasam took place.After that,Kanyadaan took place.Arjun and Riya did the Kanyadaan.Panditji called the four Grandchildren to do the Gatbandhan.

Dheer,Vansh,Aditya and Maithli did the Gatbandhan and the couple stood for taking the Pheras.Flowers were showered on Sameer and Aayesha who reviewed their marriage vows,they took 40 years back.

After taking the Pheras,Sameer tied the Mangalsutra around Aayesha's neck and applied Sindoor on Aayesha's forehead.After all the rituals,Panditji announced them as a legally wedded couple.

Everybody was really very happy,especially,Dheer,Vansh,
Aditya and Maithli,because,they witnessed their garndparents' wedding and because,everything went really well.. All four grandchildren prayed to Bhagwan to keep their grandparents' happy and to keep them together for eternities to come.

The End.
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awwsssmmm concept
lovely part
cont sooon

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