REMINISCING....ll TS ll completed 17/09 - Page 3

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Originally posted by: Ramlath

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so sweet...finally smthing 2 cheer my mood
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so sweet...finally smthing 2 cheer my mood

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i am glad that my work made u feel happy...
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This is the second and last part of my two shot...hope you like this part.i think it is a lengthy update.sorry for that...


Asad retired to his room. zoya and najma talked for some time before going back to their rooms . asad. .asad..where are you?asad hugged zoya from behind and started nuzzling her.i am waiting for you and you are chatting with tamater.

Z: Mr khan..leave me...

A: No..why should i?and why are adressing me succh?

Z: Because you ve not kept ur promise.this is our first anniversary and you've not gifted me anything...

A: zoya...I forgot to buy you a gift...sure I will make a point of it next year...zoya pushed asad with all her might..then wait till next year mr khan...i will sleep with my tamatar...and strted walking towards the door knowing asad will definitely stop her.

A; zoya..ruko...yay...mentally she did a dance and turned towards asad feigning anger...

A:Do You want to see my gift...zoya nodded her head in yes...then close your eyes...he guided zoya towars bed and made her sit.he brought a gift neatly wrapped and handed her...

Z: Wow asad..thank you so much...zoya started tearingthe gift wrapper...asad sighed loudly seeing zoya...mr khan..should I bring scissors and trashcan and open this neatly...no way..

Z: Album...asad nodded yes...

zoya was shocked to see the first page...there was a sketch of zoya and below it written beautifully my life...yours asad...zoya jumped on to asad saying...I love you asad...

A: me too zoya...will you open it or stay with me like this whole night??zoya sat on the bed and pulled asad closer.

Z: we will see it together...

zoya squealed in happiness seeing the first picture.that was the pic of zoya and najma in airport the day when zoya arrived.

Z: I thought you did not like me...

A: its true...zoya passed a death glare.its my first impression..o k sorry...I took it from najma's phone.but don't ask her.she doesn't know...

Z: asad...where is your tehzeeb?you are stealing pictures of a girl without her permission?

A: you are my wife zoya..

Z:you are impossible asad muttered zoya and flipped the page.

Next few pictures are of zoya sitting in their living room with all family members, one with najma in which they are struggling to hold all the shoppping bags,one with dilshad where dilshad is laughing holding her stomach and zoya is explaining something making weird faces...zoya is very happy remembering all those moments.

Z: Asad...when did you click all these??all the while I thought you are marrying me on ammi's insistence...

A: yes zoya...ammi convinced me otherwise I would've missed the light in my life.as the days went on I was attracted to you unknowingly.i used to spend most of time watching you listening to you.

Z: but..i never observed...

A: how can you??i used to pretend as if I am not ...

Z: allah miya asad...I thought you are decent..looks decieve us sometimes...

A: yes zoya..looks decieve us...

Z: Asad..what is this??see how I am in this picture ,cheese allover my lips, sauce on my dress and not to mention the table..anyone will keep such pictures of their wife?..and started removing it..asad clasped her hand don't dare to remove it...if you don't like it..give it back to me...

Z: asad..why are you so serious...I will not ...

A: zoya you look beautiful in whatever way you are..whatelse I can do if my wife is so messy...

Z: Our engagement pictures...see how pretty I am...see your face just like red chilli...cant you ever smile?zoya kept on describing each and every photo.asad sat there admiring zoya .

Asad...is this from the day when we both went for dinner .where is your photo?.you know how hansome you were in the black suit.the whole night you disturbed me..you invaded my dreams...you...zoya bit her tongue realising what she said.

A: You dreamt of me??what did I do?asad asked removing hands from zoya's face which she covered...did I kiss you?or did i...

Z: stop it asad... zoya buried her face in the crook of his neck feeling shy..

They went through their wedding pictures and those from the party that night...

Z: asad..ammi and tammatar are gorgeous...look at you .allah miya flirting with tamatar friends...i did not expect this from you...

A: zoya see clearly what am I doing...I am looking at my wife...that is the day when ms farooqui became mrs.asad ahmed khan.i cant even explain how happy I was that day.since day of our engagement I was waiting for the day when we both will be one forever.but I was tensed zoya...what if I hurt you?what if I cannot fulfil your dreams?

Z: you never hurt me asad...infact you showered me with all the love I missed in the past..

Z: Asad...zoya closed the album and turned away from him...

A: show me the photo asad asked slightly smirking...I think it is the photo on our suhaagraat...turn this way...ab kya sharmarahe ho... us waqt aise kuch nahi..you were sleeping peacefully when I entered our room.

Z: What else can I do??you came to our room at midnight...

A: How can I came...all are laughing at me.so I stayed in guestroon till everyone slept...

Z: Haha..asad...isliye nahi aaye aap...par us din kuch aur kaha...i still don't know many things about you...

A: Aisa kuch nahi zoya... see you will definitely love the next picture...

Z: Sach mein...eh meri pehli din shaadi hone ke baad kaise bhool sakti hoon...itna waqt laga saadi pehenneme...tumhe kuch help nahi kiya...

A: You were cute struggling to wear a saree...I was enjoying...

Z: How mean...

Z: Yeh dekhiya...mein tere liye khana banaya...

A: Haan...banaya...kitchen ka haal aur tera haal dekho...saaf karne keliye ammi ko pura din laga...khaana ka photo bhi hai...dekhiye...kabhi nahi deka hoga aisa khana...

Z: Mai tumse baat nahi karungi...

A: Nahi zoya...mai yeh kehraha ki tum mere zindagi ko kitni rangeen banaya...kaale paneer, worldmap jaise roti...zoya started punching asad...

A: sorry...your food is delicious...leave me I have to take care of my mad wife...

Zoya sighed loudly and started flipping page...asad stopped her at one photo of her with dilshad and rashid...zoya understood why he kept that photo .i know mr khan that you are missing your father that's why I called him on your birthday.i know you will not scold me she talked to herself.

Z: Asad..can I ask you one thing...zoya proceeded as asad nodded ..yeh tasveer apne abbu keliye rakhatha na??

Asad did not answered to that question.he simply turned the page...

Z: Why am I sleeping in the guestroom in this pic??

A: Don't you remember...I forgot to take you to movie and for two days you slept in guestroom.so I spend those nights watching you sleeping...

Zoya felt bad for her behaviour but she pretended to be happy...haha asad..you deserve that.so never forget ,this time it may extend to a week...Zoya flipped few more pages .it was the day on of najma's engagement, zoya najma and dilshad dressed elegantly and talking to guests...

Asad caressing the photo...yeh mere zindagi zoya...aap teeno ko kush rakhne keliye mein kuch bhi kar sakta hoon...

Z: Mujhe pata hai asad...your love for your family made me fall in love with you...no..our family...

Asad gathered zoya in his arms and kissed her forehead...thanks zoya..for everything...

Zoya pushed asad away...I can see only zoya everywhere...I want to see us together...

A: Turn to last page then...there is a photo of asad hugging zoya from behind and clicked by asad...

Z: this is today's picture...you are so aweet asad saying this zoya kissed asad on cheek.

A: Where is my gift then asad asked zoya...zoya gifted an album containing asad's photos...

Z: By the way asad where did you hide this album all these days if you are making it since the day I arrived...

A: In your closet...

Z: What??how is that possible..i've never seen that...

A: How can you..you never arrange your clothes neatly...it is always messy..so I took it as my advantage...

Z: Allahmiya asad you never leave a chance...saying zoya shifted to otherside of bed..asad smiled at his beautiful wife and went to pacify her.

They spend whole night reminiscing their beautiful journey and finally slept peacefully in eachothers arms awaiting to start a whole new journey...


i haven't proof read this.so i apologise for mistakes...kindly excuse me...

sorry if it is a waste of your time. do comment on what you feel about this update...your coments make me happy. feel free to criticise....

lakshmi...

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Edited by penfriend28 - 11 years ago
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Awww it was so cute i loved it sacchi 😳 ❤️

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