Pyar ke ek Kahani: A/N on pg 44, imp

Hi everyone,

I'm bored and frustrated with the current KS storyline. so i'm starting a FF. I'm not good at writing. but still giving it a try. Pls tell what do you think about it.


Prolouge

Uday Walia is a well established rich businessman. He's seen only success in his life. He is strict, determinded and demanding. He rules the Walia Empire. Krishna Walia is his wife, very sweet and kind. They have a perfect relation and perfect life. To complete their perfection they have a perfect son, any parents would ask for. Jai was a 23 years old guy, just finished masters in Business Management from California University but still staying at US for some extra courses. He is hard working and has got a natural leadership quality. He is a sportsman and always best at whatever he does. He has the ability to charm everyone, especially girls with his killer smile. He doesn't like business much but has accepted his fate knowing that he's to control his father's business. He never expressed his this feelings to someone except his best friend, Tarun, who happens to be his cousin also.

Tarun Shablok is the son of Vidya Shablok, sister of Uday. Tarun has a younger sister Pia, who has a huge and open crush on Jai. They live in the Walia Mansion since their mother passed away in a car accident. On the same event, Uday's elder brother Vijay and his brother in law Nishikant also died. Anita, wife of Vijay and Kiran, wife of Nishikant also live in the Walia Mansion. Anita has a son Aditya who is married to Jigasya and has a son called Ranveer. While Anita and Jigs always plot against Krishna, Adi is a very good person and he regards Uday as a father. He has a wonderful relationship with everyone.

Kiran Dixit however has a daughter, Bani, the sweetheart of everyone of the house except Jigs and Pia. She is best friends with Jai's younger sister Anu. The house is really empty without Karuna, Krishna's sister's daughter, who usually lives with the Walias. Jai, Karuna and Tarun are of same age and they share a fantastic relationship.

From till date, Uday's life was perfect. Though his past wasn't. everyone blames him for the death of his elder brother and sister. She avoided people's remark and has only told the truth to Krishna, his wife. He has always shared a transparent relationship with his wife but now he is hiding a big truth from his wife and that is killing him. He has called Jai and asked him to come back to India, immediately, for good. Jai knew this day would come. So he has agreed to come back to India with Tarun, who studies in the same University with Jai, only his subject is different, he is up to becoming a lawyer.

Last but not least, Anu has a best friend whose name is Puskar who has a big crush on Pia. And always hated Jai, as everyone knows Pia likes Jai.



So, what do you think. Pls let me know.

The Family Tree 😛

Vijay Walia (late) – Anita Walia
• Son Aditya Walia, married to Jigyasa Walia, has a son Ranveer

Uday Walia – Krishna Walia
• Jai Walia
• Anu Walia

Vidya Shablok(late) – (their sister)
• Tarun Shablok
• Pia Shablok (adopted)

Kiran Dixit – (sister of Anita) – Nishikant Dixit (late)
• Bani Dixit

Karuna is Krishna's sister's Daughter.

Puskar and Rano are brothers and sisters and Anu is best friends with Puskar


pt 1 pg 2
pt 2 pg 5
pt 3 pg 6
pt 4 pg 9
pt 5 pg 10
pt 6 pg 13
pt 7 pg 16
pt 8 pg 18
pt 9 pg 21
pt 10 pg 23
pt 11 pg 25
pt 12 pg 28
pt 13 pg 30
pt 14 pg 33
pt 15 pg 36
pt 16 pg 39



Purno

that sounds really interesting pls continue soon!

Originally posted by: radha07

very nice 😛

thanks

purno 😊

Originally posted by: caddy

awesum plz cont soon

THX

purno 😊

that sounds interesting!! do continue!!! 😆 😆

Originally posted by: kajjal

😊 hey its nyc...

Thank you

purno 😊

Originally posted by: sxcdevil

that sounds really interesting pls continue soon!

Thank you

purno 😊

The starting part is here..

It was raining in my heart
Falling deep inside of me
Drowning in my soul
This silence rushes over me
I am breath against this fire
And I will not turn away, oh no
I'm waiting for time to carry me
Like a tempest to the sea
Standing strong, watching over, ya
Love will keep me believing
Through the dark
Can you hear me calling
Holding on when I'm dreaming
Love is all, Love is all, love is all

Thundering on high
Love was all I knew before I fell
And now the shots of man
Echoing inside myself
I am breath against this fire
And I will not turn away, oh no
I'm waiting for time to carry me
Like a tempest to the sea
Standing strong, watching over, ya
Love will keep me believing
Through the dark
Can you hear me calling
Holding on when I'm dreaming
Love is all, love is all, love is all

Holding on when I'm dreaming
Love is all, love is all, love is all
Love will keep me believing
Through the dark
Can you hear me calling
Holding on when I'm dreaming
Love is all, love is all, love is all

Like a tempest to the sea
I'm standing
Love is all, love is all, love is all


Part one

Bani woke up as the sun rays fell on her eyes. "Good morning Didi," she mumbled. No reply. She got up to find the room empty except herself. She shared her room with Karuna. "kya bat hai, Didi itna subha uth gayi, aur Sunday hain." She shrugged to herself and glanced at the calendar. "oh god! Bhul gaya kaise main?" she almost ran to the washroom to take a shower. She sang to herself, "tum paas aye, Yu muskuraye, hmm." Today was a special day for her. No, it's not her birthday, in fact it isnt' anyone's birthday. "Aj wooh aa raha hai, hamesha ke liye." She said to herself happily. The last eight months were complete pain. Cause that's the time when he has visited last. "Pata nehi samajh ti kya hai apne ap ko, 8 mahina se ghar nehi ata. May be he has got someone there." She chuckled , only she knew how impossible it is for him to get involved with some other girl. "I know you only love me." She whispered as she got dressed in a white salwar suit and put on some make up. Usually she'd never bother but today… she smiled as if he would notice.

When she came to the living room she found a cheerful Karuna having a hilarious conversation with Aditya. "Hi Dids, hi Adi bhaia, kya chal raha hai," "Good mornig Bani, kya baat hain, bohut khush dikh rahi ho." Asked a bemused Adi. Karuna said, "Of ho bhaia, samjha karo, aj koi aa raha hain ghar me." Adi, "Ahem kaun aa raha hain?" Bani blushed like anything. Karuna: Dekho na bhaia, yeh to laal ho ja rahi hai," Adi: tum bhi na Karuna, kyon cher rahi ho bachchi ko? Main chalta hu." Bani wanted to change the subject desperately, " Sunday pe bhi kaam?" Adi chuckled, "Uday Walia ke rein me koi Sunday funday nehi hota hain?" suddenly a voice coughed behind. "Mere bare me kuch keh raha ho tum log?" Adi muttered, "Mar gayi, nam liya aur aa ke hajir" then he said, "Nehi uncle, let's go." Uday smirked and left with Adi. Karuna dropped herself on a couch, "thanks god! Uncle ke paas Sunday Funday nehi hai, agar wooh pura din ghar pe rahen gi to socho." Bani rolled her eyes, "He's not that bad Dids." Karuna, "Tumhe to lage ga hi, Bari papa ka pyari beti jo ho."

Breakfast Table

Everyone is gathered. Jigs is in one of her moods. She is scolding Ranveer like anything. The poor boy is keeping his head down and having breakfast. He was used to this by now, "Ranveer! Your teacher said maths me Highest 98 hai, to tum itna kam kaise paya, kitne paise kharcha karte hai hum tumhare liye aur tum." Anu gave a frustrated look at Karuna who returned the same fashion. Krishna tried to calm Jigs, "Are kya hua, itna kyon dat rahi ho, is baar kam mila to kya hua, agli baar achchi kare gi." Jigs: Ap to bich me maat boliye, ap nehi jante ajkal ke bachche ko." Anu said, "Relax bhabi, akhir inhe mila kitna?" Jigs: Un se hi pucho, tum logo ka lad pyar se hi to bigarte ja raha hai.

Anu: hey Veer, how much have you got?

Ranveer: 97 and half.

Karuna: why I'm not shocked.

Anu chuckled and Jigs scowled, just then Pia entered the room wearing a midi jeans skirt and a white top which had sleeve only on one side. "I guess I'm not much late?" she took her seat between Bani and Anu. Anita at once said, "yeh kya pahen ke rakhi ho tumne, sharm nehi ati?" Pia pretended to examine her nails completely ignoring her Mami. Anita mutterd, "Bhoot kahika, bilkul apni Maa ke jaisa." Pia shot up from her seat, "kya kaha apne? Apko main last warnig de raha hu, agar ap phir se mere Ma ke bare me kuch bura kaha to mujhse bura koi nehi hoga. Na main apki khati hu na apka ghar me rehti hu, who r u to say bad things about Mom?" "Cool down Pia, what happened?" said a voice from behind. Suddenly all the anger swept away from Pia's face. "Bhaia!" she gave Tarun a fierce hug. Tarun hugged her back and touched the elders feet. Then he gave Karuna a sharp poke. "Yo dude. How're you? Really missed you" he settled himself in a chair. Karuna teased him, "Why should you miss me? You always remain surrounded by girls, nah?" Tarun winked at her. Krishna enquired, "Mera Jai kaha hai?" Tarun very playfully said, "Pakar ke le gaya."

Krishna: Kaun!

Tarun: kya kahu mamiji, ham airport me land karte hi local area ke sari ladkiya mere piche vagne laga….

Anu pinched: Tumhara piche ya Jai Bhaia ke piche?

Tarun: yaar mera piche, lekin main vaag ke ayi, to wooh kya karegi, Jai ko pakar ke le gaya, he's not as smart as me, nah?

Pia: Ap vaag ke ayi aur use pakad ke le gaya, kaise?

Tarun: Kya hain na ke jiske dil me kisike liye sachchi pyaar hota hai, use pakarna itna asaan nehi hain.

He directly gazed at Bani who flushed and ran from there. Tarun chuckled inwards at her behaviour.

Krishna: Dekh Tarun, pitunga tujhe, sach sach bata de, where is Jai?

Tarun: He has gone to Office.

Everyone: WHAT!

Tarun: Yes, Mamaji ne hame urgent call de kar yaha bulaya and he want to discuss something with Jai ASAP. So Jai direct office chala gaya.



Hope it isn't too boring. After all my first try to write anything 😛

purno 😊

👏 👏 👏 that was a really awesome part the poem at the beginning was really beautiful! haila jai and bani already love each other....awwwwwww now lets get rid of pia asap ao our jb can be together!bdw this meeting jai has with his dad it wont affect his and banis relationship will it?lolz the jigyasa and ranveer thing cracked me up 97 and half is low for her my parents owuld be so happpy if i got that much...and is there somehting oging on btwn tarun and karuna?! hehee update soon!

Originally posted by: sxcdevil

👏 👏 👏 that was a really awesome part the poem at the beginning was really beautiful! haila jai and bani already love each other....awwwwwww now lets get rid of pia asap ao our jb can be together!bdw this meeting jai has with his dad it wont affect his and banis relationship will it?lolz the jigyasa and ranveer thing cracked me up 97 and half is low for her my parents owuld be so happpy if i got that much...and is there somehting oging on btwn tarun and karuna?! hehee update soon!

Glad that you liked it. The poem is actually a song by Carmen Whalle, music Yanni. Tarun and Karuna has nothing to do, they're just great friends. Adding Jai with them , they'll make a trio. And the Jigs and Ranveer thing 😆 It always happen in our house, when my sis (Prachi) gets even half less than highest, Mom scolds her and do i have to mention that it is NOT a frequent case.😛

purno 😊