Pyar ke ek Kahani: A/N on pg 44, imp - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31

Wait, did you say on your first post that youldn't write?!πŸ˜•

Well I'm telling you now hun - you can, and how!!πŸ‘

I love this FF - it has so much family and happiness in itπŸ˜› (though I'm still trying to get used to all the mixed up relations.....don't worry, I'm a fast learner!πŸ˜‰)

Jigu is absaloutely impossible!!....Gosh, bechara Ranveer!!πŸ˜•

Love the relationship that all the kids share!!πŸ˜›.....If I'm not wrong then Ranveer is the newphew whereas all the others are cousin's right?

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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Ilove the new chracters!!!!!
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PLease CONT SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks
~Sunju
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
awesome update...
so I knew it...TB is what you have in mind...but make it JB...soon...please...
Thanks for the tree..
Rivs
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: sxcdevil

awesome update! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ awwwww....jai's dad is not gonna be round for long and jai has to join the business even though he dooesnt wnat to...what is uday 2nd secret...hmmmmmmm....bdw when is there gonna be a jb scence poor girl has bn wiating for him for ages....the scence btwn tarun,karuna, and jai was 2 funni!i could imagine it!



Thanks for replying. The second secret will come out soon, you are waiting for A JB scene? Let's see what I can do for you πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 18 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ash9

thank u for the family tree..i was soo confused.....
soooooo..........wht is the 2nd part of this secret???
where is bani?? πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊



Thanks for reply. So, the tree helped?

The 2nd part of secret in the Chapter after the next one I hope. πŸ˜›
And next chapter is all Banis.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Great part.
loved it.
plz cont. soon.



Thanks for the reply

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nibbles

Wait, did you say on your first post that youldn't write?!πŸ˜•


Well I'm telling you now hun - you can, and how!!πŸ‘


I love this FF - it has so much family and happiness in itπŸ˜› (though I'm still trying to get used to all the mixed up relations.....don't worry, I'm a fast learner!πŸ˜‰)


Jigu is absaloutely impossible!!....Gosh, bechara Ranveer!!πŸ˜•




Love the relationship that all the kids share!!πŸ˜›.....If I'm not wrong then Ranveer is the newphew whereas all the others are cousin's right?




Thanks that you liked it. I seriously don't write much, except you count pay reciets of gas bills
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purno


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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: basket

OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Ilove the new chracters!!!!!
πŸ‘


PLease CONT SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks
~Sunju





Thanks for replying.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: rivya

awesome update...
so I knew it...TB is what you have in mind...but make it JB...soon...please...
Thanks for the tree..
Rivs



Thanks for reply. Oh, you guessed that i have TB in my mind, or do I??? πŸ˜‰

After all, everyone's favourite couple is our JB πŸ˜†


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Posted: 18 years ago
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And in your eyes, I see ribbons of color
I see us,inside of each other
I feel my unconscious merge with yours
And I hear a voice say, "What's his is hers"

I'm falling into you
This dream could come true
And it feels so good, falling into you

I was afraid, to let you in here
Now I have learned, love can't be made in fear
Must begin to tumble down
And I can't even see the ground

I'm falling into you
This dream could come true
And it feels so good, falling into you
Falling like a leaf, falling like a star
Finding a belief, falling where you are

Catch me, don't let me drop!
Love me, don't ever stop!

So close your eyes, and let me kiss you
And while you sleep, I will miss you

Oh,I'm falling into you
This dream could come true
And it feels so good, falling into you
Falling like a leaf, falling like a star
Finding a belief, falling where you are

Falling into you
Falling into you
Falling into you


After lunch everyone went to their own business. Bani checked for her mom, "Good, she's gone off somewhere with Bari Ma. She entered her room and closed the door behind her. She opened her closet and brought out a beautiful yellow saree. Throughout the morning, she was unable to meet him privately as everyone made a fuss of him. During lunch, he's muttered to her to meet him after lunch in his room. After getting dressed Bani tiptoed toward his room.

She peeped in. it was empty. She was confused. She stepped in and immediately two things happened at once. She felt a strong arm grabbing her from the behind and heard the door being thudded close, following by a swift click which was unmistakably the lock sound. Her heart beat increased as he snaked his hand around her stomach under her pallu. She felt his hot breath on her neck. He nuzzled her neck softly and pressed his lips to her earlobes, "kaise ho love?"

Bani closed her eyes to deal with the emotion. That voice she almost everynight dreams of, the voice he uses only for her. "why do he ask questions after making me speechless?" asked Bani to herself. Bani licked her dry lips as she felt his lips hungrily grazing on the area of her collar bone. Very good! He expect a casual conversation like this? "You are impossible," whispered Bani under her breath. "I know" he said between his kisses, "That's why you love me so much."

He suddenly spinned her so that he could face her and cupped her face. Bani looked at those eyes, which takes her breath away anywhere, anytime. "You know Sir, I don't love you that much as you've assumed." He chuckled and placed a wet kiss on her cheek, "So it's your habit to go to guy's room and threw yourself to their arms?" "No sir, I do this only for one person alive, who has hypnotized me with his charms." She slid her hand around his neck. "Oh really sweetheart? May I have the honour of knowing that lucky guy's name?" his hand was roaming around her back like anything now. She noticed that he was pushing her towards the bed. Bani looked at him.."The guy is…" "The guy is..?" "Someone named Tarun, you know" said Bani and looked up to see the glow in his eyes which she was longing to see.

"Tarun? Yeh kaun hain, main to nehi pehchan ti hu." He said playfully. He gave her a slight push and she fell on the bed, with him following closely. " Hmm, kya nam hain, Tarun, Nah? Tarun ko to main baad me dekh lunga but who would save you from me now Bani Dixit? Apko to apna punishment abhi mil jayegi." "Kaisa punishment?" "You don't know? For teasing me so much after all these years, for being in every breath I took, for torturing me every night by coming into my dreams, for.. epic ho jayega Bani," she slid her hands under his shirt, "Phir to yeh punishment apko bhi milna chahiye" she pulled him closer and whispered in his ears, "For every sleepless night, for all the memories, for all those times alone, lost in a reverie. I love you,,I .." Bani couldn't finish her words as he securely sealed her mouth with his. They kept kissing each other with the passion they held to themselves for the last 8 months until they were breathless.

Unable to take the feeling Bani pushed him aside and jerked up but stopped mid way as he caught her pallu. He has already opened her blouse so she couldn't afford letting go the pallu. He hold her shoulderes from backside and ran a finger through her bare back. She shivered as he started putting lingering kisses all over her back. She closed her eyes as she felt him picking her up. She never cared anymore anything as she felt her pallu slipped from her top, dangling to the side. He gasped, "Bani.. you have no idea what you do to me. I loose my every control near you." He gently placed her in the bed. As he took her in his arms, the last words audible was her whisper, "I love you, Jai" she hold him tightly near her and pulled himcloser. Soon both of them were lost in themselves, lost in their passion, lost in their paradise.

Jai looked lovingly at Bani who was in his arms, eyes closed. He smiled. He's learnt to love by loving her, he's loved her even before he knew what love means. Since his childhood he's always loved he and always loved by her. Living in a state like US, having handsome features, he has experienced many girls surrounding him everytime, but he's never lost control to any of them, till date, no girl was able to seduce him in any occasion. He was more famous for his control of emotions than any other qualities. But in front of her he seems to lose all controls, he becomes too vulnerable to her. "kabhi kabhi daar lagne lagta hai is pyar ko, itna pyar kyon karti hu main in he,? He caressed her soft cheek, a cute smile appeared on her lips. He couldn't help but smile himself. This feeling was awesome, knowing that she's mine, only mine. He ran his finger over her lips, which is badly bruised now. The smile of her face grew. God! He thought, she looks so cute. "Bani.." "Humm?" "Mom kisi bhi vaqt wapas aa sakti hain," he hated to do this but know that he has to. She opened her eyes and they stared at each others eyes for some more times. Then she slowly got up, wrapped with the bed sheet, gathered her clothes, trying hard to keep the hair out of her face. She went to the washroom and got dressed. She came back and planted a small kiss on his forhead. Then she left. Jai looked at the direction she went for some time. He sighed, " I never knew the world would be so beautiful to me, if I had not looked into your eyes."
Edited by TCP#10 - 18 years ago

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