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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello 😃 . While every KR fan is praying for Kriya's return, such OS looks mean on our part 🤔 *SPOILER ALERT! :P* But then we just had to write something!. And get over with it and this was the outcome.

Though there were no inspirations as such but it reminded us of Clay- One Tree Hill and nope, story is not related with him in anyway. But if you know the character, you'd know why the name is mentioned.

Lastly, though we don't watch the show, it would be great if Kriya returns,It would make a lot more sense probably 🥱

Enjoy!

KR OS : Let Go.

He entered the humongous stadium and could see the stage right at the center. It was heavily lit and the few people who were left there were packing up. He walked slowly, taking his time and every now and then stopping in his tracks.

Soon after he reached backstage, he spotted her sitting with her mates. If he didn't know her better, he would have misjudged that smile for a real one.

He moved closer and she saw him; excused herself from the company and walked up to him.

"Sorry I couldn't make it" he said a little apprehensive, how many times had he said that?

"That's alright, I'm glad you're here" she said monotonously and gestured towards the chairs.

He couldn't understand what bothered him more, the fact that she didn't question him for his absence or that she didn't even look at him to acknowledge the excuse.

Nevertheless he followed her.

They sat on their chairs and none of them spoke. He almost chuckled at the thought of her being so quiet and she wondered why he wouldn't say a thing.

"You'll have something?"

"You'd anyway order"

She smiled briefly and slightly nodded, and signaled a man for two plates of food.

"How's everything been?.Been busy with the studio?

"Yeah kind of, we signed a huge contract last week. Vishal has been out of town for work, so have been free at home".

"Even Nisha has been busy with her work; she wanted to come to the concert. And yeah said congrats for the album" he replied and she smiled.

And the silence took over. This was usual now.

"I wonder if we were ever meant to be Kriya" he blurted out and looked alarmed. He wasn't supposed to say this aloud and mentally face-palmed himself. He looked at her but there came no reaction from her instead she smiled weakly.

"I don't know...maybe we were maybe not" she replied.

"Weren't we good enough?" he asked earnestly.

"We were great together, close to perfection. Everything was.. but things happen. We may have been with the right person but not the correct time or place. It wasn't our time Reyansh" she paused and looked at him "I don't blame you for what happened and you should stop doing it too. It'd been 7 years, it's time to let go off those things. It's time to move on Reyansh. You love Nisha and I love Vishal and we know it. Let it go now" she answered and his lips curved up in a smile.

"And food is here!. Get up fast, I'm starving here" she said getting up and ignoring the whole serious talk.

And he smiled to himself, it was the first time in 7 years that they had opened up and talked on this topic and he was content. There was no hesitation, no second thought and moreover no regrets.

He got up, It was time to let go off those bondage now for the memories will always be there'.

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Adios,

Shreya and Kanishtha


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Posted: 12 years ago
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d write-up was beautiful👏👏

fabulous work👍🏼

sad endinggg


Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS

the way its was portrayed was interesting 😉
Edited by zona_malik - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I knew u both wil cum up with sumthng like dis only.. .
I just worndr,cnt u write any happy OS 4 KR??
Uff. .kitne aise OS likhoge,
sorry to sound rude. .bt, mujhe aise OS bilkul pasand nai. . .
I realy love ur write up's,
bt,aise KR mujhe bilkul pasand nai. .so,nxt time u write sumthng like dis,plz dnt PM me. . .
Again m sorry to sound rude. . .
N hey dat dosnt mean u wnt snd me pm's 4 ur works k. . .
bt
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhukumari

I knew u both wil cum up with sumthng like dis only.. .
I just worndr,cnt u write any happy OS 4 KR??
Uff. .kitne aise OS likhoge,
sorry to sound rude. .bt, mujhe aise OS bilkul pasand nai. . .
I realy love ur write up's,
bt,aise KR mujhe bilkul pasand nai. .so,nxt time u write sumthng like dis,plz dnt PM me. . .
Again m sorry to sound rude. . .
N hey dat dosnt mean u wnt snd me pm's 4 ur works k. . .
bt


Its okay,chill 😆
It feels nice ki kisi ne sahi se comment toh kiya, not for the sake of doing it. Appreciated
LOL..expected ki aisa kuch likehnege,really that obvious?😆
KR inspires and actually connects us to write sad stuff maybe because their story was left half-way and for all the other reasons. Anyway will pakka write TRY to write something happy if Kriya comes back!

Thanks for commenting so honestly Madhu and for always being a loyal reader.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesum...do continue soon...! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: muzzy_sk



Its okay,chill😆
It feels nice ki kisi ne sahi se comment toh kiya, not for the sake of doing it.Appreciated
LOL..expected ki aisa kuch likehnege,really that obvious?😆
KR inspires and actually connects us to write sad stuff maybe because their story was left half-way and for all the other reasons. Anyway will pakka write TRY to write something happy if Kriya comes back!

[DIV]Thanks for commenting so honestly Madhu and foralwaysbeing a loyal reader.🤗

as i already mentioned i seriously love ur write ups. .n i have literally stalked all ur works 🤣 so hnest coment toh dena hi tha :-P
and wen it cums to KR as u said their story was incomplete ,dis is the reason i want to read complete KR story,where KR r 2gethr 4ver as i want them to be 2gethr 4ver always. . . . . . .
Hehehe. .see same thng inspires us bt in a diff. Way. .
And yes,if u TRY n came up with sumthng,trust me i wud b the happiest reader here. . . .
So do try. .:-)
and issi ke saath,
"SABSE LOYAL READER KA AWARD MILTA HAI
MADHU KO. . . . ."

THANK U. .thank u. .:-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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no comment like my jeery (madhu) said i hate sad ending of Kr nd in ur os its alwys sad ending :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great chapter 1 was well godd and fabulous... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I really liked it ... :)
but sad ending ...
but it'ss okkk ... coz hamesha happy hoga toh diabetes ho jayegi
isliye kabhi kabhi sad wale bhi chalte h ...
Amazingly written .. :)

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