BAARA SAASE MERI...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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BAARA SAASE MERI...
CONCEPT:


"I'm the one that's got to die when it's time for me to die, so let me live my life the way I want to."

"Death ends a life, not a relationship."

All this thought just express the love can never end.if you love someone you will get it even if you are on your death bed.love is sunshine,love is a bird,love is water,love is freedom...
you can't take it or grab it you have to achieve it!

This is all about my coming story...love immortal...love baara saase meri...

PROLOGUE:

Maan:geet mujhe yaha nahi marna...please mujhe yaha se le chalo please...
Geet:maan par doctor ne...
Maan: doctor bhi kuch nahi kar payega geet please le chalo...
Geet got tears in her eyes...she kissed his forehead...
Geet: I LOVE YOU MAAN...LOVE YOU SO VERY MUCH...
Maan: I LOVE YOU TOO GEET...

CHARACTER:

Maan singh khurana:
A super duper hot young boy.topper in the school,college.stays in delhi.
maan only have his mom with him.his dad die when he was very small.he love to race...he was a champion in running.loves to race...race was his life but he had heart problem...
doctor have given him 2 years to leave his whole life according to him...he got to know he have a heart problem when he was in 9th.his best friend geet...geet singhania...his childwood love...his life!

Geet singhania:
A good looking girl.belongs to a good family.if maan is topper then geet is duffer...
brain...she have it but don't like to use it...as it is only use to dream her & maan's future...
she knows that maan have a heart problem...but still she loves him...
the more they grow the more she loved him...

Ragini:
maan's mom...love maan a lot can do any thing...what ever she loved went away from her...first her husband now her son!

Rano and mohan:
geet's parent...loves geet a lot can do anything to keep her happy...just the best parent in the world!

Rajat:
topper of mumbai D.J shaagvi college of engineering.senior to maan & geet...had a crush on geet...
was a perfect guy in all means & a girl could desire for...hot,good looks & topper...a rich guy!


plze let me know whoz it...
hey guyz I just want to tell you all that dis story is not my concept I have taken this concept from a channel & would lke to explore the concept more...if you feel to read then continue or else plz don't read if you feel I hv taken it 4m a channel...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sound great waiting 4 first part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yeh sad story toh nehi hai na...



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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept and prologue.Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I will comment properly...but first u please clear whether it has sad ending or not...

I am sorry but I can't read story where Maan or Geet die...

I am reading stories here to make me happy not depressed...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6





I will comment properly...but first u please clear whether it has sad ending or not...

I am sorry but I can't read story where Maan or Geet die...

I am reading stories here to make me happy not depressed...



no it will not hv a happy ending...but it will show u a immortal love story if u want u can continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superbb
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Don't you think the concept is VERY "similar" to an episodic of Yeh Hai Aashiqui, airing on Bindass that starred Vishal and Abigail?? Wherein the hero intentionally has a race with that senior guy who has a crush on the heroine,inspite of knowing that running would kill him since he has a weak heart and ultimately dies in the heroine's lap sharing his 'baara saansein' with her... I appreciate the fact that you are intent on propagating a true and beautiful story, but giving the episodic its due credit wouldn't have hurt. Not plagiarising,are you? eh??👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tomchi94

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Don't you think the concept is VERY "similar" to an episodic of Yeh Hai Aashiqui, airing on Bindass that starred Vishal and Abigail?? Wherein the hero intentionally has a race with that senior guy who has a crush on the heroine,inspite of knowing that running would kill him since he has a weak heart and ultimately dies in the heroine's lap sharing his 'baara saansein' with her... I appreciate the fact that you are intent on propagating a true and beautiful story, but giving the episodic its due credit wouldn't have hurt. Not plagiarising,are you? eh??</font>👏



hey I m writing the same story...& I ws going 2 mention in my 1st part that I have taken this story from the channel & I m going to add few more 2 it...

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