~Main Rang Sharbaton Ka~ *new chap 6 pg 48* pms later

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello mentals!!! i mean arjun deewanis!🤣 i know i've been away since a long time...kya karo..kuch probs the...but as i tod u earlier i can neva live peacefully without AF and my lovely AFians!!! so here comes another story! i had this in mind since a long time..so aaj finally anjaam de diya..!
so here comes a simple,crazy,stupid si cute si love story!
(INDEX-DOWN)



PART 1

Saakshi sleepily climbed the stairs of her college bus. She looked up to see her friend sitting in the first seat,right behind the driver. She made a face at her.

She went and sat next to her and asked "why are you sitting in the front???"


"all because of u..the driver has warned us to sit in the front.." her friend Shimone replied.


"but why?" saakshi asked almost getting upto to fight with the driver.


"saakshi..wait..." shimone murmured but Saakshi had already gotten up.


Her eyes fell on a person sitting in the adjacent seat of the driver.


"new guy?" she thought. She looked more..forgetting that she was standing and staring at an unknown guy with everyone witnessing her wierd antic.


Shimone pulled her down and made her sit. "what are u doing saakshi???" she asked "sit down.


Saakshi reluctantly sat down still looking at that guy.


"who is he?" she asked.


"i don't know..must be some new guy" shimone said uninterested.


"he's in 11th too?" saakshi asked still looking at him.


"ayyo! Madam how will i know?"shimone replied in an irritated tone. Saakshi shot one glare at Shimone.


Shimone began to laugh. Saakshi also laughed.


"shhh!!!!!!!!" the driver whispered. "peeche e aage bulaya hain..zyada zabaan chali tho bus se nikha doonga"he said angrily.


That guy turned back at Saakshi. Saakshi too saw him at the same instant. Saakshi was lost.He was sooo handsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!


"hayyyeee" her heart was singing. He turned around.


Saakshi excitedly whispered " omg he's sooo hot" to shimone.


"shhh...itna zor se matt bolo" shim covered her mouth. "he?? Hmm...yaa...hot tho wo hain.." shim said casually.


"sirf hot??? Omg tumne uske aankhein dekhe???" saakshi asked jumpin with joy.


"what's wrong with u ?" shim asked.


"arey..yaar.ye ladka...itna hottt" saakshi went on and on.


Every 2 seconds she was looking at him. The mirror(bus ke side mirrors) was in such a way ki they both could see each other only.


Saakshi was looking from the corner of her eye. He noticed it and dismissed it but later realised her stares were on purpose. He still didn't care much and looked in front. The bus came to a halt. They ahd reached their college. She got down first and stared back to see him but he was busy in his mobile. She turned around and went to her class.


So how was it??? plz like and comment!

nd few clarifications : m in Karnataka so, 11th in college is known as 1PUC ...so basically saakshi is studying 11th in a college..so we say she's in 1puc..i dont know in other places wat its called...like in AP(now in two parts😆) they said 1st year intermediate nd all...!

so i hope u understand.

NO SILENT READING! OTHERWISE I'LL HAUNT U IN UR DREAMS!


INDEX

CHAP 1: LOOK UP😆

CHAP 2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92201879

CHAP 3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92577068

CHAP 4 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93169267

CHAP 5 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95232461

CHAP 6 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3733991/main-rang-sharbaton-ka-new-chap-6-pg-48-pms-later

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Liki mereko pm nahi mila😒
Nahii i didnt feel bad😆😆
Well i have a serious doubt...kahin tum sakshi nahin ho nah in the story..bolo bolo🤣
Lovely start...continue soon guruji👍🏼🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow...really liked ur story...!!! 😛
Well if in the show the show flashbacks of sakshi ...we could really expct smthng like this 😆😆
( happy flashbacks of course...)😃
cont soon...will b waiting...!!!!
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start
cont soon👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yayy! ur back! M happy!!
Hope all of your problems have been solved, aur agar nahi to main unko SYS kardeti hoon!

Loved it, is the new guy who I think he is?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really nice one dear...

Please continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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olalalallala ..😳. wowww really nice yaar ...👏... continue soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

Nice start..

Continue soon!

hey mithuz! long time!
nyways thank u soo much😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PoohLover

Liki mereko pm nahi mila😒

Nahii i didnt feel bad😆😆
Well i have a serious doubt...kahin tum sakshi nahin ho nah in the story..bolo bolo🤣
Lovely start...continue soon guruji👍🏼🤗


arey madam ji...when i was writing it..ma tution teacher came so i juts posted the update nd shut ma lappy...i sent pms at around 9..!
nyways!! lol...um...ummm...main saakshi nahin hoon😉
aww main guruji??? kis cheez ki guru hoon main?

pooh!! i love u soo much man...u have always read my updates nd commented! will neva forget ya !😳😊
thank u sooo much!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAKSHI..

Wow...really liked ur story...!!! 😛
Well if in the show the show flashbacks of sakshi ...we could really expct smthng like this 😆😆
( happy flashbacks of course...)😃
cont soon...will b waiting...!!!!
😊


arey yaaar! actually sach kahu tho mere aur saakshi ke beech koyi diff hi nahin...m like her only😆🤣
always chitter-chatter...always irritating people!😆😆
thank u sooo much saakshi!!🤣( kya yaar tere parents ko koyi aur naam nahi sooja??)😆

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