~Main Rang Sharbaton Ka~ *new chap 6 pg 48* pms later - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
just read all 3 updates
wonderful writing!
concept is so different... staring vala love
continue soon yaar
thank god naina was able to help u
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Posted: 11 years ago
Liki..take care..jus read abt ur back pain... but plzzz update soon..lol 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naz_2012

Liki..take care..jus read abt ur back pain... but plzzz update soon..lol 😆


chi chi kaise kaise dost mile hain mujhe🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
oyee Liki ..sentence ke Aage Ka "Take Care" toh dekh ..huh !!! lol 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naz_2012

oyee Liki ..sentence ke Aage Ka "Take Care" toh dekh ..huh !!! lol 😆


lol! update milne wala hain abhi!😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

holla !😃 so here comes nxt chapter of tis super cute FF(atleast mere liye cute hain😎)HOLD ON! b4 u read this update thod tips deti hoon

*plz read it slowly..i know yaha pe trains bohut hain..but aaj ke liye tortoise ban jao..aur slowly read karo ok?😳

*computer users just follow d abuc tip

*mobile users wid slow internet(like me😆..wat to do i neva recharge😆) sing the song in ur head

*mobile users with fast internet play the song yaar

*other probs hain tho mujhe nahin pata🤣

chalo now u can read!😃😃




PART 4


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=GnzZyGQi2ps[/YOUTUBE]


The air was cool. Saakshi shivered due to her sleeveless white short dress . The sky was black and the water was making a silent noise. she stood on the inverted parabolic shaped bridge along a narrow river. The moon shone on her. Her loose hairs flew across her face,suddenly a flower came and got stuck in her hair. She tried to remove it but she felt a pair of rough hands removing them.



She turned and looked at him.It was him.He looked sooo handsome in a loose white shirt and... HIS EYES. She wished she could just keep staring at him like this. Her heart was pounding and singing its own song. She looked at him dearly. He smiled. God his smile! She wished she could die,for she had a sense of achievement. She could live for the rest of her life just looking at him smile.


He drew up his hand to her face. He tenderly touched her cheeks making her close her eyes. She began shivering under his touch.His touch.Damn! very tantalizing. He then took her hand in his other hand and pulled her close. Their bodies were a mere 2cm away from any contact.


She knew she could just melt,she was actually. Its like how butter melts when it comes in contact with heat,so blissfully,so smoothly she could melt at his touch. She felt him touching her waist. She blushed,and moved close as he pulled her. He traced her face with his eyes. All the while her eyes were stuck on his face. So deliciously handsome! How can someone be soo handsome? It should be a crime to look so good,she thought.


A strand of her hair flew and placed itself on her nose not letting go. He moved his hands slowly to her nose and touched it gently and removed it.So gentle. She felt her body liquids rushing from places to places. She was anxious and nervous. He slowly cupped her face and looked deep into her eyes..she built up the courage and held his hands.


Their lips tremblingly came close,she held his hands. Just when they were few centimetres apart,he smiled making her blush...she turned and ran away..just to be caught by him.He caught hold of her hand.Her chest began to pound.


He came close,she could feel him coming closer,she could feel her surroundings being filled with the smell of his cologne. He turned her around making her crash on him..he looked at her..she looked at him. She felt like she belonged here,with him,like this..so close.


He suddenly held her by her waist and pulled her up slowly. With his other hand he pulled up her chin and brought his lips closer. Her breathing rate increased , she felt her body becoming cold at his touch. The agony of being so close,the excitement of her lips on his,the feeling of drowning in him made her head spin at a high speed. Their lips came close,even more close and now they jo..in..ed...

"saakshi?!??!?!?!!?!?!??!???!??!?!??!??!!"

Saakshi got up startled.

"saakshi what r u doing? How dare u sleep in my class?" her teacher screamed.

"what are you day dreaming about?" she asked coming to her seat.

"ma'am..woh..i mean..ma'am..m sorry..." saakshi pleaded..

The teacher just shot one glare and excused her.

"dekha? Advantage of pataoing all the teachers!" saakshi giggled.

"btw accha kaasa sapna kharaab kar diya!" she gritted.

"saakshi??" her teacher shouted again.

"sorry ma'am" she made such a puppy face that even Hitler would melt!

"later" she whispered to Shimone. And they busied themselves in the class.

Saakshi just thought about her dream once more. "o god..i know real life mein aisa nahin hota..par agar ho jaye tho...!" she smiled as she wrote the notes which were being dictated.


She looked at her watch. Just 10 mins and she would see him. A big smile spread on her face. She blushed thinking once more about the dream she just saw!


if only the silent readers would comment😭 chalo koyi baat nahin!

hey guys i know..ki saakshi ki tarah aapko bhi atleast aisa sapna tho aaya hoga! then plz when u cmnt share ur crazy dreams !

and ha COMMENT aur LIKE must hain boss!

btw congratulate me: 1. m eating my fav coffee ice cream😆

2. Today was the last dy of college! frm tom hols! 🥳

but that doesnt mean frequent updates :P

Edited by likithakmh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
haaye maar dala! kya dream thaa..soo romantic..!! poor sakshi..got scolding..lol.. umm recently tha mera ek dream..nt romantic bt vry special 😳 😳 cont sn
Edited by naz_2012 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
baba re..
maar daala..
awesome update.
continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unres!
Likiii!! How's ur back now?

Alsoo me loved it! mujhe lag hi raha tha ke dream hoga, 😆
lekin kya dream tha!! Ufff!!☺️ m happy ji!!
hmm mujhe to ek aya tha, way back, but that's not for kids to read if you know what I mean☺️🤣
Edited by Sakuu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update ji
lovely
ur pm lol
perfect
well shaa n arjun both my bro
so.. no dreams on dat case lol

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