~Main Rang Sharbaton Ka~ *new chap 6 pg 48* pms later - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
Liki please dont do this nah..im sure there must be some problem and it'll be okay soon...we looove you all..please dont do this🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey sweetie...plz dnt so this yarr...i sooo badly eagerly wait for ur updates...
holy crap...some problem mst b with the forum...

bt plz dnt get hyper nd take such a decision...

plz sweetie...think abt us...

atleast think abt ur Aish na...

love
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Posted: 11 years ago
liku! Hve u gone nuts?? Dont do dis yaarrraa! We luvvv u! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
@sakuu i pmed naina! she said she'll PM one of the GMs..she thinks it might be a technical error
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakuu

did you pm naina? What did she say?

Y isn't ut working? I was able to post my OS, but not your part.. Perhaps try to do it in 2 bits/


trust me i tried to post it in two parts a gazillion times😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
aaeee naaiii... u wont stop dis... kuch na kuch solution mil jayga..bt plzzz continue it... i jus luv ur writing... "pleejj requesht"
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Posted: 11 years ago
Everything will be sorted dear...dont worry..chill maaro...
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Posted: 11 years ago

yes after threatening to leave for the second time m back!🤣 but lemme tell u one thing i was really PISSED!😡 i've got this really bad temper ...😭...god i've to control! very bad temper!😡

now chuck it. I couldnt post this update since 2 days..i felt terrible ppl! i got soo irritated and then came Naina(thank u sakuu fr suggesting. I owe u everything👏) ! man i cannot thank her enough! she literally saved my life..this story is very special to me!

A BIG THANKS TO NAINA! everyone who actually like this story thank Naina for having a taste of the 3rd part!

and last but never the least! my readers! i am overjoyed!sakku,aisha,pooh,shanaya😳,nazneen,amrita! ppl thank u soo much especially for holding onto me!

and my beautiful readers! thank u soo much evryone! m sorry if i havent replied to evryone's comments! will try to do frm this update! thank u sooo much ppl!

coming back to the update! i hope u like it and enjoy it. and yeah,its long and i wrote it 2 times😭



PART 3


Out of uncontrollable excitement she said "he smiled!!!!!!"rather loudly making him turn around and look at her.

Their eyes locked for a brief 3 seconds and later Saakshi couldn't stop the blush creeping onto her face so she looked away lowering her eyes biting her lip. He looked away too. She then looked at him to find him staring at her from the mirror. She was surprised! She blushed and looked away.

When the bus was nearing her stop,she found him dozing.

"ahhh!!!!" she thought.

"why does he sleep always when my stop comes!??!" she screamed into Shimone's ears.

Shimone began to laugh at Saakshi's condition.

"shut up!" saakshi said. "u don't know how it feels!" she added.

Saakshi looked again at him in exasperation. "kitna sotha hain!"

" o btw..u know what happened yesterday...? shimone asked.

"what.." saakshi asked in an non-enthusiastic tone.

"its about him!" shimone announced giggling between words.

Saakshi sprang at her. "what happened??" she asked excitedly.

Shimone hit her head looking at this mental,crazy best friend oh hers!

"hahahah...he...he..hahhaahha" shimone was laughing.

"shimone!!!! Tell...shim!! tell...otherwise i'll kill u" saakshi screamed.

"yest...he was sleeping like this only..then the driver applied brakes because some cow came in front..hahh..then..hahahahhh..."

"then wat shim!!?" saakshi asked..this tym..a little irritated.

"he fell off the seat!!" shimone said and burst out laughing.

Shimone was laughing non-stop.

Saakshi was angry at first because of Shim making fun of her guy' ! but later imagined the entire scenario and began to laugh.

"omg...ahahahhahahahahahaha" saakshi laughed.

Laughing, she gazed at him cutely. "stupid..! u should've been more careful." She said silently to him through her eyes. "it must've hurt" she thought and felt bad for him.

The bus came to a halt. Saakshi came out of her thoughts and got down as her stop has come. As soon as her feet touched groud,she looked up at him. still sleeping. But! OMG!! How cute he looked! His eyes!! My god!!! his eyes were definitely the best feature.

The bus left and Saakshi crossed the road to reach her house which was situated on the other end of the busy road. She was thinking about him as she crossed. No stranger has affected her so much. Yes! He's till a stranger but somewhere in her heart..she thought she knew him too well! She had something for him. he is soo attractive,his looks his EYES!! Its like everyday she decides not to look at him but inturn falls for him everyday. His personality just pulls her to himself making her stare at him shamelessly.

Ahh!! The confusion! You cannot like a person like this suddenly she thought. But!! Oh god!!! she was dead confused. It was like some alien felings slowly creeping into her body taking control of her mind and heart. Infacuation!? Maybe. ...Love...no reply!

She went into her room and fell on the her bed and turned around to face the ceiling.

"you don't know his name" she said at first.

"you don't know anything about him" she added.

"you don't know him at all!!!!!!!!!!" she told herself.

"but i want him.." she muttered silently. In 16 years Saakshi Anand has had numerous crushes but for the first time,she thought that it was above a crush.

"its been a month..." she thought.. "the way he looks at me...does he like me too?"

Next day!

"saakshi u have to talk to him!" sumedha instructed as she tossed a choc in her mouth.

"wat..no are u mad??!" saakshi blurted out.

"dude just go say hi..! speak to him like u speak to other guys!" sumedha said bewildered.

"hey girls!!!" said Shashank spreading his arms as he approached the girls.

Shashank was an 18-year-old down-to- earth kinda guy! His heart-melting smile and his hoarse manly voice made him a favourite among all the girls in college,much to Shimone's disappointment ofcourse.

"lo aa gaya tera majnu" saakshi joked at shimone.

Shimone laughed and got up to hug him.

"jeez. Get a room" sumedha said and high-fived saakshi.

Shashank sat with them. Their chiter-chatter continued until Shimone's eyes caught a pair of brown eyes staring at her table.

"W*F" she said to herself in excitement.

"saakshi!!!" she said pulling saakshi close to her.

"og god..! what happened??" saakshi asked.

"he's here!!!!!!!!!!!!" shimone said.

Saakshi's eyebrows pulled up as her eyes resembled eggs. "what r u saying!!?!? Where??" she asked and looked around immidiatedly to find a gorgeous face staring at her. She immediately looked down shyly.

Sumedha peeped and saw him.

"yaaar ye humesha itna serious kyun rehtha hain??" she asked.

"yahi tho prob hain!...but jab wo smile karta hain..hayeee..." saakshi said dreamily.


"ya ! i agree..he looks hot when he smiles!! Very very handsome!" shimone adds much to Shashank's irritation.

"my heart literally starts to jump when i see him smile!" saakshi added.

The bell rang. Break over! They had to go to their respective classes. Saakshi and shimone were in one class while Sumedha was in the other section and Shashank was in 12th!

The girls formed a line and moved along the boys line beside them. Saakshi could feel him looking at her from behind. She looked down nervously as she began to climb the stairs. suddenly she felt something soft brush against her hand. She looked up in surprise and saw him walking infront of her. Oh Damn! First Touch!


so how was it? Do LIKE and COMMENT!

Edited by likithakmh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unres! Yayay! Post hogaya!!
loved it, abhi to bas smile and touch hua hai, abhi in dono mein se baat kaun shuru karega?
Aur abh to tum uss bechare ka naamkaran kardo😆
Waise post q nahi ho raha tha?
P.s. Waise mujhe thanks q? I am pretty selfish hun, I love reading your stories😳
Aur Waise bhi dosti mein no thanks and no sorry
Edited by Sakuu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakuu

Unres! Yayay! Post hogaya!!

loved it, abhi to bas smile and touch hua hai, abhi in dono mein se baat kaun shuru karega?
Aur abh to tum uss bechare ka naamkaran kardo😆
Waise post q nahi ho raha tha?


lol🤣 sakuu! baatein tho itni jaldi shru nahin hongi😳
naamkaran bhi itni jaldi nahin hoga😉

oh god sakkuu😳 main tumhe jitna bhi thank u kahu woh kam hain yaar! seriously thank u soo much! update se pehle maine tumhara naam mention kiya hain dekh😆(chal tu ab mere wajeh se famous ho gayi😆🤣..just kidding😳)

thank u sooo much yaar!
and ha! update post nahin ho rahi thi because of one line nd that is

"ahaha(this word was very long)" shimone was laughing non-stop!

W*F rite?😆

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