The Locket (10), MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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dqno1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: custodian75
Beautiful update. Just loved it. Just wanted to go on reading.
Tara realizes that she has hurt Dev and wants to take away the hurt. Though she wants to stay away from Dev, it's tough for her to stay away from him.

Thank you😃

Yes it is tough for Tara but I want her to be tough just to prove the point that even if you are alone, you can be strong. It does not mean you are any less a woman.

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dqno1

@dqno1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

2 fruits a day... maan bhool tho nahi gaya?

CAPTION: True beauty is not skin deep. It is in every pore.

Lovely pic... Maan nahi bhulega.. 😃

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rsusmita

@rsusmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

just loved the part dear

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dqno1

@dqno1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: rsusmita
just loved the part dear

Thanks Susmi😃

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Edited my comment on Pgs 20 and 30

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dqno1

@dqno1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: heytal
Awesome update Avi
😃

Pinky's Bhabhi is such an opportunist😡
coaxing her sis to phasao MSK
Sapne bhi aukaad mein reh kar dekhne chahiye

Maan toh sirf Geet ka hain😳

Poor Geet heard it all but I'm so glad Maan too knows now
and how well he not only controlled his temper but also left the place knowing Geet was hurt and insulted

Both Maaneet's self introspection was very well penned down
sometimes even knowing the answers we tend to get influenced or hurt by situations but I guess these hitches only make the foundation stronger😳

The way Maan eased off her fear, insecurity and doubts by distracting her and then in a very subtle but direct way put forward his POV and comforted her😃

He is still not MSK yet. Teenage years and growing up. It is hard to show him tough. He will be later in the story when he comes back from London.

Haaye yeh Delhi site seeing😎
jab guide MSK ho toh sab kuch apne aap dreamy ho jaata hain , hain na😳

But truly Mughal architechture's and their monuments are truly our country's pride specuially some symbolizing Immortal Love😊
I want to save the Taj for later so this was the build up for it.

Loved the song so perfectly fitting here😛

Thank you so much Avi for this lovely update
It was really needed to push forward Maaneet relation
😃

Hugs
🤗

Yes, I have a couple more past updates and then we will be in present. Everything else will simply be flashbacks.

Thanks Heytal. I know you are busy but your encouragement is one of the foundations for me to continue.🤗

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

not a pleasent one but still i loved it😃

agla update kab milega?

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dqno1

@dqno1

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

not a pleasent one but still i loved it😃

agla update kab milega?

ande ka funda..😆

haven't written yet... kya likhu past ya present?

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: dqno1

ande ka funda..😆

haven't written yet... kya likhu past ya present?

i really wanna know more of past...

if its dev tara part... then surely what happened after the hug and the kiss...

then where is geet??

then ofcourse maaneet... they both were so happy after that nite.. uske baad kya hua??

bas ithna sa khwaab hai😳

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#240

absolutely amazing part it was Avi...loved evry bit of it...wrapping up the story is a very sad news...but then its ur choice...anyways thanku for being here...its a great relief reading ur story..it takes my mind away from many of the bad things happening in my life...and IF is the one of the major source thats helping me in surviving/...