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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys!
Lol lovely to see such a nice response even before i posted, thanks a lot 😊
Just like the CVS I've put in lots of popats 😆
Hope u like it

7 years of their marriage, an adorable child, a hectic life, a few tragedies, unforgettable memories.. Yet naitik and akshara's love had not died, their romance had not died, nothing had changed.. just as akshara had wanted it to be! She wanted hers and naitiks relationship to always have love, understanding and trust. She had them all and felt like the luckiest girl on the planet..


"Trrring" naitiks alarm went on! He tossed and turned in bed and gradually opened his eyes to see the two very people he loved the most in the world. His carbon copy, his little Naksh! And his lovely wife akshara.. He too, felt like the luckiest man on the planet!
He turned off the alarm and quickly showered and changed.. he had lots to do.
As he walked back into the room, he heard akshara attempting to wake Naksh up for school..
And Naksh kept on saying "two minutes mamma" it reminded naitik of his childhood, the few precious minutes of sleep in the morning..though he knew Naksh would get late if he didn't wake up JUST now.

Naitik:Chalo Naksh, Uth Jao!
Naksh rubbed his eyes and got up, he sleepily went to the washroom to wash his face, brush his teeth, and do the daily rituals!
Naitik seizing the moment, grabbed akshara..his hands around her waist, his eyes locked into hers for a moment just when akshara realised what he was doing. *sigh she thought naitik was still the cute naughty little husband shed married 7 years ago..*
She pinched him on his arm and pushed him back.. "chodiyee mujhe.."
Naitik: kya akshara? Good morning he tou wish kar raha tha! Taake Meri aur Apki morning achi guzre
Akshara smiled!
He quickly pulled her in his arms and hugged her tight! They both got lost in their own magical world for a moment until...

Gayatri:Munna!!!
They both went down stairs...akshara quickly dressed Duggu Up and made him leave for school..
Meanwhile, naitik had breakfast and as he was gulping down his orange juice he got a call from his international client who had sent in a ticket for him to come to Macau to display his company's designs..naitik agreed that he would go..

He told his family about it, naitik suggested to take akshara along
But ...
Akshara: naitik! Agar duggu nahi jaye ga tou maza bhi nahi ayega aur woh Hamare saath aaa bhi nahi Sakta coz uska school hai..
Everyone nods in agreement


Upstairs, in their room.
Naitik and akshara have a fight.
Naitik: Kya Hogaya hAi Apko akshara? Apko mere saath nahi jaaana? Hame waise hi ek doosre ke saath time hi Kab Milta hai ab? Theek hai agar Apko nahi jana tou mat jaye
Akshara: arey naitik ye baat nahi hai, ab Sab Pehle jaisa tou nahi raha na..
Naitik (in a disheartened voice) haan Pehle jaisa kuch nahi raha

Naitik remembered the time when akshara was dying to go abroad with him after their marriage! *flashback*
They don't talk to each other for the rest of the day.
Akshara feels bad to have disappointed her, but she really had been confused..

The next day, everybody bid their farewells to naitik and he ignored akshara..and left
Akshara felt terrible!
Naitik had gone for 5 days and she missed him already!
After duggu fell asleep that night..akshara went to talk to gayatri? She asked if she could go to naitik and surprise him as he was mad at her?
Gayatri said okay if u want to.. But I won't let lalla go I will take care of him while u go away..

The next morning akshara made arrangements for a ticket for that evening and told duggu about it..
He first got upset but when akshara told him it was a business trip he agreed to let her go..
But when it was time for akshara to go he clung on to his mother like a baby does.. Akshara kissed him on his forehead and told him to be a good boy and not to worry anybody she told him shed call him every single day!

Akshara called naitik and told him to go and pick up "bauji" from the air port she told him that bauji was coming for some work and would get there by 9 p.m.


9 p.m.
Naitik waited for bauji but he never arrived..
He got pissed off at akshara called her to confirm, akshara told him it was a joke to bother him..
Even more infuriated at aksharas childish behaviour he stormed back to the hotel..

He reached his room to find the door slightly open.. He wondered if he hadnt closed it properly
Then what happened as he entered the room, candles lit, a big red heart shaped balloon saying "I'm sorry" and just below holding the balloon his gorgeous wife, akshara..he skipped a heartbeat! What was going on? Was he dreaming ? Apparently not, coz he certainly felt aksharas arms wrap around his waist and the mesmerising effect it had!
He was truly surprised! In a moment, all his anger and fury faded away,, he had so many questions..
"Akshara aap! Yahan kaise? Aur ye Sab"
Akshara tells him the whole thing and then she says ab tak tou Apka Sara Kaam khatam hogaya hoga., ab Sara time mera hai "
Naitik giggled! He hugged her tightly..
They both went out for a candle light dinner at the beach, was a beautiful beach with barely anyone in sight they ordered their food and while they ate they gazed each other with their eyes full of love and desires 😛

After they ate, akshara got up to go but within a second naitik grabbed her and picked her up into his arms not bothered about anything else in the world..he walked towards the waves and laid her down near them.. They could see nothing but each other they could hear nothing but the sound of each others breath and the peaceful and calm waves.. They were practically lying on the sand but were too caught up in the moment to care..
After an intense eye lock, naitik passionately kissed her neck, tickling her aswell, her laugh did wonders and he stopped when she laughed.. To make her stop her reached for her lips
And just then aksharas phone rang..
Naitik sighed and made a face... Akshara picked up the phone it was the apple of her eye, Duggu.

Duggu:mamma ap pohanch Gaye? I miss u mamma
Akshara: I miss u too mera baby! Ap batao Apko yahan se kya chahye? Main apke liyen bohot sare gifts lane wali hoon" naitik sighs even more deeply,,,
Akshara notices his impatience, wraps up the call and turns to him
"Baap re"
Before she can utter a single word he holds her tightly, their eyes lock, their noses brush against one another, their fingers entwine, and the beach fades away... ❤️


Sunrise

Tell me if u guys want me to put in more detailed romance for my upcoming OS Naksh abroad (2) or is it too awkward??
And hey don't forget to hit like !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb mayo..it ws awsome😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nyccc part dear plz update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb Os Mayo... Really Vry nice
Yes we want further romantic scenes between naksh in part 2...
Very nice attempt...Well Done...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superbbb it is mayo ...waiting for d next part ...n dont worry abt d rokance
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb os mayo...awsm work...continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb os
well written waiting for nxt part with more romance
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aWs0me OS
Keep it up
plzzz update s00n wid more nd more romantic scenes
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its lovely ❤️ Nicely written...do update soon...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome...
jo likhna hai mast likh...humsab besharm hai yhan pe..🤣

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