ARIYA SS:Tum dena saath mera chapter 9 pg 32

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Hey everyone,
so this one is practically crap but pls do check it out
also pls don't throw and tamatar or chappals


TUM DENA SAATH MERA

A girl is sitting in front of a mirror as the girls surround her.She is dressed in a beautiful red lenga and the girls and making her ready and perfect for her WEDDING.Yes like every girl's dream today she is getting married.


The girls around her complete their work and go to wait for the baarat.She stands up and go to a drawer.


There she pulls out a photo first of her mother and father.

"Dekhiye aaj aapki beti ki shaddi hai duniyake sabse wonderful ladke saath aap log yaha nahi hai lekin mein jaanti hui ki aap bhi myjhe dekhkar bohot khush honge.Woh bohot aache hai ab baas aap log mujhe aapna aashirwaad dijeya"


Tears fall from her wonderful doe shaped eyes as she talks to them.Next she picks out a photo of her would be husband and shyly look at it.


She had always dreamt of a knight in armor who would save her form her hell home.After loosing her parents while young her grandfather was the only one who loved her else her chaha and chachi treated her like servants and she was happy that today she would be free.

She had just met him once.Even though too young just 18 she instantly fell for him.He was 2yrs older.His smile just melted her and she blushed a deep shade of red just remembering it.


She came out of her thoughts as she heard some commotions going on downstairs.Her heart was beat loudly as she thought of something again going wrong.


Downstairs everyone looked at her while her chachi cursed her,


"kalmohi najane kya kismat leke aayi hai.Pehele toh aapne maa baap ko kha gayi phir itne saal hame pareshaan kiya aur ab jab shaadi hone wali thi toh ladka hi bhaag gaye"


The words echoed in her ears.He left her,her prince left her she couldn't react.She stood their numb with shock as now her heart was broken again.

She stood their as others talked about her character,her future and she turned to look at her dadaji.


"DADAJI..."Her only hope her dadaji had his hand near his heart as he fainted.


She went near him as she frantically called him"Koi doctor ko phone karo" she shouted but no one moved .She cried but everyone just stared at her.


Suddenly she looked down as her dadaji pressed her hand.His eyes were full of tears.


He was trying to speak but didn't have the strength.He just looked at her and nodded a no and then he DIED.


Now she was an orphan.Her only family died and the reason was ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE.


She just stood up and went away.Tears had dried up and she felt no more pain.Her life was sucked out of her and she had been betrayed.


From that moment she felt something,PURE HATRED for the man who was the sole reason of this pain.


No she would not cry anymore for a betrayer she would live for her parents and for her dadaji.


That night she crept out of the house vowing to the one above to stand on her own feet and do something.She put her heart in a cage of iron.


Gone was the RIYA MUKHERJEE who was weak today a new Riya is born the one who doesn't feel anymore and who doesn't have a heart.

Now she is FREE


The next chapter depend upon the likes and comment i get
coz if you don't like it i won't torture you 😆



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INDEX

Chapter 1 pg 1 Chapter 8 pg 28
Chapter 2 pg 3 Chapter 9 pg 32
Chapter 3 pg 6
Chapter 4 pg 8
Chapter 5 pg 13
Chapter 6 pg 17
Chapter 7 pg 22
Edited by Christeee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh my god...wow!!!
what the hell??? arjun ran away from his marriage??? grrr

update soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb concept yar..!!!
ohh no arjun ran from his wedding... 😡
poor riya... she lost her only family left due to this reason...!!!
loving the new riya mukherjee...!!!
continue soon..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing concept dr n a mind blowing start.
Thanks for another Ariya work.
Wht the hell!!!!! Arjun ran away from his marriage.
Hate him for that. How can he do that??????
OMG Riya's granda pa died coz of shock.
Loved this new Riya.
Eagerly waiting for the nxt part.
Continue soon.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was awesome update dear.
Omg riya chaha chahi was so cruel.
What the hell?
Arjun ran from marriage and riya chaha chachi telling her kalmuhi.
Omg riya grandfathre died.
Loved this new riya.
Continue soon.
And plese pm me when you update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lvly concept update soon...
is arjun realy did that????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb concept...
Arjun!!!grrr how could he do that... jerk!!!
Riya wow now she vl teach him a lesson... she should...
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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story is very interesting..
i would love to see arjun as riya's prince charming..

please pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg what the arjun ran from the wedding hall
feel bad for riya
but why he did that???
liked this new riya
nice concept
cont soon

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