Andankaaka Colony - Chap23/24 pg. 23!! Final - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you shemmo...for the nice part...

Yeppudiyo autumns told she loves Sri...

Shemmo In cloud 9 ahhh...!!!!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks shamz..final ly one surprise out...
so its sri...mmm...lets see what happens next...vera ethavathu twist irukka?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shamz on cloud 9 lol. Thanks for update.
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Chapter 15

Its late night and Sri comes home from work. Jaya gives him food and tells him that she has to talk later. Sri says ok and eats dinner. Jaya, Tanu and Sri goes to livingroom. Jaya asks Sri "Sollu da nee yaara love panra?". Sri is shocked. 😲 He asks immediatly "What mom love ah? Are u serious?". Jaya gets angry and says "Sri mariyadaiya tell illathi i will beat you". Sri is confused. He looks and Tanu and asks what. Tanu silently says "Autumns". Sri is again shocked. Jaya says "Sari naane direct ah kekuren. Nee Autumns ah love panriya?". Sri says "Hmm athu appo ippo ethuvum illa ma". Jaya says "Appo na eppo? Nee enkitta ethuvum sollamathiya da?". 😆 Sri looks at his mom and says "Illa ma apdi ethuvum illa. College padikira po we loved, then oru small misunderstanding vanthichu. Athoda ava foreign ku poithu, so ennala ethuvum sollamudila". Tanu asks Sri "Sari na vidu. Ippo nee Autumns a still love panriya?". Sri dont know what to say. He looks and Jaya, who is looking at him with a doubtful look. Sri says "Ithu varaikkum vanthiduchu, so let me tell the truth aama i still love her. Aana ava kandippa enna maranthu irupa". Jaya looks at Tanu and smiles. She tells to Sri "Avlo thaane, dont worry I will take her. Go and sleep". 👏 Sri gets up and leaves the place with a confused look. 😕

Tanu is happy that something good is going to happen for her brother. She thinks about Shemmo how he was ready to help Autumns. Suddenly she gets a phone call. The number is private. She attends the phone and its Shemmo on the line. She asks him how he got her number, he says he has a lot of sources. Tanu laughs. Tanus mobile battery is down, she asks Shemmo to cut off as she dont has much battery. 😆

Its Sunday morning all the kids are bored. Hollie asks her sister Navetha whether they should go and watch Thalaivaa in theatre. Navetha says yes and asks Hollie whether she can inform the others. They asks Haritha, Krithika, Jinju, Smiles, Suha, Sneha and others. All are excited to watch Thalaivaa. Shemmo and Gisel joins them too with Bhagi, Tanu and Sri. Pearl comes to know about this and is adamant that she want to watch too nu. All aunties are ready too. Shemmo asks Mini "Autumns enga aunty?". Mini says "Ava varalaiyam thambi, she has headache". Gisel says he will bring Autumns and goes to Mini house with Shemmo. They convince Autumns too.
All arrive at cinema. The counter person is shocked seeying so many people at one time. He asks Sri "Enna thambi, rendu moonu per varathu ok, ithu enna oru oor eh vanthu iruku". 🤣 Sri laughs and asks him to give ticket. After 2 and half hours they comes out and are happy that they didnt missed Thalaivaa nu. Especially Pearl loved the movie a lot. They arrive at home. Bhagi goes to Shemmo and says "Can you come thaniya for few mins? I have to tell you something important, plss". Shemmo agrees and both goes to park. 😲

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Will Bhagi tell Shemmo about Gisels love?

Edited by Shemmo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
En ya nadakuthu inga?
Yen ma Shamu, oru message a thati viturukilamla?
Missed around 5 - 6 updates...read it in one go...and obviously loved it!

Elariyum nala banthu adura...nadathu nadathu!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow nice part shamzz...
Waiting for next part ma...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lol the story gets twistier now! Enjoying the fun ride.
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Good one shamz...one that cleared some of the suspense...waiting for the next, obviously...
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Chapter 16

Bhagi tells "Shemmo what I wanted to talk was..", Shemmo stops her. He says "Wait Bhagi, athuku munnadi I have to tell you something. Your Tanu oda best friend thaane, I dont know whether I can ask you this but I hope you will help me". Bhagi is confused. He continues "Bhagi I love Tanu. I dont have to guts to tell it her directly, so can you help me?". Bhagi is shocked. She stares at him. He calls "Bhagii Bhagii ungala thaan". Bhagi says "Tanu vaya? Ahh ava athu vanthu naan ungala Tanu vaa Gisel hmm athu ava annan Tanu, aiyoo". Shemmo looks weird at her. He replies "Bhagii are you ok? Enna pesureenga enaku onnume puriyala". Bhagi says "I need time to think Shemmo". She leaves the place fast. Shemmo is confused and thinks "Ava annan mathiriye intha ponnum loosa pola. Aiyoo no en friend Gisel patti naan thappa pesakoodathu", and laughs. 😆

He is bored going home so decides to walk there. He sees a mother and son playing in the park. He sees how much they love eachother and how much that mother cares for her son. He thinks about his mother Shobi. He feels sad that he tortures her everytime and still she loves him a lot. He decides to be friendly with his mother without torturing her anymore.

Autumns meets Sri in Starbucks shop. Both look at eachother with sad feeling. Autumns calls Sri and tells that she want to talk with him nu. Autumns says "Sri I dont know what to say, but I still love you. Ennala unna marakka mudila. Foreign la irukum pothu i tried to forget you but ovvoru vaatiyum you were in my mind. Suddenly 2 days before thaan I realized that I love you a lot and cant live without you". Sri looks at her without any reaction. He takes her hand and looks at her. Autumns is confused and at the same time also happy. He says "Past is past, lets forget everything. Athaan we realized our love la, inime nadakra ellame nallapadiya nadakkum ok dont worry". Autumns gets ananda kaneer, he wips her tears. 😳

The next morning Maha gets ready for office. He is at the bus station waiting for his bus. Gisel rides his bike and sees Maha. He stops there and tells Maha that he will drop him. Maha says "Aiyoo vendam pa. Oruka unkooda vanthu nadanthatu ellam enough, naan bus laye poren". Gisel smiles and leaves the bus station. Suddenly he sees Smiles there. He tries to escape but she calls his name. Smiles asks whether Gisel can drop her. Gisel says no he has to leave fast, she begs him. He has no other choice than to agree. Smiles is happy and sits on his bike. She takes her mobile phone and puts a situation song "Partha Mudhal Naale". 🤣 Gisel thinks "Enna Kodumai Sir ithu".

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Chapter 17

Both Mini and Jaya family has decided to make arrangement for Sri and Autumns marriage. The full colony is so happy that both groom and bride dont has to leave the colony nu. This is also the first marriage which is happening in the colony after all moved. Shemmo, Gisel and Maha takes care of food order and other small things. Tanu and Sneha are learning how to put kolam infront of marriage hall.

Sri and Autumns invites their friends for their marriage. The marriage is going to take place in 6 days. So all are getting ready with arrangements for the big function.

At Pearl house Jinju asks her mother "Amma unga kalyanam epdi nadanthichu?". Pearl laughs and answers "Romba grand ah nadanthichu ma". Jinju is happy and says how her marriage has to happen nu. Smiles enters and adds "Enakum perisa kalyanam nadakkanum. Athuvum naan Shubba aunty veeduku porapo...", Jinju asks "What did you say??". Pearl is also shocked and confused, she asks "Shubba Aunty ah? Nee yen avanga veeduku poganum?". Smiles realizes that she olarufied nu and samalichufies "Shubba Aunty na sonnen? Chaa chaa i mean yen atthai veeduku porapo naan azhaga irukanum nu". Jinju and Pearl are saying "Ok".

Krithika tells Ratna "Amma enaku grand ah ellam marriage venam, simple ah iruntha pothum. Aama unga bayathukku neenga enga grand ah panni poringa?". Ratna looks angry.

Navetha and Hollie are watching Esthers marriage video. Hollie suddenly got a doubt. She asks Esther "Amma why the groom has to tie thaali and not the bride?". Esther is shocked and proud to have such intelligent kids. 😆 She tells Hollie "Therila da, athu traditional la nadakurathu". Hollie is not satisfied with her answer and thinks she will ask someone else nu. Then Hollie adds "Amma enaku eppo kalyanam?". Esther is terrified, and tells "Unaku ippo kalyanam kekuthaaa?" Hollie laughs and runs, as her mother is chasing her. Navetha is laughing.

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Edited by Shemmo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Smiles orai siuational songs potu asaethira, ;gethu po!
Kalyanama? ithula ena kodumalam nadaka potho!
Waiting...😈!

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