EK bachpan suhana tha

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Ria_Taareyfan

@Ria_Taareyfan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guyss i am here with poem...Yeh mene apne bachpen pe likhi hai...I hope u guys like it...so here it is :-

Ek bachpan ka zamana tha

khushiyo ka khazana tha

Chahat Chaand ko pane ki

DIL titli ka Diwana tha

khabar na thi kuch Subah ki

na Shaam ka thikana tha.. Thak-haar ke aana

school se

Par khelne bhi jana tha

Dadi ki kahani thi

Pariyo ka fasana tha

Barish me kaghaz ki kashti thi

Har Mousam suhana tha.. Har khel me Saathi

the

Har Rishta nibhana tha

Gham ki zuban na hoti thi

Na zakhmo ka paimana tha

Rone ki wajah na thi

Na hasne ka bahana tha.. ye kahan aa gaye

"wo bachpan hi suhana tha"

Hey guys tell me howz it???I hope ap sabko pasand aya hoga...soo plzzz hit like and do comment 😊

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Vinitha nair

@viniVDlover

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Hey yipeee (dancing)😆
ME FIRST!!!!!hehehe
aww meri pyaari gudiya..i just loved it to the core..u r just awsm..as a frnd n as a writer too
bachpan hum sab ko something spcl h..bachpan ke memories valueble h...usme ek poem...wow yaar...hugging u for writing this..🤗
Hamari bachapan ki dreams,paagalpan,masti,dosti,rishte sab kuch tha...love u dear...❤️
meine tume as a writer bhot miss kiya..now welcome back dear..
Amazing poem ..keep writing ..muah 😊
😊😊

Edited by viniVDlover - 12 years ago

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

beautifully penned 😊

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jallwa_taarey

@jallwa_taarey

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

this is so nice

it kinda like my life too

I really loved it

Thank you for your pm

I have written a poem about my life I will send you a pm

I wrote that when I was sad and I was in music class and had to make up a song

So will send you a pm or write it here for you ok

If you want to

Edited by d3fannm1 - 12 years ago

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Ria_Taareyfan

@Ria_Taareyfan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: d3fannm1
this is so nice
it kinda like my life too
I really loved it
Thank you for your pm
I have written a poem about my like I will send you a pm
I wrote that when I was sad and I was in music class and had to make up a song
So will send you a pm or write it here for you ok

thanks and for sure me padhugi muje paka pm karna 😊

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premlata

@Missu_TR

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

lovely and sweet poem...i loved it ...

all word descried childhood day ...

all memory remember when we child ...

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--Ta_Sha--

@--Ta_Sha--

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Y i m on 2nd page 😔 ?
But wasnt i first one to read on IF 😛 ?
I m so happy u posted 😃
As I said earlier it is an awesome poem
N I fell in love with this poem all over again ❤️
U r a fab poet hats off to u my angel 👏
U rock n ur poems r the ones i like only
U r my star poet ⭐️
Please try to write more such brilliant poems angel
Will b waiting to read more
Love u angel muah 🤗