EK bachpan suhana tha - Poem

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guyss i am here with poem...Yeh mene apne bachpen pe likhi hai...I hope u guys like it...so here it is :-

Ek bachpan ka zamana tha
khushiyo ka khazana tha
Chahat Chaand ko pane ki
DIL titli ka Diwana tha
khabar na thi kuch Subah ki
na Shaam ka thikana tha.. Thak-haar ke aana
school se
Par khelne bhi jana tha
Dadi ki kahani thi
Pariyo ka fasana tha
Barish me kaghaz ki kashti thi
Har Mousam suhana tha.. Har khel me Saathi
the
Har Rishta nibhana tha
Gham ki zuban na hoti thi
Na zakhmo ka paimana tha
Rone ki wajah na thi
Na hasne ka bahana tha.. ye kahan aa gaye
"wo bachpan hi suhana tha"





Hey guys tell me howz it???I hope ap sabko pasand aya hoga...soo plzzz hit like and do comment 😊

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viniVDlover thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey yipeee (dancing)😆
ME FIRST!!!!!hehehe
aww meri pyaari gudiya..i just loved it to the core..u r just awsm..as a frnd n as a writer too
bachpan hum sab ko something spcl h..bachpan ke memories valueble h...usme ek poem...wow yaar...hugging u for writing this..🤗
Hamari bachapan ki dreams,paagalpan,masti,dosti,rishte sab kuch tha...love u dear...❤️
meine tume as a writer bhot miss kiya..now welcome back dear..
Amazing poem ..keep writing ..muah 😊
😊😊
Edited by viniVDlover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautifully penned 😊
jallwa_taarey thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
this is so nice
it kinda like my life too
I really loved it
Thank you for your pm
I have written a poem about my life I will send you a pm
I wrote that when I was sad and I was in music class and had to make up a song
So will send you a pm or write it here for you ok
If you want to
Edited by d3fannm1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: d3fannm1

this is so nice

it kinda like my life too
I really loved it
Thank you for your pm
I have written a poem about my like I will send you a pm
I wrote that when I was sad and I was in music class and had to make up a song
So will send you a pm or write it here for you ok

thanks and for sure me padhugi muje paka pm karna 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely and sweet poem...i loved it ...
all word descried childhood day ...
all memory remember when we child ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Y i m on 2nd page 😔 ?
But wasnt i first one to read on IF 😛 ?
I m so happy u posted 😃
As I said earlier it is an awesome poem
N I fell in love with this poem all over again ❤️
U r a fab poet hats off to u my angel 👏
U rock n ur poems r the ones i like only
U r my star poet ⭐️
Please try to write more such brilliant poems angel
Will b waiting to read more
Love u angel muah 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's amazing dear 👏 👏
So true and heart touching ❤️❤️
I am really feeling to get back my childhood
Childhood is indeed a blessing 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pain of each and everyone
beautifully written!!!
loved it,
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Posted: 12 years ago
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like it? mahn i love it!!! beautifully created!!

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