SWARON OS:the beginning - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Wow what a description in the start, amazing to read and somewhat cherish too! Those two three paragraph's gauged me the beauty of what followed next. Swayam and sharon as such cute naughty kids and the incident happened, sharon was too cute n sweet to punish herself.
Then flashback ends, great end to a beautiful start.
Keep them coming, i would like to read more from you :)


glad u liked it and thanks for letting me know dear.
had to rewrite that para twice:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow!! This was beautiful and cute...u always weave a story so well! A very unique style of writing...I loved the bees ;)

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