virman ss bad boy CHAP 19 pg 93 (9 may) - Page 50

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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing Update..!!!! VTypical guys chat..where they speak abt their gf dad as Dushman...Awesome but the drama followed was Awesome...Maanvi as Virat's mom..wow...n he actually kissed her in that avatar...😆Nice...But Maanvi needs to also understand her dad's POV..which might make him a little responsible and focused...Waiting for next Naina..!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
maanvi as virat's mom
poor princi
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow yaar awesome update...
Loved it...
Pleasee continue soon...
And it was a short update yaar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Naina
Liked it a lot
Waiting 4 next part, update soon ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it.
haaa haaa manvi as virat's mom.
update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
manvi mother of virat ...lolll...
nice update...
virat came to knw its manvi..and how cme her dad doest knw...
true love...
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Posted: 12 years ago
kya update hai
mast hai naina... shabbir and virat' s dialogue were tooo funny
and manvi such a nautanki... apne hi bbap ke ankho mein patti para di hai😆😆
continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 15

manvi : virat... lets go now... i am getting late...
virat : no... lets stay here only... (busy playing with her hair)
manvi : virat... i have a class... (stoping him)
virat : and what about the classes i am giving you... (leaning close to her)
manvi : classes in the parking lot... in this car... woww...
virat : so...??? u expect me to give you classes in a room...
manvi : shut up... you are so cheap... (hitting his shoulder)
virat : cheap hua toh kya... i love you more than anyone could ever do...
manvi : oh really...???
virat : yes... koi doubt mat rakhna dil mein...
manvi : haan sarkar... mere dil mein toh sirf aapki hi pyaar hai... (way too dramatic)
virat : buddhe ka asar ho gya hai...??? (smirking)
manvi : dont drag my dad in all this... what is your problem...??? kyun khundas khate ho dad se...
virat : what can i do when its something MUTUAL...
manvi : you and your-

"tring tring "
manvi : dad...
virat : iss bhudhe ko bhi abhi phone karna tha...??
manvi : shut up virat..
manvi picked up the call while virat tried to snatch the mobile from manvi... he was pissed off with madan.
virat muttered to himself " sasur ji, jis din meri shadi ho gayi na apki beti se... uss din badle launga... aur wo bhi ginn ginn ke... "
manvi : actually dad... i mean... i am coming... i am just coming...
manvi disconnected the call and opened the door of the car to leave
manvi : virat i
virat : you are not going... (in a stern voice)
manvi : virat dad just called up -
virat : why is he always between us...?? why cant we be like a normal couple for once manvi...???
manvi : excuse me... he is in between because he is the principal of this damn college... and above all he is my father
virat : i didnt mean this...
manvi : i know baby... but right now i need to rush to dad's office... there is something important i guess...
virat : what will i get in return...??? i mean i am letting you bunk this very important tutorial of mine...
manvi : what about a cup of coffee...???
virat : buddhe ko bhi yahin bula lete hain... milke piyenge coffee... wat say...???
manvi : virattt...
virat : kya virattt...??? sab kuch mujhe hi sikhana padega...???
manvi : haan... and now i am going... see you...
virat : okk come back soon...

scene shifts
manvi : may i come in...??
madan : manvi...
manvi : what happend dad...??? anything wrong...??
madan : you know that so called boyfriend of yours...
manvi : virat... he has a name (cutting madan in between)
madan : you know what he did today...
manvi : i dont think he did anything wrong today...
madan : ohhh yeah... you would never find him wrong even though i am sure he just insults your father whole day...
manvi : dad... virat aisa nahi hai.. he respects you a lot... dad wo... he is changing himself... just for me...
madan : you know today i met his mother and now i am sure that this guy isnt good for u... these rich people arent suitable for people like us who have their feets firmly planted on ground...
manvi : dad... what are u saying dad...??? (cursing herself)
madan : his mother showed me the power THE vaderas hold... they believe in buying things... and if her son would want, his mother would buy another manvi for him...
manvi : dad... (in tears) you are not understanding dad... aisa nahi hai...
madan : you are not understanding... what will you do when virat uses you and then throws you away...???
manvi : virat pyaar karta hai mujhse... he is not like those guys who treat girls as a commodity...
madan : forget it... time will knock some sense into you and then at the time, when you will look back, i will be there for you ready to hold and support you...
manvi turned around to leave... hearing all these bitter things from her own dad made her feel disgusted... disgusted of what... she doesnt herself know...
madan : beeji aa rahi hai... go n pick her up from the railway station in an hour... i am busy else i would have...
manvi : okk dad...

manvi left the office and tried on controlling her tears. manvi was running when she collided with someone.
shabbir : manvi... manvi... what happened...???
manvi hugged shabbir and the tears she was trying to control made way down her cheeks. shabbir consoled manvi...
shabbir : bhabhi ji please dont cry... main abhi virat ko bulata hoon... manvi shhh...
virat was coming towards shabbir when he saw him hugging manvi... this made virat stop in his track and he glared at them. he was suddenly damn jealous and wanted to punch shabbir hard for even touching manvi...
virat : manviii... (authoritatively)
manvi broke the hug and looked at virat. she ran to him and cried in his embrace... the moment manvi hugged him, it calmed virat down and he relaxed on having manvi in his arms...
virat : manna... kya hua jaan...???
manvi : virat... virat... dad... dad said...
virat : come first sit down here...
virat (to shabbir) : tu kya dekh raha hai...??? pani hi le aa kamine...
shabbir : haan... laata hoon...
virat : now tell me what happened...
manvi continued sobbing and told virat the convo she had with madan.
virat : how dare he...??? i will kill him...
manvi this time said nothing and again hugged virat.
manvi : you will never leave me na... you love me na virat...
virat : i love you manna... i really do... mr. madan chaudhary will pay for it... how dare he say that to you...???
manvi : virat... how can dad say that you are fooling around with me and that if you want you can buy another manvi for you...
virat : dont say that again manvi... never ever... do u get it...??? i love you... main tumse saccha pyaar karta hoon...
manvi : i know...
virat was burning from within but somewhere down his heart, something was making him feel guilty... he knew it all started in some other way but today... today he is truly madly and deeply in love with manvi and at no bloody cost he would let her go... she is his... only his... till her last breath... no actually till his last breath.

@ @ @ @ @ @ @ @ @this ones for all those who love BAD BOY way too much... ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww.. Loved it!!
Awesome update!!
I seriously agree with virat, her dad is a buddha, sadu and everything else in the middle of all that!!
So cute, in the beginning as soon as virat wants to spend some time with manvi, something alwys interupts them!
I want to see what Virat will do next, but i really want him to tell manvi the entire truth, because if he hides it, it will only hurt him and manvi even more!
Please do update soon!
Will be waiting!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok it was really a nice upd8!!! maanvi believes on virat soo much and this thing is making virat guilty!!! Even though he loves her but it all was started as a play!!! and I can also understand Madan's concern , a concern of a father is very right at his place!!!!

i am loving this concept of a lighthearted story!! Even though drama will be there but still it is one lighthearted fun filled story- different from your alll other works!!! a different journal!!!

***W8ng for DMG, PTYKA and Linfa, aur kaunsi story h...haannn... Aashiqui, I <3 u maanvi,*****😆
Edited by abbay - 11 years ago

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