Arshi SS Battling desires maha double updates 27/12 - new PG 145-146

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Archana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#711

You outlined akash anguish at being kind of betrayed by arnav for trusting him and the belief he took advantage of his loyalty to blackmail khushie ,and making her pay for a crime she did not commit ,and that made akash look weak as she felt he would listen to arnav blindly ,payal is still in denial at khushie suffering comes across as self centered to her own comfort

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dumas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#712

FOUND THIS COUPLE OF HOURS AGO COULD NOT STOP READING BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN VERY EMOTIONAL INTENSE SO MUCH AGHAST ASR PAIN IS VERY MUCH FELT KHUSHI HANDING HIM THE BILL FOR THE JALIBIES WAS HEART BREAKING SHOWING HIM THAT SHE IS TREATING HIM THE SAME WAY HE WAS DOING HER SHE WANTED HIM TO FIGHT FOR HER BUT NOT REALIZING THAT HIS GULIT HAS CRUSHED HIM WONDER IF SHE WAS TRYING TO GET RAISE OUT OF HIM AWESOME UPDATES.

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coolbakes_Jalad

@Lifeistooshort

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Posted: 10 years ago

#713

My humble apologies!! as a token of seeking your forgiveness i am posting two long updates today!!!

PART 30

" we will take care of her... i have asked happyji to be with you till we are away. he will be here in a while" Garima told a worried sashi as Khushi bent down to take his blessings

hands shivering and eyes glistening sashi blessed his daughter hoping all her tears would be washed away soon...

" we need to leave people " came Nk's voice breaking the drama as buaji quickly wiped her tears

" akash and payal are already at the hospital... rooms etc etc " nk informed as garima nodded

while buaji and garima got ready checking their stuff Nk found Khushi's gaze fixed to the door...

" i came alone... But i saw hp taking nannav's breakfast ." nk informed as he quickly walked away not lookin at her...

Khushi looked around and finding none there she let the tears fall...

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HOSPITAL

As she lay in the hospital stretcher slowly bein pushed into the theatre she looked around at the anxious faces giving her their blessings and smiles of hope... Her eyes however searched for the one person ...

" he's not going to come Khushi... its all over " her mind reminded her of her fate as her heart crumpled with a tiny bit of hope...

The doors closed and she had not seen him at all...

she lay there as they connected the tubes around her... million thoughts and fears playin all together... what if this was her last day... what if the surgery failed and she would never come back? would she die with the bitter happiness of having hurt him with her act of turning him to a stranger... no no... she hadn't given the bill for that... She wanted him to realize what she was goin through all the while when he tried making himself a mere stranger to her..

As the anaesthesia made way into her veins drowsiness set in and she suddenly heard some feeble noises...he was here ... she could feel it

" you can see her Mr.ASR... we are obliged to give you a couple of minutes ... the drug might take a while" the doctor said excusing himself

Arnav slowly walked to her side as fear set inside seeing the tubes around ...

" you will come back... " he said softly moving close to her ears as she saw his blurred image before her eyes as she lost her consciousness with a drop of tear rollin down her cheeks...

Arnav quickly wiped his eyes realizing his tears wetting her cheeks ...

he bent down his lips pressing against her cheeks... " i wont let anything happen to you Khushi... I Promise " he whispered as he left the room backside wiping his tears..

The doctors looked at each other with a pleasant smile...

" i now know why he had used all his powers to drag us here ..." Dr.Henry said as Dr. Mehra cut in " love can reduce anyone ... ASR is not an exception... i am glad i agreed to let him meet her without their family's knowledge... "

the doctors nodded in silence as they begun their surgery... As a tensed Arnav sat on the other side inside the doctors room the raizadas and guptas sat there worried praying for her and wonderin how Arnav could be so heartless to not even have come

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Payal sat as she thought about all the times Khushi had spent with her... SHe had never felt the lack of them not being related by blood... she wasnt even sure if her blood sister would do so much for her...

" i promise you khushi... i promise i will make you my KHUSHI again... in whatever lies your happiness i will bring it back to you...you have done enough for me... now its my turn..." payal promised herself silently

Hours passed and suddenly the doctors walked out.. all their faces fallen with worry

" there were few major complications durin the table... we have added supports for it... she needs to respond to it in 24 hours to decide her condition" Dr.Henry explained as they all paled

" it cant be possible... get anything... drugs from America... something should help " arnav said almost blasting Dr.Mehra

" Mr.Raizada... we have the most efficient team and we are tryin our best... lets hope GOD does his part too" the doc said walking away leaving Arnav startled

As the family broke down supporting each other in worry Nk saw Arnav walking out of the backside much to his surprise

Arnav's steps reached his car in no time...

Times of Khushi challenging and fighting with him flashed before his eyes... " arnav singh raizada .. even your destiny my devi maiyya writes... you cant do anything... she will give me anything i ask for " she had told him million times

" you cant do that dammit " he screamed as his legs slammed the brakes

he could hear the bells ringing outside as he looked up at the familiar place... as he took the stairs he remembered holding her when she fainted and breaking her fast... his lips curved to a smile as he saw the stairs in which he had carried her down adamantly...

As tears rolled down his cheeks he felt a tug at his pants and looked down .. the little girl smiled wide at him as he looked confused

" uncle you dont remember me ... you gave me pigeons for my father " she reminded him

arnav smiled as he went on his knees cupping her cheeks

his voice trembled as he asked her " is he okay?"

the little girl smiled as she pointed to her mom and dad at the distance ..." its because of your pigeons" she said sweetly as arnav chuckled jealous of the innocence

" why are you crying? is your dad sick too" she asked wiping his tears as arnav shaked his head letting his tears fall... " my wife is sick... in the hospital..." he said as the lump struck his throat

" pray to devi maiyya and send some pigeons to her... they will tell her to make your wife okay" the girl said wiping his tears as arnav smiled mildly

" she wont listen to me..." he said as the girl looked on curiously and quickly held his hand " but she listens to me ... i will tell her... come " she said and before Arnav could realize the little girl was dragging him up the stairs ignoring his protests

Arnav slid off his shoes as he entered the mandir holding the little girls hand..

He watched in silence as the little girl folded her hands in prayer and shut her eyes tight..

Arnav held back his tears as his hands ruffled the little girls hair

She quickly opened her eyes and said " i told her... she will listen to you... you tell her" she said confidence beaming in her eyes

Arnav looking at devi maiyyas idol and he could already see her smiling back sarcastically at him

As the little girl ran out leavin arnav to have his convo with DEVI MAIYYA ALL ALONE

" she doesnt know you wont hear her or exist... Just like my Khushi dint " he said softly

" and if you do exist i am still right in not believin you... like seriously ... i dont believe you ... i never bothered looking on you and great! you have not left any chance to mess my life... But maa... dii... Khushi... what did these ppl do? i dont even remember the count of fasts and walks to the mandir they have done...you shattered my mom.. so much that she had no choice but die... then di.. you put her in a state where she cant even chose to die ... and now Khushi... dont you find anyone else expet my family...

They all keep telling me ... but they should have realized ...You are no different than me... Khushi loved both of us and all we both could manage to give her was a life hell bent on making her cry and regret every moment... shes a fool to believe you write her destiny..i destroyed ehr life marrying her in this very mandap.. what did you do?. if you are actually the right judge you should have tried me, or may be even killed me... but why her...

may be happiness is not in your virtue afterall... i dont even know why i am telling an idol all this.. but trust me...in case u do exist..the day you realize you have betrayed a girl who loved and believed you with all of her heart there is no redemption... you are doing the same thing i did... you dint see her love and kept giving her pain and she took it all...,,,,and if i dont deserve her love even you dont deserve it... not any of it...Trust me that will be the worst realization.."

Arnav wiped his tears that din seem to stop anytime now...As he walked out the little girl came runnin back

" you told her?" she asked as he nodded and she dragged him to the pigeon stand...

" give me all the pigeons " she said and looked at arnav for permission as he nodded

" whats your name?" he asked as she smiled saying " KHUSHI..."

Arnav couldnt help but go on his knees hugging her tight

the girl stayed in his hug quietly oblivious to his tears and bleeding heart...

" the pigeons " she squealed breaking from the hug as both of them watched them flutter away

" your wife will be okay... yayyy" the girl clapped as she kissed his cheeks in joy as Arnav finally felt a tiny hope being reborn in his heart

SO YEAH!! this is not a miracle update to make arnav believe in devi maiyaa...its yet another battle he has with Khushi's thoughts... just that shes not in front of him... its a basic human reaction!!!

thanks a ton for the overwhelming comments.i cant be more grateful! thanks a ton

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coolbakes_Jalad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#714

"The past could always be annihilated. Regret, denial, or forgetfulness could do that. But the future was inevitable."
? Oscar Wilde, The Picture of Dorian Gray

Arnav walked back silently through the back door into the waiting room of the doctors... The raizadas and guptas stood outside , fear enveloping all of them with every passing minute...

" she cant do this to us AKASH..." payal said softly as he held her closer

" she has so many dreams... sooo many of them... she has not yet lived for herself " Payal whimpered like a child in his hold

" i wonder what bhai will go through... i am sure nothing will happen to khushiji" Akash told without realizing , as payal found one ray of hope twinkle in his eyes...

" khushijiyou have to comeback... for nannav... for yourself " Nk silently thought as he remembered her moments with ARNAV.. there was always something about them...

Buaji nani and garima sat still putting their beliefs on devi maiyya.

Arnav's phone vibrated as he looked at it his eyes widing in surprise...

" diii..." he smiled like a little child his eyes letting loose of all the tears that he had held back

he composed himself as he lifted the call, speaking a meek " hello di"

" chotey... where are you?" her voice was filled with worry

" Dii... office.. where else" he lied blankly holding a grip of himself

" chotey... khushiji's surgery is getting complicated... she's serious... you must have been here" ANjali told tensedly

" waatt's wroonng" he asked softly as she told him all the happenings while he quietly listened

" come soon..." she said breaking into tears as Arnav took a deep breath and spoke " she will be fine di... you all are there right... they are good doctors... don worry" he said his voice plain devoid of emotions

" choteyyy... arent you coming... doesn't these matter to you anymore..."

Arnav quickly cut the call his hands slamming on the table as he thought to himself " i am sorry di.. but i have to do this..."

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After a few hours Arnav heard a knock on the door..

" Mr.ASR the surgery is done... i must say we had a tough time... but she's stable now..." Mr.Hunter from their doc's team told with a huge smile on his face

" she's out of danger... she can talk... she will be fine... like beforeee" Arnav asked rushing to the doctors side

" yes... yes... and yes... it it will take a while but she will run out of this hospital singing her fav song " the doc said assuring her

" Mr.ASR, you can see her before they shift her out of OT.. coz your family is already waiting at the door" Mr Mehra said thoughtfully

Just as arnav rushed to the door he halted and turned " nooo... you can shift her... she need not see me " he said with a sad glint

" she's under anesthesia.. she wont know your there..." Mr Mehra said with a grateful smile as Arnav nodded shaking his hands with the doctors thanking them...

he rushed to her side as he saw her lay there with her eyes closed and the tubes all around her...

he slowly walked to her side as he bent forward his lips pressing on her forehead , as tears rolled down his eyes his lips pressed over her eyelids lightly

his fingers coiled into her tender ones as he felt her grip tighter in his hold

he panicked as the sister walked in " don worry sir... its the effect of the drug being withdrawn" and she smiled leaving the couple for a while

" Khushi i went to meet her... ur.. best friend" Arnav spoke meekly

" was it your plan... you made me walk there... hmm" he said chuckling softly as the tears din seem to stop

" di called me... nobody knows i was here... but how will i not be?" he questioned like a child in defence

" but nobody will know...not... not even you.." he said his voice trembling

" i am sorry Khushi... for every single thing.. every single pain... now everything would be fine... i will leave ... your cause of all problems will leave you" he said as he wiped his tears and got up... he turned back as he felt her grip still intact.. he smiled as he bent closer " may be i have never told you and will never tell you also but

" mujhe farak padtha hai khushi... it always did " he said holding her hands close to his face "

" cozzz... cozz... I love you... always loved you... just that i am not worthy of it" he whispered as he pressed his lips on her cheek " may you get all the happiness in the world Khushi..." and he left

the room not turning back...

The sister who stood at a distance dint know what he spoke but she had tears rolling down her cheeks as she thought " they should be like this.. hamesha..."

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" how long sankadevi will lie like this.. hey sister when will she talk " Buaji asked clutching her head outside the ICU

nk and akash chuckled quietly as payal and garima kept assuring buaji

in a while a lady walked out" she has got up... you can meet her"

" can we all" they asked at once as Dr.Mehra walked out smiling " yes yes.. its a private ICU .. so you can... and yes she will be able to talk now... but there will be pain and she might take a while"
Buaji and garima kept showering kisses on Khushi till she got tried

" you scared me like usual" buaji slammed her softly
" Khushiji your back like a rockstar" nk screamed almost making her jump out of bed

Khushi looked around and found everybody but for bauji and arnav ..." Arnavji must be worried she thought to herself

Her throat hurt as she tried moving her lips to ask for arnav

don strain bitiya" buaji warned

as Akash and payal walked in together hearing she's up her eyes widened in shock...

she strained to talk surprised she was finding it difficult

the doctors walked in time as she looked up letting them check on her

" so khushi... come on try talking now " Dr.Hunter said with a smileee

" jiii" she said as the entire room heaved in relief.. garima felt the happiness as if her baby had spoken her first word

" but. it hurtsss" she said as the doctor smiled.." yaa thats coz you are talking after long...you will be okay as you start talking more." he said walking out

as Khushi gave a weird look around and her eyes fell on anjali...

" diii" she said as Anjali looked at her in surprise ..." why are you here?"

" woh khushi.." anjali paled wondering if she wanted her to get out

"" shouldnt you be at the wedding " Khushi said as all of them paled color

" khushi i am married " payal said as Khushi 's face shrunk..her mouth forming the same O. " did i meet with a accident and miss the wedding itself" she asked as payal felt a deep fear in her

" sanka devii" buaji walked to her " don you remember anything..."

" i don rem how this accident happened... i missed jiji's wedding " Khushi cried like a child as the other exchanged glances to each other

while anjali smiled and quickly dragged others outside payal went to khushi's side " its okay... we will party nowww" payal said wiping her tears as khushi congratulated her sister

while akash and nk rushed to the doctor to let him know of the happenings

Payal got up to leave when Khushi held her back and pulled her close as she whispered " jiji... where is laad governor "

Payal felt her entire world spin as Khushi remmebered arnav's writing on the mirror said " he wanted to tell me something... and i should have met with this... " she sulked softly

as payal stared at her blankly devoid of an answer Khushi smiled " ask him to meet me..." she said softly as all that payal could do was manage a nod

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SO thats it for today!!! sorry sorry!! the late update was not intentional!! WHATEVER MAY BE ,Y ISSUES THE ONE THING THAT DRAWS ME HERE THE MINUTE I GET SOMETIME IS COZ MY DEAR READERS!! MY HUMBLE APOLOGIES AND THANK YOU FOR TOLERATING ME!!!

hope ppl dint expect this twist!! get ready :-) DON WORRY ITS NOT GONNA BE DRAGGED FROM BEGINING OR LIKE ARNIE BRINGING BACK HER MEMORY.. BLAH BLAH!! ITS SOMETHING ELSE THAT I HAVE IN MIND BASED ON REAL INCIDENT THAT HAPPENED AT MY HOSPITAL!!

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Japonica

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Posted: 10 years ago

#715

Hey super to see you back with the Maha update. What a twist! Hope we won't have to wait as long for you to unravel the twist! Do update soon.

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Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 10 years ago

#716

Awesome update and twist at the end. You have to update soon. I can't wait to see how Arnav will react seeing Khushi forgetting dark days of her life.

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teja21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#717

awesome parts dear

thanx fr d pm

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Hina malik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#718

OMG! Khushi now is suffering from partial amnesia😲

Getting interesting!

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nitrit95

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Posted: 10 years ago

#719

firstly very very sorry i ve been reading all the chapters n have never commented only one word briliaant u have captured arnav n khushis pain n rmotions perfectly i wish they had shown all this in the serial btw thks once again