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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sharmi, you asked and i fulfilled your wish๐Ÿ˜‰... i am useless with writing poems in english and THATS my first language, yet here i have done one in hindi, my first on at that๐Ÿ˜ณ EVER ๐Ÿ˜ฒ... so be soft on me ๐Ÿ˜› and i hope you like it...๐Ÿ˜Š Heres my poem for the famous couple, Dev and Kaajjal

nafrat pyar mein badla
phir mera pyar mera dost hua
lekin baat to yeh sach hai
maan hi maan mein tumhe upna maana

bhool na payi woh din
nahin bhool payi woh raat
bhool na paungi who lamhe
jo guzare hai maine tumhare saath

taras gayi yeh aankhen
sirf tumhe dekhne ke liye
woh teen lubz sun-na chahti hu
jiske liye yeh mera jiya hai bequaraar

haan pyar hai mujhe,
sirf tumse mere yaar
kaise bhula paungi mein
yeh pyar, jo tumhara diya hua hain

tumhare dosti ke vaaste
aur mera pyar ke liye
kuch bhi karsakti hu
aur woh sirf tumhe khush dekhne ke liye

yeh dosti ka kya pata
kal rahe ya na rahe
achcha hoga humare liye
ke yeh dosti sirf pyar ka intehaam ho...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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๐Ÿ‘ that was sooo pretty! luved it!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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woww kaju that was soo romantic ๐Ÿ˜ณ
just loved it ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ u should write more such stuff..now that the Vday is coming..looks like the entire forum is getting the fever ๐Ÿ˜›
i loved your 3rd stanza the most ๐Ÿ˜ณ
but overall it was written with quite a feeling ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ just loved it... ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 18 years ago
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kaju heres a poem which my fiance wrote on a valentine's card and gave it to me... ๐Ÿ˜ณ
basically its a poem written by Payne Drewelow
so here it goes ๐Ÿ˜ณ



You can be my Valentine's
On this special day
You can have anything you want
And everything will go your way

You can be my Valentine's
And fall into my arms
you'll smile and laugh a lot with me
and eat my chocolate charms

You can be my Valentine's
And we can talk awhile
i can take you to a movie
that'll make you smile

You can be my Valentine's
And eat a chocolate cake
we can hug and kiss all we want
As long as its not fake

Edited by jyoti06 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wah!! ๐Ÿ‘ That was Beautiful Kaju!! ๐Ÿ‘ U shud write some more ๐Ÿ˜Š

Maddz xxx

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hehe, thank you everyone ๐Ÿ˜ณ and as for that poem jyoti, its beautiful... bless your fiance, hes so romantic... lol, the only "poem" any guy has written for me in a valentine's day card is from my ex, he wrote

"roses are red,
violets are blue,
not a day goes pass
where i dont think of you"

something like that, lol, i remember ripping that card in anger when we broke up ๐Ÿ˜ณ i hope your fiance surprises you this year and writes you a poem from the heart ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awww, that was truely beautiful!! And your hindi was very good. i too dont speak hindi, actually bangali is my first language, english second, and since i watch so manny hindi stuff and spend so much time on this Forum, hindi has kinda become my third language. lol
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharna2k6

Awww, that was truely beautiful!! And your hindi was very good. i too dont speak hindi, actually bangali is my first language, english second, and since i watch so manny hindi stuff and spend so much time on this Forum, hindi has kinda become my third language. lol



hehe, thank you sharna... i was born in the UK so english became my first language... my parents are gujjus thus gujurati being my second and i learnt hindi from films and serials ๐Ÿ˜† i used to (and still do, mind you) LOVE hindi movies and serials... ever since i was little i would rather watch a hindi movie over an english one... now i've become white with my friends so i dont watch that many hindi movies (mainly because there are no cinemas showing indian movies) and as for serials i have cut down because they took over my life... but i still watch some stuff like kaajjal, kumkum, prithviraj (cos of the P-S love story... aww, so cute) and also any movie i can catch on tv... ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its beautiful.. i loved it..!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Kaj jyothi and Tisha di.... ๐Ÿ˜›


You guys are ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› !!!

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