Nayi Soch Ki Chali Leher...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pramad says...

tumhe samjha maine ek bojh,

(I always thought of you as a burden)

par phir bhi tumne nibhaya mera saath!

(but you still stood by my side)

mujhase chot khakar bhi,

(despite getting hurt by me)

na choda tumne mera haath!

(you never left my side)

sochata tha mein kahase milti hai tumhe yeh himmat,

(I always wondered where you got this strength)

woh himmat jo dikhati thi mujhe uski aankho mein bhi!

(The srength that I could see in his eyes, too)

par yeh na jaan paaya kabhi ki,

(but I never knew that)

dur rehkar bhi ek doosare ko yeh himaata tum dono ne di!

(despite being far from eachother gave strength to eachother you two)

dard tumhe hota tha aur aankhein uski hoti thi num,

(you were in pain and his eyes cried)

dena chahta tha tumhe woh iss jahan ki saari khushiya,

(he wanted to give you the world's happiness)

sametkar anpe dil mein tumhare saare gum!

(in his heart your pain and sorrows he wanted to hide)

jaao uske paas,

(go to him)

mein kabhi nahi de paaunga tumhe itani khushiyan!

(I will never be able to give you this much happiness)

tumhe usse zyaada pyaar aur koi nahi kar sakta,

(no one can love you more than him)

tumhare ek ishare par hi who bicha dega tumhare kadmome puri duniya!

(he will spread the whole world in front of you on your one sign)

Ma says...

beti banakar laaye the tumhe,

(brought you here as a daughter)

par de na sake tumhe koi sukh!

(but couldn't keep you happy)

kaha tha sada khush rakhenge tumhe,

(said we will always keep you happy)

par mile yaha tumhe dher saare dukh!

(but you got a lot of pain)

maana tha use apna beta,

(made him our son)

par na dekha uski aankho ka dard!

(but never could see the pain in his eyes)

baantata raha woh sabko pyaar ki sheetalta,

(he kept spreading the warmth of love)

aur bhar li apne dil mein usne yeh hawayein sard!

(and collected in his heart the wind as cold as ice)

ja beti jee le apni zindagi,

(go dear live you life)

lautakar usse uska pyaar!

(by giving back his love)

sada khush rahe mere dono bachhe,

(may you always be happy)

duniya ki har khushi pe hai tum dono ka adhikaar!

(you two have right on every happiness in the world)

Bapuji says...

laaye the tumhe apne bete ke liye,

(we brought you here for our son)

par yeh na socha kabhi ki,

(but never thought that)

uska saath dene ke liya kitane zeher tumne piye!

(to stay with him how much you drank the poison)

phero ki jitani kasame thi tumne khai,

(during the ceremony all the promises you made)

apne armaan khokar bhi woh saari rasme tumne nibhai!

(despite loosing all your dreams you kept every word you said)

toote dil ka dard sametkar,

(collecting the pieces of your broken heart)

mere bete ki zindagi tumne sajaayi!

(how beautiful my son's life you made)

aur woh mera mooh-bola beta...

(and that my so-called son)

apne rishte khokar bhi,

(despite loosing his own relationships)

iss ghar se juda har rishta usne nibhaya!

(he fulfilled all the duties of this house)

apne pyaar ko kisi aur ko saupte huye,

(while giving his love to someone else)

dard ka zeher pite hue har lamha usne bitaya!

(he drank the poison of pain)

tujhe khushiya dena chahta tha woh,

(he wanted to give you happiness)

daav pe lagakar apni jaan!

(by gambling his jaan)

ja beta puri kar le apni

(go and complete your)

Mukkamal Mohobbat Ki Adhoori Daastan!


This will be the real "Nayi Soch" if Kumud's in-laws, including her husband, set her free to find her happiness and live her life with the man who loves her the most... Saraswatichandra! 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am glad you liked it...

Edited by Mitsu91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written and yes this would be the nayi soch but not sure trp aunties would agree? :( they like to see their DIL shackled to their dear sons no matter how bad they are
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved your write-up. Brilliant. Bravo 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome poem👏
really nice man!!
thanks for such a positive post!!
🤗

would really love to see some 'nayi soch' in SC and hope that SP supports it!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful poem lovely 👏.

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