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Shivani

@shivheena123

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Very nice concept. I loved how you set everything out, quick yet wonderful! Very great story! PM me when you write more. Thank you!

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Vinitha nair

@viniVDlover

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

First of all a BIG SORRY 4 d late comment.4give me dear
meri pyaari gudiya ki first os
omg ye toh bahoti kamal hei
amazing hei,mindblowing b hei
i just loved it
the way u portrayed every feeling n emotions...out f d world dear
but end ...😭
love mein itni pain kyu hei?
Bina kahe that boy chali gai..oh no...😭
but u did a gr8 job,as a writer u r fab ..as a sis u r the bst..
Love u a lot dear
keep writing:)
🤗

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Kanchan Agrawal

@KaNcHaN_06

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: viniVDlover
First of all a BIG SORRY 4 d late comment.4give me dear
meri pyaari gudiya ki first os
omg ye toh bahoti kamal hei
amazing hei,mindblowing b hei
i just loved it
the way u portrayed every feeling n emotions...out f d world dear
but end ...😭
love mein itni pain kyu hei?
Bina kahe that boy chali gai..oh no...😭
but u did a gr8 job,as a writer u r fab ..as a sis u r the bst..
Love u a lot dear
keep writing:)
🤗

YIPEEE ...!!

finally mele didu ka comment aa gaya...:D:D:D:D

thanku so much didu...🤗

i know abhi b lots of mistake h is mein...but then also ...

u liked it...😃😃

cholly didu...actually m b crying while writing this... i never ever see swayam dying...!!

i love u loads n loads ...muahh muahh,...❤️

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Kanchan Agrawal

@KaNcHaN_06

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: shivheena123
Very nice concept. I loved how you set everything out, quick yet wonderful! Very great story! PM me when you write more. Thank you!

thanku so much:)

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

awesome os di

loved it

the way u described swayam was amazing

n both madly loving each other 😳

the bond that sharon shares with her mother was sweet

n adorable swayam adoring his princess sharon

in all a very very well written os

di u should continue writing

u will soon become an amazing writer

thanx for the pm

keep writing

🤗Harshi

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Kanchan Agrawal

@KaNcHaN_06

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: vrushanharshi
awesome os di
loved it
the way u described swayam was amazing
n both madly loving each other 😳
the bond that sharon shares with her mother was sweet
n adorable swayam adoring his princess sharon
in all a very very well written os
di u should continue writing
u will soon become an amazing writer
thanx for the pm
keep writing
🤗Harshi

thanku so much harshi..!!!❤️❤️

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Ayesha

@Ayesha.behroz

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

hahha reserved
very nice really awsome update
cont soon i loved it shreya
u r the great writter i always say
hat's of you
sorry 4 short comment
loved ur update so much
plss continue soon
hugsss
love you miss u

Edited by Ayesha.behroz - 12 years ago

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Ayesha

@Ayesha.behroz

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

jaan awsum lovely awsome update i can't belive it's ur first work i can't belive i really loved ur os plss write more

i really like dur idea writting style thinking all i loved it so much u r the awsome amazing writter maza agaya yar u rocking loved ur story sos os sos os much

i want too read more ur workss pls write more n sorry 4 the late comment pls forgive me u know my condition na sorry plss forgive me i m really sorry 4 that

love you so much n ur os brilliant i really loved ur os sos so so much couples are rock rey awsome os

love you
miss you
hugs
keep smilling
hugging u tightly
write more
u r the awsome