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Posted: 12 years ago
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The story begins 4 months earlier '

A girl of in pink attire was sitting in a cafe 'it is the month of monsoon 'she ordered a cup of hot coffee for her n starts looking outside the window where few children are enjoying the rain'the waiter placed the cup on her table n after sometime she started sipping it'few drops of water rolls down from the glass of window n she was lost in her thoughts regarding her mother who is no more with her'

She was very connected with her mom... she was her only best friend she had'her mother means the world to her'but it was very hard for her to accept the truth of having her mom more in her life. She lost her life due to cancer. But her mother never let her know about the disease she is suffering from. On her last day her mother told her she never told her about all this coz she knew how much sensitive she is!!

N after that day she hardly trust anyone '

While she was lost in her thought , a boy came n sit on the table opposite to her 'she was so deeply lost in her thoughts that she didn't even took a notice of him and as if he didn't even exist .

He tried to talk to the girl but she was not interested 'n after completing her coffee she walks away from there with a diva attitude. And after sometime he also left the place.

Both of them lived in the same building, on same floor'

Boy's POV:

Wow ' she is so beautiful , her eyes r so glittery ,her hand looks so delicate, her lips are like rose petals ,her hair's r so soft n shiny ,she is like n angel on earth!!

At night he was trying hard to sleep but he was not able to coz of the face of that girl' the whole night he kept thinking about her'n after few days of sleepless night he realized that he is in love with her.

But the girl never took a notice of him, she never cares for his existence ... she don't want to get attached with anyone anymore.

He tried a lot but failed.

After few days when he was passing by the coffee shop where he first saw her' he noticed the same girl sitting with her friends'he starts staring at her from outside the coffee shop... the girl realized that someone is there n she turned to see ' she saw a boy ' she once again ignored him n continued to talk with her friends 'but in her mind she recognized the boy.

She knew the boy lives in the same building where she lives. N she also knew that he has feelings for her' she heard it from her neighbourhood friends.

And after this many a times they see each other at corridor, in the stairs ' everytime the boy see her his world stops ' for him she means every thing ,but she never cares for him. Sometimes he just stood at the stairs to look at her. When she walkdown through the stairs making her phone calls , playing with her hairs ' he admire her from a corner but he never tried to talk to her.

A month passed, n he didn't even know her name and after few days he stopped going out as his doctor advice him so. He spend his whole day in a single room with a painting of a heart on a wall opposite to his bed, a lamp on left side of the bed with yellow shed, a clock on the same table and a photograph of his family. The boy loves music and is the only thing he is having with himself which helps him to live in that single room n to forget all his pain he is suffering. he loves to play guitar n he likes to compose songs.

During these changes in his life the girl has gone to her relatives for holidays but she was not happy.Coz when she went away from her place to the relatives she realized that she is missing some thing or someone in her life. She really don't understand y she was feeling bad for him n y she is missing him so badly. She knew she will nomore be able to suffer the pain of separation. She talked about her feelings with her best friend n her friend suggested her to move on in her life n start trusting ppl again. Her friend told her to talk to the boy when she go back to her place.

And when she returned she tried to search the guy who is no more seen by anyone. She went to the coffee shop many tyms to search him. She even wait in the stairs for him.but he is no where.

3 weeks later'

One of his friend meet the girl , the boy told him to give her a CD and he handed her that CD 'she went to her room n played it'in the CD there is a song for her which he composed in his room.




All love of mine
With a song and a wine
You're harsh and divine
Like truths and a lie

But the tale ends not here
I have nothing to fear
For my love is yell of giving and hold on

In the bright emptiness
In a room full of it
Is a cruel mistress
Whoa oh!

I feel this unrest
That nest all hollowness
For I have nowhere to go and I'm cold.

And I feel so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness

And I'm so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness, yeah!

Tune mere jaana
Kabhi nahi jaana
Ishq mera, dard mera, haaye!

Tune mere jaana
Kabhi nahi jaana
Ishq mera, dard mera

Aashiq tera
Bhid me khoya rehta hai, jaane jahaan
Poocho to itna kehta hai

That I feel so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness

And I'm so lonely yeah
There's a better place than this
Emptiness, yeah!




The boy was suffering from CANCER but he never let anyone other than his family to know about this' he was in last stage when he saw her in the cafe.

She remembered a doctor, who came to his apartment twice or thrice a week but she never insisted to know what's going on in his life.

She know how much he love her n she too had the same feeling form the first day she saw her in the caf.But now he is no more in this cruel world'he is gone n all he left for her is his love'!!!

After the song stops she went his apartment n knocks the door. An old lady opens the door, she also know about his son being in love with this girl, she hugged the lady tight n the lady escort her to his son's room the room is the same as in the video'n after seeing all of this she broke into tears'

And she once again got the same suffering n tears back in her life. She decides that she will always remain single n she goes to his grave every Sunday n spends her day talking to him in a hope that one day he will come back to her...


guys the boy here is Swayam n the girl is Sharon...


PS:guys this is my first attempt ...so plz let me know howz it??drop ur likes n comments too ..would love to have them...!!


love

Kanchan



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Kanchi.. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb os...
Luvd it..!!!
De way u hv portrayed de whole os nd swayam's feelings was fab...
Amazingly written
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res

Edited
Nice OS Sweetie😊
Feeling r beautifully penned down👏
I toh already told u na its really gud...
loved it
Do write more




Edited by sweet_sanju - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kanchi01

Superb os...
Luvd it..!!!
De way u hv portrayed de whole os nd swayam's feelings was fab...
Amazingly written

thanku so much dear...
it means a lot to me:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet_sanju

Res

Edited
Nice OS Sweetie😊
Feeling r beautifully penned down👏
I toh already told u na its really gud...
loved it
Do write more




thanku so much didu...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome love story👏
👏 really liked it
they both were in so much love with each other but didn't express it
I loved the cute antics of swayam of adoring Sharon
I loved Sharon and her mother bonding
do write more
thanks for the pm
😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was heart touch and superb os...😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kanchan that was supeeb...i love the song...tge emotion the feeling I can feel everything
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Posted: 12 years ago
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swaROn the oh meine toh kriyaansh imagin kiya 🤣
anyway superb os sisy but painfull😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 8085548022

awesome love story👏

👏 really liked it
they both were in so much love with each other but didn't express it
I loved the cute antics of swayam of adoring Sharon
I loved Sharon and her mother bonding
do write more
thanks for the pm
😊😊


thanku dear😊

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