NEW ehmmbh ff : HONA THA PYAAR CH 8 pg 73 - Page 51

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Posted: 11 years ago
ohhh myy god this was awesome...
ufff dont know whom i like more viren manvi or virat manvi...

this will be not easy for me😊


thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey superb update... virman 1st meeting was hilarious...aww virat kissed her ☺️ 🤣... awesome update...excited for next part...plzzz cont soon nd pm me ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update Shanu
loved it dear...virman are unique first meeting and kissed woh oh
when viren get to know about it...it become very interesting now,
now I'm confused who become the pair...
eagerly waiting for next part
update soon
and thanx 4 the PM Shanu 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
nainu nd sanu u r such a sweet heart...
damm amazing updAte girls...
viren went away...
manvi depressed somewhere. ..
omg virat kissed manvi...
nd manvi kissed back..to save herself frm sushant... .
luved it cont soon...
cant wait!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved d update awesome.. virman kissi haaye...little unexpected...thanks for pm🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG!!! Kiss at first sight!!! Am toh damn shocked... It was really unexpected... Brilliant updt... pls cont soon and give a lnger updt next time pls ... thnks a lot fr th pm... tada...
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG OMG kiss in first meeting to second mein kya hoga 😆
and virman meeting the most awaited and kya meeting hai yaar loved it ek dam maza agaya...😆😆
viren gone and now virat is gonna be there with manvi for a week looks like some new twist in the tale coz already virat doesnt care about jeevika and her nautanki 😛
and virat ne usse phirse maid bulaya😆
wxcited for virman encounter again ...update soon and thanx alott for the pm re 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update waiting who pair whom
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
** CHAPTER 8 **
** lost and lonely**
virat took a taxi and went to the bungalow just to find it lock.
virat : locked...??? dont tell me bhai is out... shit...!!! delhi is hell unlucky for me... first that hottie shorty and then this... uff ab mera bhai kahan hai... bhai apni item ke saath hoga pakka... abhi call karta hoon...
virat called viren and the phone was switched off...
virat : arghh... switched off... fir toh dono kuch jyada busy lagte hain... time toh dekh lete yaar... din mein hi shuru ho gaye... ab kya karun...?? kahan jaun...???
virat decided on going to some hotel till the time he comes in contact with viren.
scene shifts
manvi : pack all this...
maya : manvi can i take this dress also...???
manvi : maya buy whatever u wish like... i will pay the bill...
maya : ohhh... you are such a sweetheart mannu... love you...
manvi : dont waste time in buttering me honey... go grab the chance and dont worry about the cost...
maya : ohh thanks... come lets go that section...
manvi was so hell disturbed and angry that she called maya one of her useless buddy to accompany her for shopping... and maya who sticks to manvi like anything agreed in less than half a minute...
after 2 hours...
manvi : are you done maya...??? or take this credit card i am going...
maya: no no manvi i am done... lets go for a movie you will feel relax...
manvi : okk... hurry up... lets go... i need distraction...
maya : missing viren so much...
manvi : yeah... (while all this time manvi was missing viren like hell... he didnt even let any guy come close to her... and the moment he left, a stranger met her and kissed her in the first meeting)
scene shifts
virat : kahan ho bade bhaiya...???
viren : yaar office ke kaam se bahar aaya hoon... (yaar i am out of station for some official work)
virat : shit... my bad luck...
viren : kya hua...??? teri jeevika ne
virat : uska toh naam hi mat lo... sarr dard hai wo bhai... par ek syapa ho gya hai... (but there is a problem bhai)
viren : kya...???
virat : i am in delhi...
viren : ok so what... wait a minute...!! (shocked on realising) you are in delhi...??
virat : yeah... i thought i would surprise you but i myself got a surprise cum shock...
viren : where are you...???
virat : hotel...
viren : ghar chala ja... manvi hai ghar pe..
virat : forget it bhai... how can i go when you are not there...??? accha nahi lagta and she might feel uncomfortable...
viren : nahi yaar... manvi bahut understanding and friendly hai...
virat : let it be bhai... once you come back i will come to your place... by the way when are u coming back...???
viren : it will take a week bro...
virat : koi nahi... waise main ghar gya tha, gate band tha... locked.. so i thought ke kuch...
viren : chal oye ganda dimag... din mein bhi thodi gutar goo chalti rahegi... (ohh lord your dirty mind... we wont keep romancing all day long)
virat : haha... aur ganda dimag mera hai... (haha... and u call my brain dirty...)
viren : mujhe lagta hai manvi apne friends k saath hogi... bahut upset thi becharii... mujhse door nahi rahi na kabhi is liye... (i think manvi is with her friend... she was really upset... never been away from me na...)
virat : haaye haaye... pyaar mein doori saza si lagti hai... waah waah...
viren : bakwaas mat kar... ab mujhe jaana hai... take care... and you can go to my place if u want... feel free... (shut up... now i have to go... take care n u can go to my place, if u want to... okk bye...)
virat : okkk bye bhai... i will see to it... take care
scene shifts
manvi : now i am going back home... that was a boring movie... yuckkk...
maya : cmon na... ranbir was soo hot...
manvi : ohh i didnt notice him...
maya : so where were you lost...??? infact what has been occupying your mind and thoughts...???
manvi : actually... today --------
manvi told maya everything that happened and maya understood it all and was with manvi... she for the very first time consoled manvi...
maya : i will call everybody... lets go to pub tonight... there will be music, drinks, dance and boys... you need a DISTRACTION manvi... and we will find one... what say...???
manvi : okkk...
scene shifts
manvi : i am liking this guys... thanks...
raj : anything for you mani... you know na we all love you...
manvi : yeah... i know... thanks...
yuvi : thanks n all... your boyfriend is really changing you mani...
manvi : viren... dont say anything about him... i miss him... (crying like a baby)
namrata : ok ok... promise... manvi why dont you go home...???
manvi : no nams... i want to party... party hard... (wiping her tears)
maya : manvi you are high...
manvi : i will still rock this place maya... you want to see...???
raj : she didnt mean this mani... we all know you are in the total control...
manvi : you know me so well... raj my darling gimme a hug...
raj : first come down from the table honey... (manvi was standing on the table)
manvi : okk... catch me then...
raj : hooo... if viren sees us like this, he will kill me... (holding manvi in her arms)
manvi : yes he would... but you are toh like my brother... hai na...???

raj : yeah... (manvi and raj have been childhood buddies... raj has protected manvi like a brother though he has spoiled her like a friend... they share a very special bond...)
manvi : lets go rock the dance floor...

raj : anything for you... be carefully... (making her stand on her feet)
manvi : chal na...
" Mundeyan nu chardi thaari thaari thaari ohdi heat te
Marjani paundi bhangra
Angrezi beat te - [x4]

Ohde silky silky waal, nasal di gori aa
Oh 6 footi muteyaar, ganne di porri aa
Khafa rata ni hundi, kise di cheat te
Marjaani paundi bhangra
Angrezi beat te - [x4]

O khad taan ja, tu nede aa
Bai idda naa tu gede kha
Oh kahton enni desperate, saanu dasde ke ae rate
Shoe teri da, dress teri da, ghadi jo paayi, guess teri da
Chaaro paase vekh lai kudiye, charcha hotness teri da
Nachdi mainu lagdi shudain, sacchi main taan ho geya fan
Machdi hik nu saambh kude, ni tenu government ne kar dena
ban

That is why salah ik laila, main tera majnu bann meri laila
Main teri laila, oh meri laila
Khad ja pehla saah taan laila
Marjaani paundi bhangra
Angrezi beat te - [x4] "

manvi pulled raj and danced with him until she saw someone familiar...
manvi : hey you... you...
moving towards that familiar someonw...
raj : mani... where are you going...??
manvi : you stop... hey you black tee... stop...
manvi was stumbling still managed to reach him and tapped his shoulder..
manvi : you... you called me a maid... hai na... (pointing a finger at him)
maya : ohh my god... is he is one...??? manvi is so lucky na nams...
yuvi : shut up u girls... manviii (shouting her name)
manvi : shut up n raj take him away... (turning around to order raj)
virat : yeah... i am the one... i never knew you would forget me that easily... i am the same guy sweetheart...
manvi : how can i forget such a jacka** like you... you kissed me... you scrou-
virat (pulling her close) : language young lady... language... so what do you want...?? you want me to resume it...?? as you say...
manvi : dont come near me... my boyfriend will kill you and you... you spoiled my whole day... you idiot...
virat : what are you so upset about honey...??? and if u are upset, what are u doing here you drunkard... sharabi kahin ki... talli ho kar jhoom rahi ho disco mein n i spoiled your day...
manvi : rajjj... take him away from my sight...
raj : coming mani... (separating manvi from virat) listen dude she is a little high... so..
virat : so take care of her and dont let her roam openly... she is dangerous...
raj : mind your language... come mani lets go...
manvi : okk lets go and i still hate you... (looking back at viirat)
virat : yeah yeah i love you too...
back at hotel...
virat : mani... i like it... sherni hai sherni... tallli sherni... haaye mja hi aa gya... i never enjoyed so much with anybody before... so what i enjoyed fighting and teasing... this city is crazy and so are the girls... i like you drunken hottie shottie... i like you... but wait a minute... she said she has a boyfriend... so so that guy (raj) was her boyfriend... no stress now... chillax dude... you are driving me crazy mani and wish i could see you tomorrow...

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love
naina n sana
Edited by naina927 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
really nice update I loved soo cool yaaar that virat is falling in love with manvi can't wait for next prt can't wait for virat's reaction also by knowning that manvi is virens love . update sooon sweety

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