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nityatandon thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey... Aneesha...
The chappy was awesome...
DS letter was so sweet...
And I am really happy ki finally she realised her mistake...
Aur ye lo Uday ko bhi naukri mil gayi..
But I am sure this Akash is upto something...
Shayad uske phirse phasake...
He wants to snatch away Manyata...
Update soon...
And thanx for the PM...

PS: I am sorry for not updating... I know you all are waiting for the update... But I am really stuck in school these days... The preperation for the annual day hs started and we have to stay back at school for 2 to 3 hrs... so its being really difficult...
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update...loved it... akash planned something big...manveer scene was superb...ds letter was so emotional...and thnx for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

superb update...loved it... akash planned something big...manveer scene was superb...ds letter was so emotional...and thnx for pm...


thank you so much ... yes he has some really bad plan ... i am glad you liked it...awn it was my duty
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey anni waiting for the update, pls update soon
pls tell the tentative date of update if u hv decided one
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saakhi01

Hey anni waiting for the update, pls update soon
pls tell the tentative date of update if u hv decided one


i am sorry thing are kepeing me busy
so update maybe only on the next month
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Posted: 11 years ago
COMMENT EDITED ON PG. 48
_Annesha_ thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: catty2000

RESERVED

EDITED

I am really sorry for the delay ...
But as i told you my ID was not allowing editing it ... for god knows what reason ... 😡

Coming to the update,
It was really good !
Very well written !
And ...
I loved it ... 😳

The story is progressing in a nice way !

I think Akash is upto something big ...
Waiting to get to know it ...

Continue soon ...
Thanks for the PM !

P.S. I am first but not actually ... Hope you got it ... 😆


it is fine dear
yes internet trouble annoys me too
i am glad that you liked it
thanks
indeed something big
awn it was my duty

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Posted: 11 years ago

Warning: it contents some adult part which are marked in purple

chapter 12

The city was lighted with the glittering of stars, the leaves of the tree swayed sidewise. The winds blew softly over the hospital building as like all her nights she prefer to stay there, beside the person for whom she had given everything for a person whom she was loyal whom she loved for whom she cared , for whom jai the gold digger was jai the softie her mother ...the woman who gave her birth , she was discarded by her father and soon after suffered from diseases leading her to coma , her father did nothing to help his wife but jai had to do something and this was the very reason for her to dance on akash tune, to save her mother for instant she did feel bad about uday but the very next time her condition forced her to take this steps, she knew what people thought about her and at times felt disgusted but at this point she was helpless just a little girl trying to help her mother as she sat by the body who lost its life long ago kissed the back of her hands and whispered softly

JAI:I miss you maa

Soon after her words were disturbed by a call she rolled her eyes watching the caller ID was akash, she wiped her tears and tried to compose herself as she said in a voice broken with sorrow

JAI: what is it akash?

AKASH:I need you know at my house we need to discuss about the further plans

JAI: sure I will be there in a moment

After a small pause he asked her finally sensing her voice

AKASH: are you crying jai?

Jai changed her tone and replied in a cold tone to him

JAI: look akash if I am helping you so even you are paying me so please do not put this I care thing ok you should be concern about your plan and I should be concern about the money bye I will be there soon

Saying this she drove away , she knew she might hurt him but she was helpless she spend her entire life watching her parents fight with each other at last to pacify her condition she indulged herself in drinks , shopping and boys , she was used by each and every boy in her life so she decided to never trust any boy and after watching her mother she learned a lesson that from now she would never love anybody. Here akash did not know why but instead of her words her hurt tone affected him even more! Some thing was indeed wrong as his heart pricked thinking her being sad

He gently strokes her hair as she climax all anew for the very third time , this night was long indeed and his intense passionate love making was making it even longer , she could feel herself breaking with each of his hard thrust as she lay on beside him her arms curdled around his waist , he looked up at the ceiling as she closed her eyes , he gently shook her asking in a rather excited tone

UDAY: are you sleepy wifey

She nodded her head in a yes as a smirk plastered his face and he asked with a naughty glint in his eyes

UDAY: can't we go for another round wifey

She looked at him and then finally said with her tiny face going red with anger and in almost a loud pitch

MANYATA: no we cannot have another round uday I am hell tired my boy is already sore

UDAY: and I love you that way

A cute blush played on her face at this point she cursed herself for falling for him charm the very next moment she was pinned on the bed with him above her body , he went laying wet kisses on her body , a part of her could say by his naughty glint that he had planned something anew for her and that is exactly what happened to her .he began to spread the tops of her p*&sy up until he found her c**t. He licks and kisses the inner part of her thigh on her most tender spot, he made designs on it with the tip of his tongue. She threw her head back as closed her eyes as she crushed the bet sheet it was all new to her she was still a nave and that part of her made he love playing with her . He started to lick the crease where her leg joins her p*&sy. He brushed his lips over her sl@t with pressing down on it to further excite her. The he put his lips right on top of her sl@t. Kissing her, gently, then harder. He used his tongue to separate her p*&sy lips and when she opened up, he ran his tongue up and down between the layers of p*&sy flesh. Gently spread her legs more with his hands. He licked harder now and pressed into her skin. He gently pull the p*&sy lips away and flicked his tongue against the c*** . This caused her legs to shudder. As she sensed she's getting up there toward orgasm, and all she could do was paused her mourning and said to him breathing heavily

MANYATA: uday please stop

He could understand that her body could not take the pressure anymore as he swiftly separated his lips from there and went back as her arms rested on her waist , she breathed heavily , her face covered with sweat , as he went caressing her breast , she closed her eyes as he understood that she required some sensitivity from him soon she felt asleep in his warm embrace as he kissed her forehead and then the pot behind her ear and whispered huskily

UDAY: I Love you wifey

She looked up at him with a peck on his cheek and replied to him

MANYATA: I love you too my dearest hubby

As they fell asleep in there embrace

The airport was a bit crowded than the other days , as they sat after there security check waiting for their flight ,it had been hours as she already slept in his embrace all over again , uday could sense how tired her body was after last night as earlier this morning he could see that she was unable to walk properly and at times he cursed himself for being so hard on her but she neither complained nor nagged just her cheek were flushed at the thought of last night little did she know that many night are coming on her way like this , finally after a long time they boarded for the flight , she sat their looking out the window as he softly caressed her nude arms as she wore a sleeveless blouse , a air host came disturbing into their peace as she turned her attention towards him , he asked in a rather flirty tone looking at manyata who adored herself in the green netted sari and her married assets made her even more attractive , that could be clearly shown in the face of the air host as he asked driving his attention on her

AIR HOST: excuse me would you like some tea for now Madame

MANYATA: no thanks I am fine uday do you want something

She turned towards uday whose eyes were already redden with anger , he could not bear this air host even for a minute in front of his eyes , as he said in a stern voice

UDAY: no I want nothing AT ALL

AIR HOST: ok Madame if you need something then please ask me

He smiled at manyata and she too smiled back at him which increased uday anger even more , but it was soon vanished into thin air by her sweet voice as she started to say the thing they would do once they get to Devgarh , how she will surprise her dadi and even mother in law and she had a long list which was going on and on rarely giving him a chance to speak . But actually he had nothing to say when he has his wifey in his arms there is hardly any need for talking but he was a patient listener and wondered in the mist of all this that a certain thing was very much sure that he was not going to get his wife so much as she would be too crowded with the guest but he too had his plans for the holiday , the hatched abandoned building behind the ravine was perfect to give wings to his plans as she shook him and said

MANYATA: where are you uday I am asking you something?

UDAY:I am sorry wifey yea tell what were you telling

MANYATA: remember Mister Chawla

UDAY: yea I do our math's teacher I used to go there for tuitions my favorite teacher

MANYATA: We will need to meet him this time ok as I want to surprise him after all after long he will meet his guava thief again

UDAY: so on the Diwali eve it was you

He asked totally taken aback as she looked at him equally shocked

PROMO

Before she know it, he's got both of her hands in his viselike grip above her head, and he was pinning her to the wall using his lips His other hand grabs her hair and yanks down, bringing her face up, and his lips are on her . Her tongue tentatively strokes his and joins his in a slow, erotic dance


done with the update

i am sorry if i offended any body

please hit the like button and no res box

hugss anni



Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice and HOT update!!!!
I wonder if uday was the same guy.
thanks for the PM, update soon.

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