VruShan OS : (current track )Tere pyar mein ho jau fanna .

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tere pyar mein ho jau fanna ...

Heyloo peeps so here is a vrushan os on currently wat happened , I noe m kinda late but better late than never .this one is totally out of any of series , just a sudden earge to write as when it comes to vrushan Its hard to stop myself , hope u like it .

Ho mai fida mai fida mai fida mai fida mai fida ...

Aaja aaja re aaja hua chokra java re hua chokra java re

Javaaa re java re ...

Cut it . shouted palki mam

N suddenly after the shot was over she trembled down . wat just happened to her. shantanu held her n slowly let her down on the floor .

Sha : vrushika ! vrushika ! ( patting her cheeks )

Palki mam : kya hua vrushika ko ?

Soon the entire set was on move , everyone was onto wat happened to her . the ambulance was called .shantanu picked her is his arms n streached her to the ambulance
getting to the hospital he was wid her through out all the tests , palki mam n shantanu were waiting out side the blood test room .

shantanu : voh vrushika ke parents ko inform karna hoga naa .

PM : hmm we have done dat , they had been out of town . unko call kar diya hai they would be here till tomorrow morning .

N the doctor enters .

Doc : the reports r not that gud she is down wid dengue , she needs a fine rest .

Palki mam : but voh sets pe achanak behosh ho gayi ?

Doc : as I said blood reports down hai , it must be a dengue fever attack .

Sha: toh aab kaisi hai voh ?

Doc : aabhi she is well enough , but now she shud be taking rest , aaj raat ke liye atleats she has to be here , so inki family mese kisiko yaha rukna hoga .

Sha : mai ruk sakta hun ?

PM : agar possible hai toh plzz ruk jao coz I need to be dere on sets .

Sha : I noe mega epi bhi pending hai .

PM : bhagwan kare bacchi thik ho jaye , mega epi aate rahenge . I don't noe , wat n how we gonna manage this but hope she recovers soon . I got to leave rite now , toh tum yaha pakka ho na .

Sha : yup totally , I wil be here .

PM : plzz uski health ke bare mein update karte rehana , kuch chahiye toh bata dena n don't worry I noe tumse better usska dhyan koi aur nahi rakh sakta .

Sha : I will be dere standing strong n yes mai update bhi deta rahunga .

As soon as she left he tried to peep in her room , all his worries were just flooding out as he started pacing fast outside the room n talking to himself.

Sha : aise kaise ho sakta hai n hamesha usske saath hi kyu , gosh aabhi aabhi toh lauti thi , n aab firse yeh sab hogaya . I just hope ki shez fine , ek sec hope kya laga raha hai , belive that she will be fine . relax shatanu she will be fine , but kaise relax karu errr yeh ho kya raha hai !! .

His inner elibit were revolting against each other , he was scared , he was worried , he was angry , he was anxious , he was getting hyper at same tym trying to relax himself so inall basically he was mixed up!!!!! first tym ever he had experienced such a out flow of feelings for her , shantanu ke andar ka raj , rahul , devdas ,don ,baazigar , veer , om , sab ek saath uchal uchalkar kar bahar aarahe the n vaha uski senorita behosh padi thi .

Nurse : excuse me , aap kisses baat kar rahe hai .

Sha : par aise ho kaise sakta hai (still talking to himself)

Nurse : halo mai aapse baat kar rahi hun .

Sha : han , voh vrushika kaisi hai .

Nurse : shez gud , aap unke saath ruk rahe hai , aap andar jaa sakte hai .

Sha : thank u thank u thank u soo much !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nurse : dheere yeh hospital hai , shaanti rakho ! patient aabhi so raha hai , uth jaye toh bass unka khayal rakhna .

Sha : I will keep quiet (putting fingers on his lips) aab mai andar ja sakta hun plzz ?

Nurse : hmm .

She steps into the room as softly as possible in order to that he is not disturbing her sleep . he takes a stool n sits near her bed . he takes her hand n prays for her well being . he was drenched after the shot but noting worried him more the her health at this moment . all this tym he had been so much tensed n hyper of this sudden happening wid her . his emotions were trying to blow out but he had kept them stuck inside his wet body n heart . professionalism was wat he defined as we know , a fine actor yet a fine emotion hider , he could easily cover them up in order to handle situations , but at this moment he found it relly difficult to keep those tears in , but yes he managed to avoid them n concentrate on her fever n not his tears . later he dozed off to sleep wid his head on bed n her hand in his .

Aftersome tym she woke , to see her hand in his .

Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein Mere Saath Ho

Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahaan Tere Pyar Mein Ho Jaaun Fanaa

Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein Mere Saath Ho

She made a moment as a result he woke up .

Sha : tum ... tum kab uuthi , m soo sorry pata nahi meri aankh lag gayi , tum thik toh ho na , tumhe kuch chahiye mujhe bolo !!!

Vru : shantanu relax !! m gud (she sits upright ) hmm ek cheez mangungi doge ?

Sha : haan bolo kya chahiye .

Vru : ek jaddu ki jhappi de sakte ho ? baaki sabka toh pata nahi but I think ki kisi antibiotics se zyada mujhe isski zarurat hai , so de sakte ho .

Shantanu did not noe wat to say n do , he bended towards her n held her from back .

Vru : isse aacha toh mujhe mere dushman hug kare , I just wanted to feel better but agar tum nahi chate ki mai thik ho jau toh ...(pulling her hands out)

But a sudden jerk pulled her back straight into her castle . if that is wat she need to be better I don't care ! he grabbed her as those words came out of her mouth . she was indeed in her utmost comforts in his arms , safe n sound she could hear his heart .

Tere Dil Mein Meri Saanson Ko Panaah Mil Jaaye

Tere Ishq Mein Meri Jaan Fanaa Ho Jaaye

Jitne Paas Hain Khushbu Saans Ke

Jitne Paas Hothon Ke Sargam

Jaise Saath Hain Karvat Yaad Ke

Jaise Saath Baahon Ke Sangam

Jitne Paas Paas Khwaabon Ke Nazar

Utni Paas Tu Rehna Humsafar

Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahaan

Tere Pyar Mein Ho Jaaun Fanaa

his hands grabbed her back n her hands cluched his neck , they were nowhere but somewhere in their own place , as she went closer he could tighten up , no nothing not even a disease could touch her for that sake .his heart had kept quiet untill but now it was difficult to control , his fears, concerns ,care , may be love showed up all together n a tear made his way out of his orbs . he sobbed , he sobbed harder . it dropped on her n she spoke...

vru : tum tum ro rahe ho ..

sha : shhh vrushika just be here , no word can complete this moment .

Rone De Aaj Hamko Do Aankhen Sujaane De

Baahon Mein Lene De Aur Khud Ko Bheeg Jaane De

Hain Jo Seene Mein Qaid Dariya Woh Choot Jaayega

Hain Itna Dard Ke Tera Daaman Bheeg Jaayega

Jitne Paas Paas Dhadkan Ke Hain Raaz

Jitne Paas Bundon Ke Baadal

Jaise Saath Saath Chanda Ke Hain Raat

Jitne Paas Nainon Ke Kaajal

Jitne Paas Paas Saagar Ke Lehar

Utne Paas Tu Rehna Humsafar

Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahaan

Tere Pyar Mein Ho Jaaun Fanaa

Her eyes to watered , how could I mean soo much to him n why did he stand so much in my life , these questions had no answer at the moment but his love was crystal clear n dats wat she wanted rather than answers

Words , r they always the means to speak out , confession is it always required , at tyms tears speak way more louder than words n dats wat holded them tight together .her trust made her feel so lost in his arms n his concers made him caress her more caringly . nothing could hold them back , not even words of awkwardness could apart them . both shared a mutual feeling of satisfaction being wid eachother n dere was no space for word to take place . complete dats wat they were at the moment .

Adhoori Saans Thi Dhadkan Adhoori Thi Adhooren Hum

Magar Ab Chaand Poora Hain Falak Pe Aur Ab Pooren Hain Ham

Heavy heartedly she tried to speack

Vru : I ...i really don't noe how to say this or whether to say this , but I ...i relly ...

TO BE CONTINUED ...

He ha ha ha me n my cliff hangers r back 😆.peeps its total fiction so plzz forgive me if u find it abrupt . do leave ur precious comments n improvements of suggetions for next part .😃

Sanskruti .😳

Edited by Sanskruti_tanha - 11 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres...
it was ossam kruti doll...😳
i luvd it...vrushan os is a treat to read...😉
nw coming to os...haye shaan crying for vrushii...it was dam intense...😳
this part was really heart touching...
continue soon n do pm me...
yeh me first to comment...
Edited by vrushaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES FOR VISTORY DANCER 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Urrgghhh Kya yaar sab writers ko bimari hai Kya galat jagah pe story hang karne ki..
I so hate it Wen u guys stop like dis in between 😡 😭 😭

PP coming to d os now..
Mast refreshing for me..
Awesome tha..
I loved d way they hugged each other..
N i just loved d way swayam was speaking to himself outside d room..
Perfectly blended with emotions n penned beautifully..
Continue soon yaar..
Pm me as soon as u update..
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG patluuu😲 dis is just mind blowinggg👏 nooo wordss please please pleaseee contiueee updatte it soonnn😃😃😃
Edited by Hello_Vrushaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res res res ^_^
Unres
I can't beileve u stopped thers ? -_-
I want next part right now. :'( plzzz

The update is well written .
The song lines goes really well with the
situation. N I love reading ur vrushan os
Keep writing them :)

Update soon n let me know
Edited by AninditaSwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrushaan

res
unres...
it was ossam kruti doll...😳
i luvd it...vrushan os is a treat to read...😉
nw coming to os...haye shaan crying for vrushii...it was dam intense...😳
this part was really heart touching...
continue soon n do pm me...
yeh me first to comment...


thank uei soo much 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautifully written part...loved the way u portrayed intense shantanu...both r in love...along with ur filmy tadka..their story is treat to read...continue soon😊
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanskruti_tanha

RES FOR VICTORY DANCER 😎


no victory dancer this time kruti 😲😲
ho !!! this is really not fair

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res

Unres

Oye u mean mean gal
U ended at such wanted place

But omg that really really and mean really good

I personally am nt so eager for vrushan to be together
But evrry tym i read ur osz
I cn hear ma heart dnt,agree wiv me anymore
Silently sayz yes u want to see thm together as vrushan
And i kinda shut it
But after reading this one
Its said so loudly that
Am compelled to say



Yes i want vrushan to happen

@CVs #want swayam and sharon solo


Edited by Swaron.maniac - 12 years ago

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