ArShi FS: Deceiving Beauty (Part 2 Page 5)

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Farwa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

OH GOD! She has cancer omg... Arnav liked her the very instant and now they will meet cant wait to read more

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Suchi

@ChitraF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Read both parts together.. awesome concept..

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nee

@march2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

oh no her last wish...very interesting story please do pm me

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Mischief-Managed

@sarahehsan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Okay, so Arnav it is .. the RJ ! Phew! 😛 Okay, let me tell you, it really seems a totally different Arnav to what we have imaged in our minds since the past two years.. And still it doesn't feel odd! Its like we know he's all ASR-ish in most of the fics and still I'm able to relate to him being a normal guy who aspires to become successful in his career, whichsoever it is that he pursues! The way he feels contentment after his performance is brought out very beautifully without overdoing it. He's humble in his responses to appreciation and the vigor he has towards his profession is clearly visible!

They talked? They talked! Hell, they talked..! Okay, enough of my surprised expressions! 😉 Khushi is already connected to him, lucky she, innit? You fall for a person's voice on radio and are able to talk to them too.. Wonderful! 😛

You are not doing that to her! No way! Even if she has the horrible di***se, it should be the initial stages and she's to be cured, she has to! Please, don't make your first FS a tragedy.. I don't really like the concept of the 'Amar Prem thingy' (The Immortal Love, that lives even after people die), call me kiddish but that's how I am, I want people falling in love to actually end up together! I hope this is not too much to ask for?! *sniffs*

The conversation between them is well worded, shows the two's down-to-earthenness and it couldn't have been better. The excitement, the hesitation, the apprehension, the realisation, the expectation, the respect for another - all emotions beautifully framed! *faints with overwheming emotions*

So, he's sweet enough to grant her, her request, wow! And now, one can't really wait for further updates for this FS! 😊

Now, coming to you, girl : You are not doing any other OS, SS, FF until you're done with this FS first! If you do have random torrents of ideas, please take the peasure in saving it in your Word Document and only, only after finishing this FS, are you going to put them on IF! As much as we love your writing to bits, we still are impatient souls waiting for updates from you on the ones that we already follow! You can't be switiching our minds from one FF to another OS to yet another FS, so frequently! So the FS it is, that you finish first! And this doesn't mean you're gonna skip ME thread, in any sense! As long as we get regular updates on ME and here, I really have no complains if you wish to pen down anything else! I won't kill you, I promise! 😎

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

I just started reading.. The first part had me a bit doubtful... Then I reached the second one. I was literally smiling when their conversation began, and then...

Dammit, you wiped the smile from my face!