FF: The Promise Part 20 on Pg35 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really liked it. Keep writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Wish I too cld write such brillaint stuff😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The next update will be coming up shortly.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 5:

I reached Bhopal and went to NAM foundation directly from the station. I met Mr. Mishra and asked him to explain me about the current situation.

He said, "Aditya came to me one year back asking for 10lakhs. When I asked him for purpose, he told me that he is setting up a business and is falling short of funds. After a lot of consideration, i gave in to his demand of money. I gave it on condition that he deposits the money into Foundation funds within a year. It has been a year now and I have been calling him regarding this issue for past 2 months. And he has been disconnecting my call. So I had to call you for this issue."

"I see. But Aditya has never told me about any of these things. His business is actually doing well now. What could be the consequences if the amount is delayed?"

Mishra said, "Ma'am, this in legal words is a fraud case. No one can use the funds of a Foundation for personal reasons. I will be the first one to get into trouble; and to get out of it, i will have to reveal the truth to the police and court."

I asked him for one week time to gather the funds. In the meanwhile, I decided to not ask Addu about it, as of now. I will talk to him once we both are home.

Since I have to stay in Bhopal for some time, I had taken mansion keys from Guru and asked the driver to take me to that house. On the way, I saw Beera waiting for taxi. I called out to him. Shortly after, we both went to our house. On seeing me in Bhopal, Beera flooded the living room with questions on if everything is alright.

I explained the NAM Foundation case to him. He offered to help. Since Nanhi was also out of town, he didn't mind staying back in Bhopal for a few more days. While I cooked some dinner for both of us, he called up the office and did the needful.

Over dinner, we discussed over what we can do. We had some options like: fixed deposit on Mohan's name, a personal loan from bank, and the savings in my bank account that I had owned jointly with Mohan. But Beera rejected all options saying that this has been created by Addu and using family savings would not be right.

After a lot of brainstorming, we came to a conclusion to mortgage this house in Bhopal as no one lives here now. Beera said he would go with me tomorrow to talk with the bank.

I thought Addu had changed for better. Then why is he not returning the money? If this becomes a case, Mohan would be very upset to see his hard work being tainted with fraud.

NAM Foundation is the key that will unravel more such secrets.

Edited by bgscribe - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Intriguing part! Waiting for next part eagerly! Wish they could be a bit longer though, but great going!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The next two parts will also be updated today. So you don't have to wait long.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome one👏
waiting eagerly for d next two😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Quite interesting👍🏼
eagerly waiting for the next write up😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 6:

I didn't know why my sister was so upset over a pen. But I did know how much she held on to it as if it were her life. She never told me what's so special about it, just that it is her reminder to not give up despite any obstacles.

I don't care who this Bhau is. I walked towards the crowd. I saw the pen in the hand of one of his cronies. Having grown up in such gangs, I knew better than to put up a fight in public. I called him away as if I needed some help from him. I turned back to make sure that no one is suspecting me, especially his fellas.

I tried to grab the pen from him and he realized the purpose I called him. He pushed me and turned to go back to the crowd. But I held him from the back and twisted him to the side. He fell down on the stairs we were standing on. I quickly took the pen and walked away. He didn't get up to attack me; maybe he was hurt from the fall.

I gave the pen to Nanhi and the happiness on her face was worth the fight. Actually much more than it! Such situations give me a chance to erase Mohan Bhatnagar from my family's memories. They give me the opportunity to tell my sister that what her Spiderman does, I too can do it. I too can protect my family and give them happiness.

As I was lost in thoughts, I suddenly felt a blow on my head. Something cold and hard hit my skull and I fell to the ground closing my eyes.

I could not find the energy to get up and fight back. All I could feel was the pain. About three or four people were hitting me. I could faintly hear Nanhi screaming, "Leave my brother! Addu, get up!!"

After some time, the beatings slowed down and they were threatening. I heard a guy say, "No one messes with Vasu Bhau's family and this guy hit him. Vasu bhau has ordered to see his end."

And that was the last thing I heard.

I wondered who this Vasu bhau is. A ruthless person he is and then cares for people close to him.

Just like Mohan Bhatnagar.

Part 7
Edited by bgscribe - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Nice Update
Plz Cont soon 😊

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