MG FF: Tremble - Complete (index on p. 1) - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago
oh hell no!! what are they doing each other!! awesome yarr..please continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
everything happens for a reason...


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Posted: 11 years ago
***you were nothing but a waste of time*** :O :O :O

Did he actually say this???
As much as I want to get angry on him, I won't because I guess Geet's behaviour and *reasoning* have really taken a toll on him. Like Maan said, why does she see only the negative aspects -__- if the divorce rate is rising, it doesn't mean that there exists no happy couple xD

But yea it is painful to see them like this though :(

Thanks for the PM =))

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Posted: 11 years ago
how maan can say geet is waste of time yaar..very painful..maan take out his anger on geet..oh god..what going to happen now...pls cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you everyone for your great comments! Will leave individualized thanks to each one of you also. I am working on the next chapter and will post it as soon as I can. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari3

Thank you everyone for your great comments! Will leave individualized thanks to each one of you also. I am working on the next chapter and will post it as soon as I can. :)



eagerly waiting for next up ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just read all the five parts...
Lovely one.. quite different concept and very unique characterization..

He wants a marriage, but she just wants to keep the relation so refusing the same... both are too deeply in love... and one mistake in her alcoholic state, things fall apart...

Eagerly waiting to know as to what is in store...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love the patakhas you burst at the end :D. Have kind of understood them by now (little bit), flawed and living in their own bubbles!
Waiting for next...
Posted: 11 years ago
😭😭😭 😭😭😭 😭😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi guys! Just wanted to post individualized thank yous now because I really appreciate everyone taking the time to leave feedback! I hope to post the next part soon! I am basically done writing it, but I have to edit it. Thank you again!

@ dqno1 - Thank you dear for being the first commenter and leaving such a great comment! :)

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@ -Zahra15- - LOL at you knowing Maan better! Totally! Hehehe. Thank you so much dear for reading and commenting on both chapters, love that you are following along. :) Big hugs!

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@ pearl_warrior - Thanks darling for leaving feedback, I agree that they have to understand each other!

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@ Onir - Aww thank you so much dear for commenting on both Chapters 4 and 5 -- your comments always blow me away with their insight and depth! :) Really appreciate it.

@ .Tulip. - Many thanks darling for reading and for commenting, thank you! If you ever feel like checking out For the Love of a Child, I hope you like it!

@ Dilsay - Thank you dear, so happy that you liked the update!

@ Raina123 - My dear Raina, thank you very much for your sweet comment, aww! You are the best! I especially loved your insight on how the equation of tremble has changed! Hope all is well! <3

@ Lotus367 - Thank you so much sweetie, I really appreciate you taking the time to read and leave a comment! :) You're too kind. :)

@ CherryBlush - Many thanks darling, that's so nice that you read all three chapters! Really appreciate it. :)

@ Nav2010 - Thank you very much dear for reading and for bumping! I hope to update as soon as I can!

@ -Elfin- - Sorry dear, I was only sending PMs to people that specifically asked for one because I didn't want to clog any inboxes! Will be sure to PM you from now on, thank you for reading and for your interest!

@ sweet scorpio - Glad you liked it, thank you! Will be sure to PM you. :)

@ akankshasehgal - Thank you so much dear for reading and for your feedback! Will post the next chapter as soon as I can. :)

@ preeti.1 - Aww thank you so much dear for your comment and for bumping! I agree that Maan has always stayed by Geet's side in the past! I hope to post the next part as soon as possible. :) Thanks again!

@ dreamy - Thanks for reading!

@ -Mishu- - LOL! Your comment made me laugh so much! Thank you very much for reading, will post the next part as soon as I can dear. :)

@ Tyro - I agree, thank you dear for reading!

@ Hanishadevi - Thank you sweetie for reading and for providing feedback! I hope to post the next chapter as soon as I can!

@ Shruthe - Many thanks dear for your amazing and kind comment, really appreciate you taking the time to read all five parts and for providing feedback!

@ kawaii_geet - Thank you!

@ Ubiquitos - LOL, thank you dear! I agree that they are in their own bubbles, excellent characterization!

@ zariya123 - Thank you and thank you for reading!

@ pari_jyothika - Aww, I'm sorry to see such a reaction! But thank you for reading! By the way, I really love your icon! So pretty.

Thank you again, everyone! Your encouragement is extremely motivating. :) I will edit the draft of Chapter 6 as soon as I can so that I can post the final version. :)
Edited by kumari3 - 11 years ago

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