VIOLIN~RHYTHM OF ROMANCE # 4 love punishment page 62/ 8th january - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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VIOLIN RYTHYM OF ROMANCE



PROLOGUE



It has been my dream to sing at concert
But today I sing this for my son
Like my music had returned after very long journey
Maan I sing this song for you my son

(Said Harathi glancing at her little son maan)


And also my soul my friend Tamanna




(LISTHEN THIS SONG IGNORE THE ACTORS JUST ENJOY THE SONG THE MAIN LEAD OF SONG IS MAAN'S MAA)



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Geet baby don't trust anyone in your life
The music in sin not magic
It will kill your breathe every second

Said tamanna struggling for her last breathe



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His invitation


(click me listen to this song to enjoy the essence)


girl just lemme be your man

I wanna hold your hand and take you to a fantasy

eyes wanna to look in to your eyes

you make me realize
baby you're the only one for me


Girl you're like crystal moon

such a refreshing tune

you got me singing every verse

come into my galaxy

come fly away with me

our love is like a universe
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Her answer...??????


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It takes generosity to discover the whole through others.
If you realize you are only a violin,
you can open yourself up to the world by playing your role in the concert.- Jacques Yves Cousteau


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She was playing violin remembering his first touch

His kiss twirling around dancing with rhythm

Her body burned like fire remembering

His passion his love there togetherness

She was most happiest person in the world


LISETN THIS IT WAS REALLY SOO GOOD THE YOU CAN FEEL GEET HAPINESS


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"If a violin string could ache, i would be that string."

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Just go away maan take your every love symbol with you

Your touch was repulsive your love was lie

Said geet smashing his gift there love symbol


"Violin"
Crushing his heart into million pieces


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"He touched her as he usually touched his beloved violin, with a soft and urgent grace that left her breathless."



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Where is geet maan ...????????
VIOLIN RYTHYM OF ROMANCE

By MAANEET




HERE IS THE LINK GUYS THE ORIGINAL SONG WHICH I AM GOING INSANE THE SONG FOR I STARTED THIS STORY



THIS PROLOGUE IS FOR MY SAM AKA MAAGEETFOREVER PLZ TALK TO ME NA


CAN ANY ONE MAKE BANNER FOR THIS STORY ??.





OK GUYS GIVE ME YOUR VIEWS YOU KNOW I LOVE THIS STORY SOO MUCH I AM WRITING THIS WITH SOO LUCH LOVE DON'T CRUSH IT. THIS STORY VERY NEARER TO MY HEART.



I AM DAMN SURE IT WONT REESMBLES WITH ANY STORY AS IT WAS MUSICAL SAGA PASSIONATE ROMANTIC STORY OF MAANEET. IF STILL IT REEMBLES WITH ANYONE THEN DO PM ME DON'T CREATE ANY ISSUE IN THREAD PLZ.


SO TELL ME WHO EVER WONNA DROWN IN THIS VOILIN ROMANCE OF MAANEET



suhaa0_O
no buddy story line wont resemble with movie that was disaster expect song I don't like anything in that lovie so chill it will have my essence



Remya_Pillai
Heyy KK yes it was telugu movie the song was simply awesome

Valli 30


Well movie story line was not soo good but the love story was awesome you can see it for ones


Shilalipi
Heey girl given the link again wee that song it was simply superb


HANISHA DEVI.
SORRY YAAR FOR MAKING YOU WAIT THIS LONG


IF I WILL START TAKING MY FRIENDS IT WILL BE VERY BIG SOO I CONT WRITE ALL NAMES
BUT FEW FRIENDS OF MINE BE WITH ME IN THIS JOURNEY ALSO GUYS
MY BABY AKA PRAFF, MY GULABI AKA DR.ROSE , MILKY GIRL AKA VALLI DI, CADBURRY AKA SWEETEST PARI, BACHI AKA GEETSIRMAAN, JADU AKA MAYA RHEA, DEEPU, NIVEDITHA CHAND,
KERELA KUTTI AKA REYMS, PRIYA DARSINI, MASNHI, DOUBLE CROSS, SAM AKA PRIYA1111,






UP TO THEN FIR MILENGE CHALTHE CHALTHE





dedicating this ss to most imp persons my

"baby doll" aka "maangeet forever"
and

"praff ji" aka " reachsky_2011"



so tell me who wonna be in this romantic journey of maaneet with me


with love pooja

Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
sri91 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
nice start..
Maan and geet are gonna be different...
Lets see wat violin bring them...
Waitin dr...
Continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
very unique concept and way of writing...
it is different...
I loved it dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Nice prolouge waiting 4 first part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Prologue sounds pretty interesting...waiting for main story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
nice concept...😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
interesting...


waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Me back😆
Wow the prologue is very interesting 😃
Waitngsss do start soon😃
Thank u for the pm😃
Love aanya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Confuse, is my statd ov mind now. First my head 'feel lik it will brust any time' and second you prologue, it left me shocked and wiyh mixed emotions.and did i tell you ever ''you rocked dear with pen'' in just fes lines you tell us about their mother's vriendship,geet's mother pain .betrayel which she get ndhow much she hurt. And than now future where maaneet are togethr as tdy have to be but still some where geet is not able to accpet this fact .

Yeh zaruri to nahi,
ke taar sur hi nikale
kai baar,
yeh woh talwaar hai
jo chune par haath kat daale.


For sure poem complete karugi.
If you like these vew lines

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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting prologue
eargely waiting for updates

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