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Request all of you to support Drashti in JDJ...please vote to make out Maan ki Mishty win this title. Use this link to vote - http://colors.in.com/in/jhalak-dikhhla-jaa/#nav

Thank you to all my friends who have waited for me so patiently. I had a great vacation and though very busy I promise to try my best and give you one update every week. I was feeling very wierd writing after a long time but hopefully it came out ok. I maybe little rusty so please bear with any mistakes.

Also Happy Janmashtmi and also a belated Happy Friendship day to all of you.

Thank you Pooja (Twilightsparkle ) for such a lovely poem. I have added it below as it gelled perfectly with the update.

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Chapter 55 " Aye ho meri zindagi

Daadima took Anu from him and moved to puja room with Meera leaving the two love birds behind.

Geet could not fathom what was going on and was actually chiding Maan in her head

"Yeh sir bhi na...kya soch rahe honge sab...lekin why did he stop me"

Suddenly she felt him holding her hand and making her sit on the sofa. With hooded eyes she saw him taking out a box from inside his coat pocket. Her breath got caught in her throat as her heart swelled for all the care and love she knew not only resided in his heart but also he expressed with his every gesture. He not only knew but cherished those simple moments which gave her happiness of life...which she loved to live.

She could just fill her eyes with utmost love for him as he slid red and golden bangles on her hand. His full concentration was on her and those delicate glass circles as if he was scared to even glide them gently on her wrist. As one hand was still in sling he took time but with utmost care he slid them one by one gently.

When finished, a big smile beamed on his face as if he got a treasure. Holding her hands he shook them filling the large room with soothing tinkling sound.

"You love bangles na so I bought some for you and kept them in our room waiting for that day when you will accept them."

He wiped tears brimming out of her eyes now.

"Ab kabhi khud ko mat rokna..."

She just nodded her head completely in awe. She had hidden all her desires in one place - her heart and just with his one gesture, he showed to her that fulfilling her every desire, be it small or big meant everything to him...he had shown his right by asking her to open herself to her own dreams.

Clasping her hand in his he made her stand. Taking his anchal he himself put it over her head.

"You look even more beautiful in reality then I dreamt of"

An avalanche of emotions drowned her at his simple words and act. Her love was blessing her... showering her with his love and care...making her his bride. She felt like he was tying her in an unseen bond as he put that piece of cloth on her head...he was welcoming her in his life...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wc9UrC6JxTY&feature=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wc9UrC6JxTY

Aaye ho meri zindagi mein, tum bahar banke
Mere dil mein yunhi rahna, tum pyar pyar ban ke
Ankhon mein tum base ho, sapne hazaar ban ke
Mere dil mein yunhi rahna, tum pyar pyar ban ke- Aaye ho,,,



Entangling her fingers once again he walked with her together into the temple.

Come let's sing winter sonata together

Taking slow steps touching each word with our soul

Breaking the shells that were covering our happiness

Forgetting all the hardships we faced till now

Daadima and Meera both saw her bangles filled hands and both acknowledged it but refrained teasing him. They both knew that they loved each other like mad and they could only thank God that finally they were getting a chance to express this love with each other.

Daadima made Geet light the holy lamp and then bowed their head in front of almighty asking him to bless her family. After Aarti, Daadima took her in front of Maan's Grandfather's and Mother's portraits for blessings and then made her sit next to Maan.

"Meera sab se pehle aap Maan ka tika kijiye and shagun ke liye ek rumal aur 11 rupiye unki god mein rakhiye."

Meera smiled as she put a red line on his forehead.

Then she took a shirt out of her bag along with a box and kept it in Maan's lap.

"Meera yeh sab..beta humne apapko bas ek hanky aur..."

"Daadima please. There is nothing I can give to show my true feelings. Waise bhi mujhe pata hai Bhai ke paas sab kuch hai. Di always gives a portion of her salary to me every month but I hardly ever use it. Yeh samajh lijiye ki yeh Di aur meri taraf se bahut chota sa gift hai di ki pehli salary mein se."

Daadima was still not convinced but Maan stopped her. He understood the feeling of love which was behind this small token.

"Thank you Meera, it is very nice."

Maan opened the box to find a silver coin in it with Goddess Lakshmi's photo engraved on it. Without any hesitation, he took out his wallet and kept the coin in its pocket to mark it's importance and acceptance.

Meera beamed and Daadima just caressed her head with love as Geet looked upon proudly on her little sister.

Daadima went ahead and put a tika now on Geet's forehead.

"Beta humare yahan tradition hai ki aaj saas bahu ko tayiar karti hai. Krishna yahan nahi hain aur hum ek widow hain. Lekin phir bhi aaj hum khud aapka shringaar karenge aapko yeh batane ke liye ki humara har aashirwaad aapke saath hai. Zindagi chahe kitni bhi lambi ho par humein yeh pata hai ki aap dono ki khushi ek dusre ke saath hai. Aaj hum aapko apni saari duain dete hain."

(There is a tradition in our family that today mother in law makes the daughter in law reday. Krishna is not here and I am a widow. But still I will myself decorate you to tell you that my every blessing is with you. Life may be short or long but I know that both of your happiness lie with each other. Today I give you all my blessings.)

Saying this Daadima touched up her makeup first. Then she made her wear a maangtika, earring, a necklace, rings and even gave her new payals to change into.

Lastly she opened a box to reveal a beautiful bangle.

"Yeh bangle humein Maan ke daadaji ne diya tha jab Raj paida hue the. Aaj yeh hum aapko dete hain. Ismein sirf humara hi nahi balki unka bhi pyaar aur aashirwad bandha hai."

Geet just hugged Daadima as she patted her feeling her getting overcome by emotions.

Placing fruits and finally a doll in her lap, she completed the last ritual of placing just a spot of sindoor in her maang.

"Yeh sindoor is baat ka prateek hai ki aaj se aap humare liye is ghar ki bahu huin. Shaadi mein bhale hi waqt ho par ab aap humari hain...chaliye Maan ab aap Gete ko sweets khilaiye"

(This red vermilion is a sign to say that you are this house's daughter in law. There may be time in marriage but now you are ours...come. Maan now you feed sweets to Geet.)

Mere saathi mere sajan, mere saath yun hi chalna
Badalega rang zamana, par tum nahi badalna
Meri mang yun hi bharna, taare hazaar ban ke
Mere dil mein yun hi rahna, tum pyar pyar ban ke

Maan smiled looking wonderingly at his Mishty. She looked so beautiful...just like a bride in that red saree and that spot of red just added another dimension to her beauty. Weaving dreams of his future, he lifted a ladoo and fed her half. On Daadima's insistence, Geet took the half eaten ladoo from his hand and with trembling fingers fed him the remaining. Meera clapped with Anu imitating her mom at her mausi and bade papa's new beginning.

Come let's sing winter sonata together

Promising each other to be together for ever

Dreaming about our love symbol

Silently listening to our soul's heart beat

Everyone had lunch and Daadima absolutely beamed with laughter and talks flowing around the table. Even Nakul and other servants felt as if the entire house had come alive. They had even forgotten when last Maan sir smiled. Some could not even believe that Maan sir could play like this with Anu while Meera and Daadima teased him to death which he just took on patiently.

"Nakul bhaiya mein sochta tha ki Maan sir akele hain kyonki he can never be a good husband and father. Humesha gussa aur itna serious. Lekin aaj maloom chala ki mein galat tha. Woh aise is liye the kyonki who akele the."

"Haan Sanjay, aaj phir se yeh ghar ghar jaisa lagta hai."

Anu insisted and sat in her bade papa's land. With lot of patience Maan fed her and then had his own food as she played with his shirt buttons. But in all this even with Meera and Daadima's eyes on her, he did not stop gazing at her sweetly.

Geet felt his continuous gaze on her and could not even lift her head up resulting in her not even serving herself properly. But it didn't matter as Maan himself, served her giving her his full attention.

"Haaw jeejs...kya baat hai...badi khatir daari ho rahi hai biwi ki...dekha Daadima...humein toh kabhi yeh ghaas bhi nahi daalte."

"Ab tune mana kar diya tabhi toh teri behen se kaam chala raha hoon."

Daadima burst out laughing as Meera just saw him agape not able to believe that her serious and mature jeeju just said that to her.

In all this poor Geet had no guts to even look at him leave alone having an eye lock. But still when she saw Anu not letting him have his food, she got up and took her

"Aaap araam se kha lijiye...mera ho gayaMaan sir"

Meera was going to jump on that when Daadima stopped her from teasing Geet. She could see how shyness was gripping the innocent girl and did not want her to feel uncomfortable in any way.

Everyone rested and had a good time in living room after the lunch. That's when Daadima informed that Panditji has suggested two days before Diwali to be very auspicious for engagement.

"If both of you agree then we can keep annual Diwali function also the same day and do your engagement as well."

Maan looked at Geet who seemed overwhelmed with everything going on. But she also seemed happy and contented so he just nodded yes thinking it was still 6 weeks away giving her ample time to adjust.

Soon it was evening and Anu started getting cranky trying to sleep.

Meera asked to leave when Geet also agreed to go with her. After bidding good bye to Daadima, Meera left and got settled in the car while Maan held Geet's hand and pulled her into the corridor.

"Aaah...Maan sir...kya kar rahe hain...jaane dijiye...Meera bahar hai"

He pouted making faces - "Abhi na jao ki dil abhi bhara nahi..."

Geet blushed at his words

"Please, jaane deejiye na...kal sham ko aa jaungi"

"Sham ko?"

Geet smiled naughtily and answered cheekily while playing with his top shirt button "Woh kya hai na, I can't take chutti every day...aap mere boss ko nahi jaante...kitne dusht daanav hain woh...office mein nahi hain phir bhi unke managers mujhe kacha kha jayenge agar maine ek din ki aur chutti li toh..."

(You see the matter is that I can't take leave every day...you don't know my boss...he is a big dusht daanav...He is not in office but still his managers will eat me alive if I take one more day off.)

"Acha...yeh toh badi problem hai..."

"Hai na"

Geet mentally patted herself for a smart answer but the next moment a frown adorned her face at his next set of words.

"Aur nahi toh...tumhein kahne ka haq sirf aur sirf tumhare dusht daanav boss ko hai...managers ko nahi"

Agar main jo rooth jaoon, to tum mujhe manana
Thama hai haath mera, phir umr bhar nibhana
Mujhe chod ke na jana, wade hazaar kar ke
Mere dil mein yun hi rahna tum pyar pyar ban ke---Aaye ho

Maan bent and pecked her lips followed with cutely biting her nose.

He bit her earlobe as he whispered huskily "Ji karta hai pura ki pura kha jaaoon"

Geet's heart came to her mouth at his sexy throaty voice and the provocative words. She turned red like a cherry and just hugged him tight pleading silently to have some sympathy on her out of control heartbeats.

Maan smiled and kissed her nape as she clung to him like a vine Thik hai jao lekin jaane se pehle bye toh kehti jao aur haan...phone karna pahunchne ke baad...thik hai."

She stood silently in his arms still trying to calm herself. Distancing from him, she looked at his love filled concerned eyes. She knew he didn't want her to go because she herself didn't want to. But she had to go...she had to.

She whispered softly "bye" and before he could register, leaned in giving a quick kiss on his cheek.

Without looking back she turned and ran outside while Maan stood with a hand on his cheek still feeling her soft lips on his rugged skin. Yes she had kissed him before too but the feelings it evoked now knowing that she was his fianc were new and absolutely exhilarating.

Come let's sing winter sonata together

Until we overcome the pain which we faced

Welcoming our future happiness with smile

Cherishing our love our first touch our kiss

He smiled widely and in trance walked outside as Geet settled inside the car. Meera and Anu waved him a bye whereas Geet just glanced at him with hooded eyes. He stood outside on the porch, waving and then touching his cheek to send her the message that her kiss was acknowledged.

Come let's sing winter sonata together

Enjoying the moonlight sitting in rose garden

Getting wet in this monsoon rains

Come let's sing winter sonata together

Until our heart beat stops

Forgetting the whole world

Come let's sing winter sonata together

(Poem by Twilightsparkle)

Precap " Shokiyon mein ghola jaye

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me first..yuuuhooo me first..⭐️
and i sandwiched ur updt...sahi time pe aayi mein😉
first of all.WELCOME BACK DIII🤗
and HAPPY JANMASHTAMI...

i kept fast of janmashtami fr the first time today and it was just too good di...
went to temple in the evening and ahhh raat ka khana.. halwa puri... and mithayi yummm...
hows everything at ur side??

coming to the update...it was a very very very sweet romantic update
but the song u used...its one of my fav and honestly di... aaj wo 'vivah' wali feeling aayi
i was actually very emotional for i read the whole update while hearing the song...
and u wont believe i had tears in my eyes...

their acceptance...their love.. and those small small things
they just took my heart away
and i know u will find it funny but i am very emotional right now...
its as if everything can only be possible in dreams they never come true..
and the song whr she says- mere saathi mere saajan...and
agar mein rooth jaun tho tum mujhe manana...
its like she has so many hopes.. and she blindly believes that he will be thr for her no matter what

this feeling is just so over whelming diii...
like i said rula diya mujhe..😭. in happiness actually!!!
but the update was more than beautiful... more than what i could say in words
probably one of the updates of WS very very close to my heart
romance and lovey dovey tho chalta rehta hain but that devine feeling.. ahh i dunno how to explain it.. but it was just too over whelming for me...
update the next wenever u get time...
waiting forever...


Edited by kawaii_geet - 11 years ago
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Di... I love u... Muaahzzz...
Firstly WELCOME BACK TO U AND ME AS WELL... Hehe...
Actually mein bhi aaj bahaut dino baad IF pe aayi hu...
and Hayeee I got ur update... Luv u... Muuaahhzz...

ANd about update.. While reading I thought I m in some dreamland...
Just loved it to the core... I was awed by maan's gesture for the bangles...
and how I wish I was there with meera to tease them.. alas it would be only in dream...
and then meera's gift and maan's acceptance.. Sachi cute tha...
and the song just went with flow of update... My one of fav song...
Finally both are becoming one.. Engg fixed.. Thoda jaldi nahi ho sakti kya... :P
Oyee hoyee maan babu bade romance kar rahe hai.. Abhi na jao chod kar ha... 😉
Aww.. That was ctuie cutie romance.. and that last peck from geet...
Bechara maan hayeee dekhta reh gaya...

Wow meine bola hua song next hai... hayee waiting...
Continue soon...


HOw were ur holidays di..??? HOw are angels...????
And Sorry thread spam nahi kar paayi.. as mein aaj hi IF pe lauti hu..
Yet I would be irregular for dnt knw ho many days...
Thanks for update..
Take care...
Luv ya... Hugsss
Edited by mishtiritu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update

loved the way dadima showered all love on geet

and meera she was just too good loved her cute gestures
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update and maya and Geet are sooo cute...
Thnx

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