Rishbala OS: Chalte chalte..Last Part updt Pg9 - Page 6

That was so beautiful. u write very well. u r an awesome writer.👍🏼 plz write some more stories whenever u get time.👏

Originally posted by: pisces666

That was so beautiful. u write very well. u r an awesome writer.👍🏼 plz write some more stories whenever u get time.👏

Thank you so very much for your appreciation..I will always have time to write for such darling readers like you 🤗

Hello friends...here is the concluding part of Chalte chalte...it is not classy or dreamy as I can understand...but as the story itself was so simple, that I could not contrive any extra oomph factor in it...just keeping my fingers crossed, hoping you'll like it...😕

This part is dedicated to war_is_peace who helped me create the musical magic...love u buddy 🤗

PS : You might have to go back and forth one page to set the song playing..

Madhu yawned a little, and tried to cover the small 'O' of her mouth with palm. But Rishabh caught her. "You are feeling sleepy. I am sorry Madhu for keeping you awake till this late hour. Let's call it a night then," said Rishabh, although his eyes were speaking the contrary. After the immature termination of her interrogation, Madhu had hardly spoken a word. It was quite opposite to her nature. Even Rishabh realized that when he saw Madhu taking his leave and approaching the entrance of her building. "Madhu, wait a minute." Madhu looked back and raised her brows in anticipation. "All this long only I had been speaking about my feelings for you. I know I was a complete chatterbox, not even letting you speak once," stated Rishabh. Madhu simply nodded her head twice to express her agreement. "Tell me Madhu, I need to know about your feelings too," said Rishabh and looked at her with apprehension.

"All this while when you were telling me about your feelings, I could not help but think about all those situations when you rebuked me for my callousness in front of everyone in the office, and turned a deaf ear to my excuses, which were genuine at times," spoke Madhu with a conviction in her voice. Rishabh could not believe what she was talking about. "But Madhu, being the manager.." "Exactly so Rishabh, you are and will remain my manager. So I do not see any future in this relationship," saying that Madhu turned back and headed to her flat. Rishabh took a few slow steps back until he hit the car at the back. "Madhu, please do not mix office and my feelings together. Please do not punish me like this," whispered Rishabh as his thoughts started getting dazed.

Madhu opened the door of her flat and straight went to the balcony which overhung the entrance of her building. She saw a morose Rishabh leaning on his car with his head drooped down. She felt bad for him. Bloody, look at that poor soul. "Rishabh," called out Madhu, "look here." Rishabh looked up and saw Madhu standing at the first floor balcony. "What did you think of me huhh? That only you could play tricks on me? I know I am gullible, but even I want to have fun at times," smirked Madhu. Rishabh's eyes glinted instantly and the convex curve changed to a concave on his face. "Yesss!!," shouted Rishabh with a punch in the air. Even before Madhu could warn him, he came running and climbed up the iron grills on the ground floor window to reach her balcony. "Rishabh, what are you doing? You will fall down!" shrieked Madhu seeing his act. Bloody, he is really a psycho!! "I have already fallen in love with you Madhu, head over heels. Can't fall any further," said Rishabh with a dazzling smile as he jumped over the railing and landed on her balcony.

If music was the magic last time, it was the moon this time that created the 4 feet by 8 feet space into the classical Shakespearean balcony. Madhu was looking ethereal, her svelte body being bathed by the moonlight and her face having its own glisten. Rishabh took two paces forward and held her hands. "If you have already had your share of fun, can I now ask you for your feelings Miss Madhubala Malik ?" asked Rishabh, uttering each word very slowly but distinctly. Madhu gazed at his dark eyes for a moment before saying, "Kiss me Rishabh, I am all yours."

wow
what a beautifull ending
loved it

hey i have a request plz pm me whenever u write anything on rishbala

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

yayy!! me first! 🥳

ooo such a sweet and cute update mimi 😳

i loved it!

i'm surprised by this update coz i didn't expect another part!!!!! such a shock! sweet shock 😆 😳

n now i'm humming...'so kiss me...'

i shud stop humming before morning else my mom will get suspicious 😉 🤣

You killed me with your comment dost 🤣🤣

Ha ha...I hope you do not hum in your sleep...else you will be definitely in big problem...

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

wow
what a beautifull ending
loved it

hey i have a request plz pm me whenever u write anything on rishbala

Thanks a ton buddy 🤗

I have sent you a buddy request...u will definitely get pms for all my works henceforth..

AWWW... Awsome update mimi !!

Everything was just PUURRFECT !!

When Madhu said, "There is no future of this relationship..", my heart sinked. Before reading Rishab's lines, even I whispered, "Don't mix your personal and professional life Madhu !"
Silly me.. lolz

I loved the ending..
It was too good !
Good job mimi !