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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Great promo Mona👏. I think I can visualise how u are planning on taking the story forward, and it looks very promising. Do update AS SOON AS U CAN!


thank you so much
i was sure that you would figure out what cooking
sorry but i can update only next month as my exams are coming

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saakhi01

Wow awesome promo... Nw u need to update vry soon


thank you so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey all I was supposed to update only next month , my exams are still going on but this update is a token of love for a dearest friend of mine so I gave this surprise to my readers I hope you all will like it here I present chapter 5 of "REALITY CHECK"

Chapter 5

The hot rays of sun hit the white washed building , she saw the palace with her eyes wide open , it was a huge building as the car continued to drive in the pathway that was covered by cheery blossom tree on either sides and the palace had a huge garden filled with all botanical plants , as the car drove fast her eyes witnessed a huge ranch where some people were men were galloping away in the green meadow on the horse , it was hard to believe that this place was in Mumbai , a lone tear escaped her eyes as she recalled her own palace which was turned into ashes by none but this ruthless king . Jai had definitely come here but only to save her sister from this person , the car came to an halt as it reached and as the big iron gates opened there in front of her eyes was Udayniwas she stepped down from the car as she was warmly welcomed by ladies with the arthi and other rituals but little did she pay her attention to those , on entering the house she met him , he had that same dirty smirk on his face as he stretched his hands towards her and greeted her

UDAY:welcome princess jai nandini

She rolled her eyes and said with a stern tone

JAI:where is my jiji?

UDAY:what s the hurry salisaheba first you may go and freshen yourself than you and your jiji can peacefully talk over the lunch

He winked at her as she knew that she had no other option than to follow his rules as she headed to the room led by the maids , which from now was HER room , the wardrobe had all branded and fashionable cloths she had always craved and the shoes any one would die for but this fantasy did not attract her as she was guilt and disturbed by the way she behaved with jaggat , he did ditch her but somewhere a tiny voice spoke to her that he was innocent .


She sat there as she heard the door open , and that similar fragrance filled in the room , she could not be mistaken it had to be him , she crumbled her body a little more as she felt his footsteps closer and closer to her , she was scared of him , of the next step he would take as she felt his cold hands against her waist and the very next moment she found herself being carried away in his arms and than slowly being placed down on the bed he put a comforter over her body as he looked into her angelic face , a face that depict pure innocence he died a thousand time for hurting her and her family a regret that would never leave him as she trembled with fear he said her in the most polite manner a tone he has never spoken before

UDAY;Have something princess or you will fall sick

MANYATA: I do not want anything just leave me alone

She spoke to him with her pitch high as he clenched his teeth to suppress his anger and he tried once more

UDAY:princess you have not eaten anything since morning please have something please

For the first time in his life he was pleading to somebody but she was still cold as she screamed at him

MANYATA:no I dont want anything just let me go to my akash

The last world stuck his heart like a thunder as the anger in him erupt the very next moment she found herself pinned to the bed as she struggled and he said to her in a stern voice

UDAY:why does your life revolts around that chawl boy princess when you have me the prince charming girls die for me but my heart beats only for you and you are toying with my feeling with YUVRAAJ UDAYVEER SINGH s feeling princess you will get nothing by staying with that guy where as I can give you all the leisure of life

MANYATA:can you return me my parents back ?

She asked in a hurtful voice , the depth of her word hit him hard , as for many years one of his feeling was unleashed his emotions his tears trickled down his cheek as she felt him loosen the grip and after sometime she could not feel his presence in the room


He sat there watching the setting sun , as the birds flew in the sky , back to its nest and even all people were returning to their home but he had no place to go , he had no place to call his home , he had no one whom he could call his own , he was totally isolated in the crowd of hundred , no one cared for him , no one carved for him , no one loved him , he was useless like a piece of some rotten cloth totally unwanted . jai words echoed in his mind he was hurt because jai was hurt because of him , and moreover they could never be one as he was a common guy where as she was a ROYAL , they were two sides which would never meet a dream that would leave him scattered and broken he had decided to never return back as he makes jai life harder although it was hurting him, but he knew this was only way to ease jai pain by going far from her as his usual sweet smile was plastered to his face he said

JAGGAT:I love you jai I wish I could tell this to you


done with this chappy
i did my part and now its your turn
please hit the like button
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so that i can improve more
i hope you all like my work


Edited by chocohollic - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update!!
I just wish Uday could feel the pain he gave to manyata!
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Posted: 11 years ago
hai iam sorry for not responding your ff.its very nice ff.its awesome .loved the update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome mona.loved it loads.
hope manyatas attitude towards uv soon change.
and j and jaggat sort out their misunderatandings.
continue soon dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey!
thanks for the update
it was just awesome
i hope everything sort out soon btwn manveer,
j & jaggat
btwn thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice 👏

Manveer part is very passionate ❤️

Loved it Mona ❤️ 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey... Mona...
The chappy was awesome..
Thank you for updating...
Uday and J were really cute..
Although they were fighting...
Uday and Manyata were the best...
Their romance was really nice...
But it was really for a short time...
Aww... I pity Jagat and J...
They love each other...
Still they can't tell each other...
All the best for your exams...
Update when you have time...
And thanx for the PM...

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