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haii Varsha ji I red your story long back but due to my job left IF and went away now I am back so giving my comment sorry for delay

the title attracted me soo much you had taken up very sensitive story and you scared me soo much with suspense also. Love this story soo much and your writing skills were wow outstanding ji

after dev death geet is back to her old life but maan married her to know about truth he is successes also but in between oops 4 times maan almost touched death bed but due to geet always got his life back. I was soo shocked to know jugnu did all that geet poor she uksi galthi kya hai and that moron Vicky he is obsessed with geet soo much after years also he is waiting for her uffo but thanks to maan he saved her but with soo much drama haha wo tho hona hi tha.

Maan left her but he is feeling restless when he left her and maaneet were separated you know I am cursing litereally at that time trust me haa. But thank god geet was safe they met again but most unexpected way but I signed in relief knowing that geet was not marrying yash uff but the MU was about to cleared but you again kept blow making maan anger he ended up hurting her for her words

But I am happy they were together again but as maan guardining her uffo and sam almost backed off seeing maaneet together but geet reason makes her to be with him. I know geet was thknking he deserve best but both loves each other right love will do magic always here maan brought her to old days and what that stupid Vicky was back this time I am dead with turn of events but god sake he is dead that too in geet hands only you did really graet work it was in deed to give him punishement ny geet only

Now I want maan to trying to take her back to her normal self I mean maaneet have to stay a village and being MSK it was easy for maan to close the case more over she killed moron only. And they will stay at village may me one or two days but geet will be unable to forgot anything then he have to take her with him they have to be in office after that maaneet love story have to begin ones again maan also have to know the engagement was fake one without knowledge of geet it will be fun to see maaneet geet tyring to go away from him and maan getting closer to make her out form that moron thoughts same like GHSP what say. Not to forget dadi sam also imp in this geet have to take care of dadi then have to realize the truth she cont live without maan. Story will have maaneet romance office scenes etc now tell me aap karegi kya ye sab bolo bolo . I really love your way of presentation soo giving all theses ideas so try to use it plz.

Customs I wonna talk about these in todays also there are soo many places who will believe in all those blindly like sathisahagamanam child marriage soo many I hate all those . in this story you very well written values everyone have to follow specially mangalsutr I am south Indian so I know chain being changed in place of thread you touched my heart varsha ji and geet being village girl maitnaing all marriage symbols wow I love it I love glass bangles like crazy sach mai silly me. Do continue writing

Hi Twilightsparkle,

I am speech less looking your long commentshall I tell you one till now I written 4 to 5 ffs but this is the first time I got such a big comment.thanks a lot lotI think thank you is a very small word to say..any way your ideas all are good also no where I feel that you are sillymoreover I think always too sentimentalmey be thats the reason all my stories gain only little likes and comments..but once they started to read they will be addicted.

But what ever I am now only bcoz of my buddies.i know I am very badI am not sending pmsI am not giving replays for each buddy.what to do my situation is like thatbut still my buddies are not angry they comment and they like my works.

Once again thanks a lot.

haii Varsha ji I red your story long back but due to my job left IF and went away now I am back so giving my comment sorry for delay

the title attracted me soo much you had taken up very sensitive story and you scared me soo much with suspense also. Love this story soo much and your writing skills were wow outstanding ji

after dev death geet is back to her old life but maan married her to know about truth he is successes also but in between oops 4 times maan almost touched death bed but due to geet always got his life back. I was soo shocked to know jugnu did all that geet poor she uksi galthi kya hai and that moron Vicky he is obsessed with geet soo much after years also he is waiting for her uffo but thanks to maan he saved her but with soo much drama haha wo tho hona hi tha.

Maan left her but he is feeling restless when he left her and maaneet were separated you know I am cursing litereally at that time trust me haa. But thank god geet was safe they met again but most unexpected way but I signed in relief knowing that geet was not marrying yash uff but the MU was about to cleared but you again kept blow making maan anger he ended up hurting her for her words

But I am happy they were together again but as maan guardining her uffo and sam almost backed off seeing maaneet together but geet reason makes her to be with him. I know geet was thknking he deserve best but both loves each other right love will do magic always here maan brought her to old days and what that stupid Vicky was back this time I am dead with turn of events but god sake he is dead that too in geet hands only you did really graet work it was in deed to give him punishement ny geet only

Now I want maan to trying to take her back to her normal self I mean maaneet have to stay a village and being MSK it was easy for maan to close the case more over she killed moron only. And they will stay at village may me one or two days but geet will be unable to forgot anything then he have to take her with him they have to be in office after that maaneet love story have to begin ones again maan also have to know the engagement was fake one without knowledge of geet it will be fun to see maaneet geet tyring to go away from him and maan getting closer to make her out form that moron thoughts same like GHSP what say. Not to forget dadi sam also imp in this geet have to take care of dadi then have to realize the truth she cont live without maan. Story will have maaneet romance office scenes etc now tell me aap karegi kya ye sab bolo bolo . I really love your way of presentation soo giving all theses ideas so try to use it plz.

Customs I wonna talk about these in todays also there are soo many places who will believe in all those blindly like sathisahagamanam child marriage soo many I hate all those . in this story you very well written values everyone have to follow specially mangalsutr I am south Indian so I know chain being changed in place of thread you touched my heart varsha ji and geet being village girl maitnaing all marriage symbols wow I love it I love glass bangles like crazy sach mai silly me. Do continue writing

Originally posted by: varsha-sharma

Hi Twilightsparkle,

I am speech less looking your long commentshall I tell you one till now I written 4 to 5 ffs but this is the first time I got such a big comment.thanks a lot lotI think thank you is a very small word to say..any way your ideas all are good also no where I feel that you are sillymoreover I think always too sentimentalmey be thats the reason all my stories gain only little likes and comments..but once they started to read they will be addicted.

But what ever I am now only bcoz of my buddies.i know I am very badI am not sending pmsI am not giving replays for each buddy.what to do my situation is like thatbut still my buddies are not angry they comment and they like my works.

Once again thanks a lot.

haii Varsha ji I red your story long back but due to my job left IF and went away now I am back so giving my comment sorry for delay

the title attracted me soo much you had taken up very sensitive story and you scared me soo much with suspense also. Love this story soo much and your writing skills were wow outstanding ji

after dev death geet is back to her old life but maan married her to know about truth he is successes also but in between oops 4 times maan almost touched death bed but due to geet always got his life back. I was soo shocked to know jugnu did all that geet poor she uksi galthi kya hai and that moron Vicky he is obsessed with geet soo much after years also he is waiting for her uffo but thanks to maan he saved her but with soo much drama haha wo tho hona hi tha.

Maan left her but he is feeling restless when he left her and maaneet were separated you know I am cursing litereally at that time trust me haa. But thank god geet was safe they met again but most unexpected way but I signed in relief knowing that geet was not marrying yash uff but the MU was about to cleared but you again kept blow making maan anger he ended up hurting her for her words

But I am happy they were together again but as maan guardining her uffo and sam almost backed off seeing maaneet together but geet reason makes her to be with him. I know geet was thknking he deserve best but both loves each other right love will do magic always here maan brought her to old days and what that stupid Vicky was back this time I am dead with turn of events but god sake he is dead that too in geet hands only you did really graet work it was in deed to give him punishement ny geet only

Now I want maan to trying to take her back to her normal self I mean maaneet have to stay a village and being MSK it was easy for maan to close the case more over she killed moron only. And they will stay at village may me one or two days but geet will be unable to forgot anything then he have to take her with him they have to be in office after that maaneet love story have to begin ones again maan also have to know the engagement was fake one without knowledge of geet it will be fun to see maaneet geet tyring to go away from him and maan getting closer to make her out form that moron thoughts same like GHSP what say. Not to forget dadi sam also imp in this geet have to take care of dadi then have to realize the truth she cont live without maan. Story will have maaneet romance office scenes etc now tell me aap karegi kya ye sab bolo bolo . I really love your way of presentation soo giving all theses ideas so try to use it plz.

Customs I wonna talk about these in todays also there are soo many places who will believe in all those blindly like sathisahagamanam child marriage soo many I hate all those . in this story you very well written values everyone have to follow specially mangalsutr I am south Indian so I know chain being changed in place of thread you touched my heart varsha ji and geet being village girl maitnaing all marriage symbols wow I love it I love glass bangles like crazy sach mai silly me. Do continue writing

PART- 34

He shattered down..geet staring at Vicky dead body..once again she want to confirm whether he is dead are aliveher mind still not agreeing that he is dead.in past two times she believed he is dead but he escaped from deathnow againher eyes are not moving from Vicky dead body.while lady police pulled her handshe came to sensesilently she followed her.

Its almost one week..police taken Vicky dead body they done postmortem. No one from village agree to do his last death ritualsfinally police buried him some unknown place.

Maan made upside down to release geet from police but geet her self not givenshe didnt co-operated with lawyer and police..much aware about this case even police commissioner try to convince her. But no where she agree to co-operate with police and lawyer and not agree to meet her family members including maan.

When police and lawyer given the same information to maanfinally he used his power and met geet.

Looking her state in cell maan heart pierced in pain.she engulfing her knees and sat on ground looking at some wherejust within two days she is become too paleher smile vanished from her faceshe is looking again and again her hands.she is trying to rub something from her hand.maan had tears on his eyesgeet he called her softly

At first time she didnt look at himmaan went near to her and shook her shoulder she didnt responded..he sat next to her pulling her to his embracegeet just leaned on his chest without any protest..

geetwhy you are doing like thisyou know how much we are waiting for youI know geet you are not done any mistakejust to save me you have taken such decision plswe all are with youeven each villager with you pls co operate with police geetdont declare your self you are a killerwhat ever you have done its rightits not a mistake according to law that for self defense you killed some one

Still she is numbnot even speaking to him a word.

Maan going rest less.even she is not dropping single tear from her eyes.what happen to my geetwhy she is hiding her feelings in heartwhy she is not broking her selfwhich is become solid in her mind why she is not letting that to flow out.the fear somewhere in is heart that he might loose her permanentlyjust he pulled more close to his hearthe made his grip tight on her waist.still there is no expression on her face.

Maan held her as a treasure of his lifeshe is a sole of his lifeshe is his breathshe is the reason that today he is alive.tears dropped from his eyespls talk to me geetpls co-operate with law.or elseor else I loose you permanently geetpls talk to meopen your mouthopen your heartpls geethe lifted her face that he can see her eyeshe knows those eyes are mirror of her heart..but today even they are life less.is it geet stop to respond to usno it can not be.he hold her shoulder shook her hardly

geet what happened youpls talk to mepls geet you should come out from the shell ..just tell me what you are thinkingat least throw out your pain through tearspls geet.open your mouth.but his each and every effort is failinghe is become numb...he married her bcoz to take revenge on Vickybut what happenedthe day when he left her he is helpless.the day when Vicky attacked geet he is helpless.even today..he is helplesshe couldnt save his own wife.being husband he is nothing for herhe couldnt be with her when she needed him moretears rolled from his eyes.as a manthat who recognize him as ruthless Great maan singh khurana he couldnt save his wife.what a shamebcoz of him she is in jail.oh no.he started to weep.tears started wet geet cheeks..slowly his weeping raised in volumeshe out busted himselfhe couldnt control him selfhe came in sense when he felt her soft fingers wiping his tearshis eyes widened even now she responded him only bcoz now he is in pain.

bole geetkuch tho bath karopls some where he scared looking her statedid she stop to response.

ill co-operate with police but on one condition.she said in meek voice.

a small smile slipped on his lips. finally she spoke to him.

sirf ek sharataap manegi now she is staring at his eyes

geet tum jo be sharat rako mey manugiplskya bath hain jaldi se bathado.tum is musibath se bahar nikalane keliye mey kuch be karungikuchbi mathlab kuch bi bolo na geetkya chathi hain.

hum do na ka rishta abhike abh katham karna padega.she said in cool voice.

geet.he almost screamed in painstill she want to go away from him

ha maan apne manna padega.you should agreemuje patha hain maanjab apne muje yaha lekar aya usi din main apki dil ki bath samajgayi.somehow you want me to accept our relationbut maan now I cant accept it.vada karo mujse.aap delhi vapas jane kebadh sameera ke sath shadhi karungi

geet kyu kar rahi ye sabkya bath hain geet.why you are doing like this geethis throat almost cracked.

nahi maanpehele muje vada karo

theeke geet.tum mujse ithna door jane keleye fysla kardiya thotheeke muje mansoor hainlekhin ek bath yadh raknashayad hum do no ki shadi hogi kisi ourse tho jabi maine tumse payrr karungimere ackri saas tak um mere dill me zinda rahegi our tumare jaga kisi ko nahi de sakthifillal abhi police ke sath co-operate karo

He is about to leave she hold his hand.

one more request you will not come to meet me here next time

geet

ha maan.i dont want the great maan singh khurana coming to meet a ordinary girl...that to in jailwho is a killer of someoneits not suit for your imagewhat ever you want ill do itbut pls beware of me

Without looking her face maan returned furiously.

Geet turned her facewhat to do maan.devima is not agreeing to our relationthats why I am surrounded all thes problemsI know you will never happy being with meits better to move on your wayssee stillblood stains are not vanished from my hands.tomorrow peole will recignise as a killer husbandand they feel mercy on you that you are a husband of handicapped girlI know it will hurt you more

today geet releasing from jail.brij and maan used all their power and money to bring out geet.even police and villagers supported geet in court.vicky is already dead one year back in police records. But police proved that how mercy Lesley he used girls for his hunger and killed many people.even doctors proved him that he is mentally become psycho and he is out of mind where no one can be treat him..same time from village each and every person came to court and given witness against vicky.

Maan booked famous criminal lawyer Mr.Srivasthava to handle geet case. Maan doesnt want to take any risk in geet life. Still in court justice not agreed for normal procedure then the case turn to self defense.yes lawyer Srivasthava given strong argument against Vicky that he tried to kill maan and geetand whole village and police stood maneet side and provided the proofs against Vicky. Its not a easy to bring her back. maan struggled day and night with Bangalore police Commissioner and lawyer.

But one thing still he is not aware that geet disability. Geet begged her lawyer to not take this issue in court and she requested brij to close his mouth in front of maan. After knowing her real truth brij once again become mad but geet clarified all his doubts.same time he saw maan struggling to release geet from law.thats enough to believe maan is not a responsible for accidentbut the pain still longed his mind.still geet words are echoing in his ears.

brij bhai.aaj tak maine apse kuch nahi manga lekhin iss barpls dont tell maan that I lost my footactually he dont know any thing about my disability.i know why maan brought me here..he loves me lotbut I cant accept his loveyour sister dont want to live under his mercyor I am not ready to see him that everyday paying for his sins which he is not donewhat ever is happening this is all my faithbut promise me no one will open your mouthmore over now I am a killerreason whatever but people recognize me asa killeror else I will not co-operate with you people in court.brij agreed to her words

Maan too busy where he didnt meet geet at jail after the day...strictly he warned even media to not interfere in this issue.

Finally when case closed in the name of self defense.all are happythere is a happiness in every one face.everyone stood near the entrance of the village and welcomed geet wishing her.geet smiled looking her villagersyes they all are helped her come out from jail.her eyes rolledthere is a tears in her eyes...there was the day where whole village ready to send her forest for what is happening in village. Today they are with her bcoz she haunted the beast.

Maan hold her shoulder protectively from his hand. When geet disturbed from his proximity he whispered in her earyou are still my wife un till we return to Delhiso pls maintain our relation front of this villagers.geet just nodded.

Villagers made arthi and taken inside.. Geet bit her lipsshe smiled looking her villagers loveshe is really not expected all this.

Sarpanch came forward and greeted her with garland .he hold her handsgeet beti we decided that when you are releasing from jail that day we will be celebrating devima festival here.now come on , your devima is waiting for her daughter.

Geet amused what you people post phone the festival.its not faredevima will be angry

no geetyou are her favorite daughterwe know how much devotion you have towards devimabcoz of her blessings you are herenow stop cryingtoday is the last day of your tears.come with us . your devima is waiting for you.not only devima everybody is waiting for you.geet smiledmaan pulled her more close proudlyhis proximity is making her restlesshis closeness making her to dream once again about himagain her destiny giving her false hopes .but this is not right

uncle first ill go to homeI need to take bath.

okokbut be there at temple on timegeet just nodded and moved with maan and her family.

At Handa haveli..geet went to wash room to take bath. Her heart filled with happiness looking her family members and villagers . before she thought she might be wrong killing that beast Vickybut when every when treated her normally she felt comfortable but still maan is her imaginary starwhere she not even touch him.

Maan waiting for geethis cell phone started to buzzcaller id told him that yash is calling himhelloyash how are you

I am fine where is geetI want to talk to herI am trying to reach from past few days but her phone is switched off.he can clearly recognize the fear in his voice.maan about to explain but he stopped their it self. Dont know how he will react know about geet. Already she suffered muchnow yash is marrying herthis hosaipur incident might be damage her future..

wo actually we came hosaipur for new project. I think here some network problem. Any message to her shall I ask her to call you.

yes.i need to talk to her.. his excitement just pierced his heartwhat ever he decide, what ever he want to hide is feeling still when its come to geet it will be a pain to his heart.. by the by maan my marriage date is settled another thunder dropped on his head.

hum.congrats.maan said in low voicefinally the time is nearingfinally even god is not with me. this time geet will go away from meshe will never come back to me. something he felt on his cheek.he felt like stickylater he realized its nothing but tears

maan what happened..yash again brought him to reality.

wo nothingfinally geet living to abroad.i am really happy to see that you both are marrying. Advance wishes from my part he wished from half heartedly. Yes its hurting like never before..how can this pain reduce

aree maan I am sorry I thought you know the truthI am not marrying with geetmy marriage fixed with silvia who I am loving from long time.

whatwhy you are cheating her he raised his voice.he is really shocked

ha maanwhy geet didnt tell you.i am not a cheatergeet very well known about thisactuly we made fake engagement bcoz of mom healthmy self and silvia loving from long timeI know being a Indian she will never agree to our marriageSilvia is Anglo Indian but her health went worst day by day.she want to see my marriage before her death.but I am not ready to hurt her same time cant marry silviyageet suggest me to make this fake engagement.but now everything is changedmama get operated and she is finesome how she accepted silvia as her daughter in law.now every thing is clearedwo maan I just forget it first ask geet to call meI want to share my happiness with hershe is a true friend for me forever.

Maan cut the call.his whole body is shiveringwhy dont know bcoz excitementor bcoz of the truth come front in his eyesdont know.the happiness that only geet belongs to himwhere he couldnt control him selfhis heart swelled with happinesshe thanked godhe smiled he cried dont know what to address this feeling.really dont know but yes finally his prayer heard by godbut why geet doing this drama.

He stormed inside..geet his excitement is out of his control..

geet why you are doing this drama..why geethe shook her shouldersunknowingly he raised his voice.

whatgeet fearednow again what happened to him suddenly.

I know every thing geetmuje sab path challa apki aur yash ke piche ka rishthaaur tum dona ka sachtume kya lagtha hain tum sab chupa sakthi mujse aur muje kuch nahi patha chalegakya lagtha hain geetwhy you didnt tell me.did I am not belongs to you.are you wontedly you hide itits not fare geetits not farebut I know geet as a husband I failed long backbut you can consider me as a friendhey na geet.he was frustrated.today he decided un till he know entire truth he will never go back

Geet body froze at a timeit means he know about my disability thats why he is getting so much irritatedso much angry him selfhow can yash tell him about truthhe promised me that he will never tell anybody about my disabilityhow can he do this.now how can answer him.maan never forgive himself.oh god.why you are testing me so muchhow to hide with him

javab do geetwhat you are thinking in your mind why did you hide this from metoday you should tell me or elsehe shook forcefully her shoulder..unkwoingly he tightened his grip on her shoulderhe fail to realize that he is hurting her.

She know he is angry, now how to handle with him.even she broke her self after the truth came outyes I hide bcoz I dont want to live under your mercyI know about you maanwhen you come to know that you are the reason to that accident which I lost my foot , after knowing this truth you will never forgive you yourselfthats the reason I hide it.

what you lost your foot in accident.maan stood numbthe big storm hit him where he can not stand him self on ground..he is taken the support of wall.

Geet confused.he dont know about my disabilitythen what about he is askingmaan then ..yash.she stumbled

maanwo sach nahi tho kis sach ki bare main aap bath kiya tha.

you lost your foot bcoz of me..he is shivering..he is not answering her..his eyes just longing to her legs.tears rolling on his cheek.the big stormwhich broken two hearts once again..I talked about your fake relation with yash

Geet closed her mouth tightly with her palm.oh god ye maine kya kiya..

PRECAP.no even this time I am not giving pre cap

Hi friends,

I think my maneets fans are relived after geet coming out from jailyes even I dont want to give pain to my fansthats the reason I didnt drag this parthope every body happy.same time pls shower me from your like and comments.

Thanks to all who all with me all these days.I am planning to write epilog next partmey be this is the last FF from my side.so pls friends dont hesitate give comments and likes.pls plspls

And big sorry for any mistake happened my side..

Yours,

Varsha..