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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi friends...😊
My story starts on the nikaah day of Asad and tanveer...
Dilshaad to Najma : the day when asad tell me about tanveer pregnancy and decided to marry her😲... it really upsets me ... but I guess this is destiny...
(Asad heard this from behind and there is tears 😭in his eyes...)
in every two minute dilshaad is looking to her watch and waiting for someone...
Najma: Ammi relax...everything will be fine...
dilshaad: Now... everything should be fine...
Asad and tanveer seated on there place and qazi sahib starts the nikaah rasam...
first he asked tanveer ..." kya apko yeh nikaah Qubool hai..." within a second ... she said "qubool hai" with her evil smile...
than Qazi saheb asked Asad...the same " kya apko yeh nikaah Qubool hai" Asad taking his time... he is very sad... he dreamt of zoya as his bride but now its tanveer who is sitting in the veil as his bride... finally Asad take a deep breath and said "Qu..."
OH... light went off...and there is one spot light follow on the stairs... and music starts...
Tu mujhe chhod jaaye...

Yeh nahi ho sakta saathiya...
( asad sees who is this...??? his eyes didn't believe its zoya...she is in beautiful red lehnga... and coming towards asad and song continues...)
Meri baaton mein tera zikra sadaa...

Meri yaad mein teri fikra sadaa...
Main jo bhi hoon tum hi to ho...
Mujhe tum se mili apni adaa...

(now she is standing in front of Asad as a bride...)there Is big dupatta on her face...
Asad: Zoya... you are here ... I still cant believe this... you forgive me...?????😕
Zoya: mr.khan... im sorry for being late but I want to apologize to you that I didn't trust you that day...when I was fully aware of tanveer in tensions( she was crying😭)
Tanveer: Asad ... why Zoya is here.???😲we are getting married na... and look she is dressed up like she is getting married... zoya have you found someone...???(tanveer smiles) Asad say Qubool hai and tell her to leave ... 😕
Zoya: wait...wait... tanveer(zoya also laughing😆) what did you just say... you are getting married to mr.khan...ohhh not even in your dream sweety...😆
Asad: 😕
Zoya: look tanveer who has come to meet you...
Tanveer: POLICE😕
Inspector to tanveer: you are under arrest for making a crime...
Tanveer: Zoya...lied to you inspector...I havnt tried to kill her...and I not even drug asad...😕
(she got so scared that she don't even realize what she was saying)
Asad: you drugged me tanveer...????😲 why?????😡
its all bcoz of you.. that I cursing myself... that I cheated zoya... I was so lost in my pain that I not even realize that you are the culprit... you are one who made all the crime😡
you tried to kill zoya... my Zoya... how dare you tanveer😡
(zoya was very happy to see her lion is back)
Dilshaad: wait asad... there is much more than you thought...
All the attacks which you thought was on tanveer... was actually on zoya... by none other than tanveer😡
She drugged you because she wants to marry you... for your money and your status...
(Asad shocked😲)
Najma: bhaijaan... have a look at these documents... her factory is burnt ...and she was never married...
Zoya: now have a look at this...(she smiles😊)
these are her medical reports ... which says that she is 4 month pregnant...and its clear that this child is not yours...😃
Actually you done nothing wrong on that day... because she was pregnant before her marriage so she wants to hide it... so she thought she can easily frame you ... and by this her child got a name of father😡... I douted tanveer that she herself knows who the father of her child????
Tanveer: just shut up...(she want to slap Zoya but asad stopped her)
Asad: stay away from Zoya😡
atleast now speak the truth...
(tanveer tries to run but police caught her and handcuffed her)
Asad: I have never thought you will do this to me... you are only one close friend of mine ...😭 but now I don't want to see your face in my life...😡
(police took her to a jail)
Asad and zoya looking at each other and hugged tightly and both have tears in their eyes😭
dilshaad and najma also crying... than Qazi sahib dilshaad bi... your son want to marry now ?????😕
Dilshad: yes.. yes.. of course qazi sahib ... now the real bride is here ... so now the nikaah will surely happen...
Asad and zoya both take there place and both wore the shehra... and than Qazi asked Asad "kya aapko yeh nikaah Qubool hai"
Asad: Ji ..."Qubool hain"😃
Qazi to Zoya " kya aapko yeh nikaah Qubool hai"
Zoya: Qubool hai(blushing)
And the fireworks starts and all starts clapping...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I don't know about all the rasam of muslims... so I jumped directly to khan mansion ... after there nikaah...
Asad and zoya entered the house and dilshaad and najma make them sit on the sofa... there are some guests in house .. who congratulate the couple and give them gifts... and take a leave...
(there nikaah happened in the afternoon and now its evening )
Dilshad: Zoya and asad ... you both may be tired ... so go and take some rest... I will call you when the dinner is ready...😊
(both looked at each other... zoya is going to her room...)
Dilshad: Zoya... where are you going beta...???
Zoya: in my room Phoopi...
Dilshad: zoya...zoya... stop calling phoopi now...now im your mother in law... so call me ammi...
(Zoya got tears in her eyes when she heard the word ammi... than dilshad kissed on her forehead)
Dilshad: najma... go and show your bhabhi her new room...😃.(asad confused😕)
Najma: ji ammi😊
Zoya: but najma ... this is my room...
Dilshad: zoya beta... from now onwards... asad room is your room...😃(zoya blushes)
(najma takes zoya to Asad room and here Asad and dilshad hugged each other🤗
Dilshad to asad: go... now ... she must be waiting for you...😉
Zoya is standing near the door and confused😕its all so different ... me and Mr. khan got married ... when we meet him for the first time ... I don't thought in my dreams that I will fall for him and get married to him... and Asad opens the door...and door pushes Zoya on couch...😕
Zoya: ouch
Asad ran to her... are you OK????😕
Zoya:Oh c'mon Mr. khan... do I look ok...kitni zor se lag gayi mujhe...
Asad: I m sorry ... I don't know ki aap yahan par khadi hain...
Zoya: its OK...
(both have a eye lock and lost in each other completely,... asad in his thoughts ... how beautiful she is looking...... zoya blushed... and said aapne kuch kaha????
Asad: nahi toh with a smile😊
Both sees the room which is fully decorated with flowers and I looks so romantic...
But ther is some thing which bothers Zoya... and notices it...
Asad: zoya.. you must be tired... I think you should change into some comfortable one...
Zoya: but I don't have my clothes here ... I shoul go into my room and change...(zoya is going to open the door...and asad calls her name)
Asad: Zoya...( she turns...and asad clicked a picture of her in his mobile... and said a thank you to her...)
Zoya: thank you... par lisliye...???
Asad: for everything...
( Zoya smiles and leaves)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Asad changes and comes out of his room...
Dilshad: Asad ... where is zoya... ?? call her ...😊
Asad: ammi she is in her room...
Dilshad: ok... najma go and call your bhabhi and see if she needs any help...
Najma : ji ammi😊
(najma knocked and enters her room)
Najma: bhabhi ... ammi is calling you..(she is still in bridal outfit) bhabhi you look beautiful today...
zoya: thank you najma😃
Najma: bhabhi you need help???
Zoya: yah... actually...
Najma: than why hesitate...
Zoya: so sweet of you TAMATAR...
Najma: you know bhabhi... I havnt heard that name from so long... neither from you and nor from Bhaijaan...because Bhaijaan was so lost in himself... that he didn't know kab subah hoti thi kab sham... Ammi was also not talking to him... he sit still at the one place for whole day... he misses you so much... infact we all misses you so much(they both tears in their eyes😭) but now I can see his happiness in his eyes...😊
you know when ammi and I saw you the first time... we thought this is right kind of girl for our Bhaijaan (zoya smiles😊 and kissed her on cheek)
Now najma help her in removing the pins... and zoya makes sounf of ahhh...
Najma: sorry ... lag gaya...
Zoya: its ok tamatar...(but hearing her ahh... asad knocked on the door and asked what happened)
najma: nothing bhaijaan... who bas bhabhi ko pin lag gayi thi...😊
Asad: be careful... najma
Najma: ji bhaijaan... ab hum aapki zoya ko kuch nahi hone denge...😃 (zoya blushes😳 and also blushes outside the door😳)
Dilshad: come ... dinner is ready...
Asad sees zoya and najma walking towards the table... asad and zoya give a smile to each other 😊 Asad pulls a chair for zoya... like a gentleman...dilshad and najma giggled😃
Dilshad: have some pizza zoya... I know its your favourite...😊
Zoya : aaj nahi phoopi... sorry... ammi
Dilshad: but why??? you love eating pizza...(asad and dilshad shocked😲)
Zoya: I don't know ... but I don't feel like eating today...sorry ammi...
Dishad : its ok beta ... but have something na...
Zoya: ok ... than I should eat some fruits...
Dilshad: why are you so quite asad...????😕
Asad: ammi .. im still in shocked what tanveer has done to harm us...how can she do this... and tell me ammi ... how can you sense her evil moves...???
Dilshad: zoya calles me yesterday... and tell the whole story... so me and najma became detective as per zoya orders to find a clue in tanveer room ... when she was not at home... there we found a bundle of documents... like... her bank statements ,, order slips...and her pregnancy reports... which shows that she is 4 month pregnant... so we waited for today to expose her in front of you...
So... Zoya tell me ... we are good as detective...(smiles😊)
Zoya: ammi ... you both were rocking🥳(asad also has a big smile😃)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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They all finished the dinner and najma take zoya to Asad room again... Dilshad said Goodnight and best of luck👍🏼 to Asad and him to his room...

Asad enters the room... this time he is more careful that the door didn't hit Zoya again... he closed the door... zoya is standing near the window...(waiting for Asad)... and asad comes stand close to her... they exchanged a smile... (there is complete silence in the room)

this time for a change Asad started to talk...

Asad:kya soch rahi hai aap???

zoya: nothing...

(Asad doesn't know how to start but he is trying his best...)

Asad: You never told me... how you like this room...???

Zoya: Oh ... the room is beautiful...😊

Asad: I mean ... now this is ours room ... so I want to know if you need to change anything...

Zoya: but you don't like changes ...

Asad: but if you want to ... she interrupts.. no ..no.. Mr.khan... The room is perfect...😊 But I need a space for my clothes ...

Asad: I will definetaly arrange it by tomorrow...😊

Zoya: you know which is my favourite corner in your room...(Asad confused😕) here near this window...it feels so fresh here...the sun will wake us in the morning... the moon light looks so beautiful in this room ... and how can I miss the rain...when it rains... that gilli mitti ki khusboo... WOW...(Asad smiles😊)

( and it started to drizzle suddenly...😆 and it makes Zoya and Asad so happy)

Zoya: WOW... mr.khan baarish...😃

(Asad is enjoying the view in front of his eyes... its not the rain... its Zoya... who is playing with the rain drops... and her face is all wet... Asad wants to touch her face...😳)

Asad comes closer to her...(which made Zoya nervous) ... and said I LOVE YOU ZOYA...(she turns to him in a surprised)... than he cupped her face in his hands and more close to her... and now there lips were an inch apart... (Zoya closes her eyes to feel Asad...there breathes become heavier as they both feeling each other for first time...) and BOOM>>>BOOM>>> and the sound of thunder storm comes between them😲 ... and zoya open her eyes and take a back...

than ther is awkward silence in the room... and this time zoya started...

Zoya: oh .. my I -pad...aapke room mein kaise????

Asad: kudh chhal ke aa gaya ...😆

Zoya: very funny...😊... par yeh aapke kisi kaam nahi aa sakta...

Asad: kyun???

Zoya: bcoz ther is password locked in it...😃 I bet which you can never guess( she smiles and sits on the couch) you wanna try...

Asad also sits close to her... this make zoya nervous.. and takes I-pad from her...

Asad: how many chances I will get...

Zoya: one... chaliye aapko do chances milte hain ... ok..

Asad: if I guessed it right than😉

Zoya : than whatever you say...( she is 100% sure .. Asad will not)

Asad entered the wrong password... to look at her reaction.. and she started jumping and say yes .. yes I know it...

Asad: wait.. wait... I have got another chance na...this time he entered the right one... and her I-pad is unlocked...😃

zoya shocked😲 and fumbles ... how you guessed it... but im sorry mr.khan ... I kept this password for fun... I promise I will change it...

Asad: no need to change it ... I like it...I know that you are a fun loving person.. you like all this ... you can call me by thousand names... but I think these are your favourite like MR. akdu ahmed khan...jilailahi... Mr.khan... and Jahapana six pack😊but you which one is my favourite one...
Zoya: which one ...
Asad: which you never said...(zoya confused😕) ASAD...I want to hear that name from you now...
Zoya blushes ☺️ hard... and finally she said ASAD and big smile comes on his face...
Asad again insist her to speak ... she again said asad...
Asad: its feeling like im hearing my name for the very first time...😊 aur hain ek aur baat hain jo aape abhi tak nahi kahi... I LOVE U...
Zoya:☺️
Asad: but I don't mind... take ur time...and Asad puts that red tabeez on her arm again...
than asad again staryed to talk...
zoya in her thoughts yeh Mr.khan... sorry asad kab se itni bbatein karne lag gaye... yeh mujhe kahte the ki mein kitna bolti hu... 😆 aur shayad yeh bhol gaye hai ki aaj hamari SUHAAGRAAT hai...
Now Zoya feel sleepy🥱 and she started to yawn... and than asad feel something on his shoulder... he sees Zoya rested her head on his shoulder ... than he comfortable himself a little... without disturbing her... sleep next to her... they both sleep holding each other hands...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Next morning.. dilshad and najma looking at a clock.. that bhaijaan is late..😛

Dilshad: its ok najma.. let them sleep.. after all they both suffered a lot..

After an hour..

Dishad: I think I should go and wake them up.. she knocked their door..but no one answers..she sees that the door was not locked.. she gets in and sees asad and zoya sleeping on the couch by holding each other arms..she smiled😊 and give her blessing to them and pray to allah ..that now you will have to save them from any evil eye.. And she leaves silently..

In ASYA room..

Asad wakes up and sees Zoya holding him tightly.. his hands comes close to her face.. and tuck her hair behind the ear.. to capture her beautiful face.. this makes Zoya awake..(eye lock)

Zoya: Good morning..😊

Asad: Good morning Zoya..😊and without saying anything he makes his way to the washroom..

Zoya: Arre😔.. sirf good morning kaha.. aur kuch nahi... Lagta hai yeh naaraz ho gaye hai.. Kal raat ko mein so jo gayi thi.. Allah Miyan.. nikaah ke baad pehla din aur itni tension de di..

Chal zoya get ready.. asad ko aaj kisi bhi baat se upset nahi karna..she gets ready in her previous room.. zoya wore a yellow coloured anarkali suit..

Dilshad: mashaallah.. Zoya😃.. kitni pyaari lag rahi ho.. Kisi ki nazar na lag jaye😃

Najma: zarror , Bhaijaan ki lagegi..😛

Asad also come in living room and mesmerized by her beauty..😉

Najma: (teasing her )how's your Suhaag raat.. Bhabhi..😛(asad give her stern look)

Dishad immediately change the topic(she knows that nothing happened) and takes zoya in her room..

There dilshaad gave zoya a beautiful pair of diamond bangles.. 😊

Dilshad: zoya mein tumahri ammi jaisi hu na.. toh kya mein tumse kuch keh sakti hu..😊

Zoya: aap ammi jaisi nahi.. ammi hai..

Dilshad: so sweet of you Zoya.. Zoya now you and Asad are going to start your new life.. in which there is hesitation in both of you.. You both have to overcome from your fears and make an effort.. after all... you both love each other..and I want my children to be happy..always...😃

Zoya : ji ammi(blushing☺️).. and hugged her..🤗

Dilshad: god bless you beta..😊

Now its asad turn..Dilshad said the same thing to asad tooo..😊

Asad: ammi mujhe lagta hai.. who abhi mere saath comfortable nahi hai..😕

Dilshad: waise tum toh aise keh rahe ho jaise tum bahut comfortable ho.. Asad its your responsibility to make her comfortable.. do some efforts beta.. now you are married.. kab tak mein tumhe samjhati rahugi..🤔

In ASYA room..

Asad is working on his laptop.. when his door knocked.. he sees zoya with a coffee mug..

Asad: Aapne kab se door knock karna seekh liya..???(teasing her😉)

Zoya: thts a limit.. Pehle mein nahi karti thi toh aap mujhe itna lamba lecture dete the.. Ab mein kar rahi hu toh..but Asad interrupts her

Asad: now its your room also.. so there is no need of it..😊

Zoya: oh yes.. mein toh bhul hi gayi thi..🤪

He show her cupboard and try to help her in placing clothes but Zoya refused..

Zoya: its ok.. Asad...it hardly take 5 min to place my clothes.. And she started to throw her clothes one after another..

Asad: this is how you keep your clothes.. you are impossible.. and leaves for some work..

In the evening.. when asad comes to his room.. he sees Zoya cupboard slightly open.. and than he sees that her clothes is beautifully placed now..😃 (I think this had taken her whole day..)

Zoya says.. ab theek hai na...😊 standing behind Asad..

waise in morning.. I was teasing you.. 😳sorry.. But I know you want to help me in the morning.. But you also have some urgent work to do.. i know you don't like the mess.. and you leaves..

Asad: no work is more important.. than you..😳 (Zoya was about to go.. but asad grabbed her hand.. and want her to stand close to him..😉) I want to give you something.. Zoya confused😕He puts the engagement ring back in her finger and Asad kissed her hands.. mitwa ishq pe zor nahi..(eye lock).. 😉

Than there door knocked.. And najma called them for dinner.. they all silently finished their dinner and headed to their rooms😊

Asad and Zoya said Good night to each other..😃 (but in their thoughts.. they both were saying the same thing..."hamara kuch nahi ho sakta".. As they both disappointed with themselves..)😕

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