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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
FOR A FIRST TIME, YOUR STORY IS GREAT AND QUITE BOLD
BOTH MAN AND GEET ARE INVOLVED WITH OTHERS
MAAN HAS BEEN DOING IT FOR YEARS BUT I STILL THINK GEET IS JUST PRETENDING
AM GLAD THAT GEET LEFT HIM AND TOOK AWAY THE CHILDREN - HE DOESNT DESERVE THEM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Dear u r r8. I really hate dis maan.
He never cared.
Nyc update.
Clear my confusn. Read my prev. Comment.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
hmmm.
your're awesome with these things
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
omg... maan is so heartless and dont care about his own kids and slapped jeh. That was so mean and glad that geet left maan andliving her life with her kids. Awesome story dear and congrats on your first FF. Continue soon dear and thanku for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Wow loved the update
But heartwrenching pls update soon the maan part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
part 2
nice part...
OMG what a character he is...
disgusting...
poor Geet...
so thats why the kids are not attached to him...
deserves him right...
damn him...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: priya_21

Dear u r r8. I really hate dis maan.
He never cared.
Nyc update.
Clear my confusn. Read my prev. Comment.


hey priya.😊
thanks.😃
well dear if u read the concept. maan accuse her that she is cheating on him with jake. and in 1 chap i mention that they are just bestfriends. so she didnt cheated.
sory for late reply...😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
PART 3
Maan s POV

Its have been 6th months since she has leave the house. She has left me!

I just got another drink n starting drinking it. I always wanted freedom from her and now when I have it I feel incomplete and I feel restless.

WHY?

I walked into my mansion all things were same but never felt like home like it use to be 6 months ago.

I have been with Sam but never spent a night outside I was always at home till 12. I felt good to see Kajal and Jeh roaming here there but I hate it when they annoy me.

I called Nakul for my coffee. Few minutes later he handled me a cup of coffee.

I sipped it and felt disgusted I was use to drink coffee made by geet. I never tasted the coffee as good as before in these 6 months. I came to know about that night when Geet left the house. And I felt little guilt in me. No, not guilt but sympathy for geet. She must be in worst condition she just knows how to cook thats it.

I think she is not educated enough to survive she will come back I know.

And geet I will teach her a good lesson for cheating on me. And that bf of hers I just hate him.

But he is getting married next week. May be they broke up or that disgusting person is having extra martial affair with my dam wife.

And the divorce papers. She sent me the divorce papers. But I will not give her the freedom. Off course not. Reason because I dont know but she is my dam wife. And divorce will make my reputation go down yeah thats why. But I hate her.

The next day

I was getting late the dam client why the hell did he arrange meeting in a restaurant. A mere restaurant!

I attend the meeting and the deal was mine once again.

I was just exiting the restaurant then I saw a man with his kids eating ice cream. Kids were having fun and he was just admiring them.

I just felt something I was trying to remember the time I have spent with my kids.

I am blank.

I just remember them being with geet all the time.

May be I was too busy for them. But they are my blood and I want them back.

I want my kids back.

I know that geet must have turned them against me.

I love them I just gave them everything. They had worlds every toy with them. I have given them enough pocket money then why they always stayed away from me?

That geet, lord I hate her.

I just called my most trusted employ and hire them to find out MY kids.

I hate returned to home and went into my kids rooms.

I remember when Kajal was born I was quite upset.

But thats Geet fault I always wanted a boy to look after my business help me with it not a girl whom I have to marry of to someone.

I was not the first person to hold her not it was not my fault I was busy with a meeting when she was born.

That geet everything was planned by her.

That middleclass filth always created distance between me and my kids.

And Jeh he is a disaster. Always doing something that is not acceptable for me. If I just deny him he just cries. But he is the heir of my empire and I want HIM back. I dont want my kid to be like her.

I just fell asleep in that room that was painted blue and pink with lots of toys.

The next day-

I had some peaceful sleep in this room may be off course of my KIDs things are still here.

I got fresh up and when I saw my mobile I saw several miscalls and messages

I forgot date with Sam last night.

Not my fault she must have reminded me again last evening.

I dont care Its not the first time I have forgotten a date. Sam should understand.

I received another call that was from Adi.

Sir geet madam is..

I want to know about my kids that it.

Sir they are in Dubai, living in ABC apartment and studying in XYZ School.

And?

Yes sir?

And? What else tell me the full info?

Sir, thats the full info about your kids.

With whom they are living with Adi?

Sorry sir with geet madam and she is working in CS company as a secretary.

OK.

After called Adi murmured

Stranger man! But my boss (corrected his specs)

Precap - I DONT KNOW.

hey guys...!!!

my 12th standard is starting from tomorrow.. so updates will be little late.

GEET NEVER CHEATED ON MAAN. (some of u asked this)

please give your views by comments.

and thank you all for liking my work this really means alot for me.

Like the update if u like this part 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Wah kitna alag soch ta hain maan...😡


Nice Update


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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
wow maan and his thinking
great he just want to see what he want to see nothing else

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