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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
OMG...OMG...Mihi...
Its amazing...i loved it when u sent me the 1st part...the continuation is ever more awesome...i loved her hesitation..her pain...the pain..n fear of rejection..which holds her back from confessing...
She is not sure if he loves her...or she is just a frnd...her confusion..aprrehensions...beautifullly portrayed😊
loved rey ...he gave them some private time and went out with kriya...her contemplation about his feelings...was lovelyyy...
she finally decided to confess...she even spoke the 1st few words...but fate was against it...the call..his happiness over his dream coming true...i knew it...she won't be able to confess..
he asked her if she will miss him...i have a feeling...he loves her as well..and dont want to commit as he is going away
LOVED IT...awww...it was beautiful...
A request..plz continue this & give a proper ending😳
ps- U r amazing as a writer
Luv
Deep
oi----
why is this still incomplete?
complete it----somehow----happy ending pleej? puppy face mihi?😭
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