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It was so beautiful! 🤗
I feel like Sharon all the way reading this OS because my eyes were full of tears but i somewhat managed that they won't drop till the very last of the OS and it worked.
I loved this OS, though i am a much of disliker of sad or tragic concept because i end up crying. Sharon was the playing heart broken role and it was quiet nice to read because all the time it is role reverse to Swayam only. The way you penned down the characters of both of them and how you showed Swayam was immensely amazing. I loved it when Sharon after all her might couldn't tell Swayam that how much she loves him, it was painfully beautiful.
Amazing OS, pup!
PS: I want to know if i can get a permission from you to write a sequel OS on this one shot? It won't be all happy happy ending but humor.
-Marium
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