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Posted: 11 years ago
#31



wow lovely emotional start.. so geet is leaving my maan with her kids , and my maan without knowing anything drinking and hating his geet, but wen he realize he is to one who will regret and drown in his guilty.. i love te update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Nice part ...

geet feeling betrayed and thought to leave him...

taking children too...

going to jakes ??? mighht be he is friend only...

didn't like maan...

thnx for pm dear

cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start
Maan cheated but got angry whn he got to knw abt geet...
Typical man...
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
fabulous start. superb. maan cheated geet and he thinks geet also did it. curious to know y he cheated her and under what circumstances. i think geet did right by leaving him.
plz tell us the age of the girls . waiting for next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Geet really cheated maan. I mean, she slept with someone, 4 proving his deeds.
Nyc update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
part 2

After 6 months!

Geets POV

Night is still the same and days are passing in same pace then why I m so incomplete? Yes I loved that guy who was my husband n I sent divorce paper to him 3 months ago then why I havent received them back signed? I had expected that he will sign without any second thought then why its taking so long?

Am I expecting them to come back to me? No! That was not true I hate him now. I still remember the night I had find out about my first pregnancy my Kajals existence in me but I had told him his reaction was unexpected?

Yeah he was always unexpected!

Flashback: 8 years ago.

I was happy but my eyes were wet. I was feeling a different zeal. Now I had only one thing in my mind to tell Maan about OUR baby. The proof of our Love. It was only 5 months to our marriage and everything was little confusing about Maan but I believe that it happens in all arrange marriages. First one month was our wedding was hell for me. Maan didnt even glance at me I felt confused because I have always dreamt of my SR on first day itself but it didnt come that way it took my all effort in one month to make Maan use to of me. Then it come of our love which started in the mid of 2nd month of marriage and believe me its was like a dream come true. But I never felt love in his touch it felt so physical but I brush that thoughts off and said to my self, Maan loves me to the same extend as I do.

I entered in my mansion and in our room. It has the essence of our togetherness. I blushed and wear his favorite color sari and straighten my hairs down, wear the diamond earrings I got from dadi and a bracelet which was from a friend of mine. Painted my lips as pink gloss and lined my lines with kohl. Kohl Kajal OMG if its a girl then I will name her as Kajal and if boy then uff I will think about that later. I walked to lounge and waited for him. Seconds turns into minutes and minutes into hours. I didnt knew when I fell asleep. When I woke up from a sound it was Maans car I was so excited and hugged him tightly. Then I had a reality check he pushed me saying I m tried! Was our relation only about physical? I brushed my thoughts and give him the news blushing between my words then he said OK.

I felt like a slap on my face just OK. Not even a smile?

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My thoughts were disturbed by the sobbing of Jeh. I walked to him n took him in my embrace.

Geet- what happened son?

Jeh- dad sorry I didnt do that intentionally daddy sorry it was a mistake.

I just closed my eyes. Again same nightmare? It was a nightmare of my son no nightmare of me also? How can a father be so heartless?

*******

Flashback: 1 year ago.

Jeh is 5 now. My naughty son! It was fathers day and my son has made a card for Maan but he havent come yet and he is making my life hell no not hell but sweet hell Kajal has also made a card with a small decorative showpiece of fathers day with her own pocket money only a 7 year girl is soo matured I feel proud of her. I have ice cream as a bribe to Jeh to please be in peace for at least 10 minutes. Maan have arrived Jeh was so excited he rushed to him and next I heard was a slap sound.

WHAT THE HELL IS THIS?

I went running there and saw my Jeh was crying and there was a red mark of his chubby face .

What happened here?

OH GOD? Can u believe it? Cant u handle a kid also geet? Are you this immature? He has spoiled my file with this dam ice cream. My workers have spent hours on this dam file and YOUR son has spoiled it.

I took Jeh in my embrace.

Sorry Maan but Jeh was excited for fathers day he has made a card for you.

A bloody nonsense card in not as worthy as a million dollar project.

And he walked away.

Jeh- dad sorry I didnt do that intentionally daddy sorry it was a mistake.

******

The next morning

I took Kajal and Jeh to school.

N I went to my office.

I lived in Dubai now and left London permanently.

I have a job as a secretary in a company and I earn enough for me and my kids to survive and rent apartment in good society.

Precap- Maan.

hey guys! i know u hate this Maan but believe me i will give a happy ending i cant see my Maaneet separated too..😭

Kajal is a girl and Jeh a boy . kajal is 7 + and jeh 5+

and do leave your comments bad or good all are accepted after this update 😆😉

do like the update if u like the part. 😃


Edited by sweetgirls1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
heyy buddy i like ur guts soo much at 1st attempt you have chosen this story
well maan being heartless ruthless oops i like this phase
and ur doing awesome work also
and maan loves some one but he came close to geet
i really dont get it why always man thinks girls as chiks will play with them
will shatter their dreams and maan reaction after knowing geet pregnant
he is really soo cold if he loves some one he can give divorce right
then whta makes him come close to her to satisfy himself uff
and what he slapped jeh how pathetic that small heart got soo much pain

it was written so awesome loved it good going
Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
ye kaisa maan hai, hate him for doing all this
but as u said u will give a happy ending then for sure maan sudhre jayega, haina
will be waiting for the next part...
update soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
my like button is not working now
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
thanks for adding me in pm list

thanks
Poonam

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